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Part - XXII

Days started passing from the day Geet came to stay with Maan'' Geet and Anvesha also gelled a lot with each other''.. Geet use to help Anvesha in her college studies''.. The bonding of Geet with Anvesha, Vicky, Savitri and off course our Maan increased day by day''

Maan, Geet and Vicky use to go office together ''

The office people were not aware that Geet was staying with Maan''.. Sasha use to get irritated seeing Maan being friendly with Geet'' She always use to make some plan to hurt Geet but Geet would either be saved by Vicky or Maan before even plan was implemented'..

OFFICE

Geet was very much engrossed in her work''.. Vicky came in Geet's cabin''..

Vicky knocks the cabin of Geet'..

Geet without even looking up: Come in''

Vicky (teasing): Madam can I have my lunch'..

Geet (self talk without even looking up): Yeh kaun hai'' Why is he asking me'''.

Geet sees that it is Vicky'''.

Geet: Vicky kya mazak hai''.. Mujhe kyu pooch rahe ho tum''..

Vicky: Madam you are so engrossed in your work that you did not even realised the time that it is a lunch break'' Chalo have something''..

Geet: I will finish this work and then have it'' you go and have''..

Vicky: Are you sure you will have it''

Geet: Vicky I will finish this work in 10 minutes and have it definitely'' Tum ja ke kha lo'''.

Vicky: Khana kha lena''

Geet: Ha'.

Vicky leaves and sends some food in her cabin'' The peon keeps food on the side table and leaves''

Geet is still engrossed in her work''' Maan was passing by her cabin'. And he noticed that Geet has not yet had her food ''

Maan entered Geet's cabin'... but Geet did not noticed Maan''

Maan was silently watching her working or rather to say he was admiring her innocent beauty''' He stood there for 5 minutes''' Her hair was falling on her face which was disturbing her lot''.. He went besides her and puts her hair behind the ears'' Geet who was working felt someone's hand but by just touching the shiver ran through her body''..

Geet got up with a jerk and saw Maan standing in front of her'.. Maan's hand was still on her face'. She was feeling him'' They were starring each other''.. They were lost in each other's eyes'''

They were there in that position for sometime but got disturbed by the phone '''

Both came into reality and Maan quickly removed his hand from Geet's face''

Geet picked her mobile which happened to be a wrong number''''.

Geet: Who sir aap yaha''.. you wanted something''..

Maan then realised that why he came to Geet's cabin'''

Maan: Who ha mera matlab hai nahi''..

Geet: Ji'.. I did not understand''..

Maan: Why have you not eaten your food yet'''.

Geet (looks at the food kept on the table): Actually I will finish this work and have food'''..

Maan: You know what the time is???? Its already 3.00 p.m. '' Leave all this and have food first'''

Geet: I will have it sir'''

Maan (in fake angry tone): Chalooo...

Geet went and they sat on the couch''..

Maan had a smirk smile'''

Geet (in her mind): Jab dekho tab gussa karte rehte hai'''

Maan: Geet you said something'''

Geet (shocked) (in her mind): Hey Babaji inhe kaise pata chala''..

Geet: Kuch nahi sir''

Geet: Sir aapne khana khaya'''

Maan: Who mai'''..

Geet: So even you have not had your food''' aur muj par gussa kar rahe the''

Maan: I will have afterwards'''

Geet: No ways'''. We will have together'''

Maan was happy with Geet's gesture''

Geet took two plates and started serving food in both the plates''. While Geet was serving food Maan was just looking at her'''

Geet and Maan both smiled at each other and started having their food''

One person who noticed all this was Meera who had come to meet Vicky as they had to go out''

Meera was very happy seeing both of them''.. She immediately went to Vicky's cabin'''

Meera: Hiii Vicky'''

Vicky: Hiii Darling''' where were you so long??? I am waiting for you for last hour'''.

Vicky noticed that she is very happy'''.

Vicky: Meera what is the matter'''.. You seem to be very happy today''

Meera: Ya Vicky I am very very happy today'''.

Vicky: Why??? Let me guess because we are going out right''..

Meera: No stupid that we always go'''

Vicky: Then what makes you so happy today'''

Meera tells everything to Vicky about Geet and Maan having there food together and enjoying each other's company'''

Vicky: What are you saying Meera???? Bro and Geet having lunch together''''.

Meera: Ya Vicky and the care, the love for each other can clearly be seen in each other's eyes''''..

Vicky: Wowww''.. That means they have developed feeling for each other''' I am really happy to see Bro happy'''

Meera: Vicky we should do something for them'' Un dono ko ek karne ke liye kuch to krana padega...

Vicky: You are right Meera we have make such a plan where Bro and Geet can spend more and more time together''''.

Precap: Maan - Get lost from here'''



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Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
loved it
awww maaneet together eating n caring 4 each other
vicky n meera cupid loving it
omg precap
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
they r now getting close...

lovely...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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