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Posted: 13 years ago


wonderful update...koi mr. Iyer ko samjao they are not engaged but will get after some time...aakhir woh bane hi ek-doosre ke liye hain...

Sasha poor girl she does so much planning to keep Geet away from Maan but ended up bringing them together...

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Posted: 13 years ago

READ ALL THE PARTS IN ONE GO ... LOVED IT. CONTINUE SOON

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basically i like to read all ur updates and today its excellent thanks deart
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was a great update
so maan is slowly getting attracted towards geet
geet ka idea to pakka successful hoga m sure
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thank you so much for all your likes and comments...


I hope you all are liking it...


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Part XII

Maan Home

Savitri Devi sees Anvesha coming on a bike with Arjun''..

Anvesha: Hi Mom

Savitri Devi: (In an angry tone) Anvesha I want to talk to you???

Anvesha : What happen Mom'. Why are you so angry

Savitri Devi: Who was that guy with whom you came just now???

Anvesha: Mom who who '''.

Savitri Devi: Mai kuch puch rahi hu Anvesha kaun tha who'' Mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe Maan se baat karni hi padegi

Anvesha: nahi Mom bhai se kuch mat kehna... actually mom who mera college friend hai bus aur kuch nahi''

Savitri Devi: shirf college friend ya aur kuch bhi'. See Anvesha don't hide anything from me''..

Anvesha: No Mom seriously nothing else''

Meera comes and says Hi to both''' She notices that something serious talk is happening between the two''

Meera: Hello Aunty, Hi Anvesha'' kya baat hai any problem aunty

Savitri Devi: Nahi Beta aiye'..

Meera: kuch nahi aunty socha aap logo se kafi dino se mili nahi to agayi milne''..

All three generally talk about work, college etc'..

Maan and Vicky enters the home'' Vicky is happy to see Meera at home. Maan also seems to be in a happy mood

Vicky: Wow Meera tum yaha what a pleasant surprise''..

Meera: Mai tumse milne nahi ayi hu mai yaha aunty aur Anvesha se milne ayi hu'' Maan Bhai aur kaam karvaye isse aap'..

Savitri: Chalo humhe ek bahu to bohot hi pyari mil gayi hai'' Ab baari hai badi bahu ki''..

She looks at Maan face

Savitri: Kya baat hai Maan beta aaj bohot kush lag rahe ho''

Maan: Kuch nahi Mom bus aaj ka din acha gaya...

Savitri: ya kuch aur baat hai...

Maan: Kya Mom koi baat nahi hai''

Geet Home

Everyone had just finished their dinner and Geet went to her room'.

She has just entered the room''' and she hears the voice of Pari

Geet : Pari is waqt yaha kya kar rahi hai'.. she goes down and sees everyone is congratulating her''

Geet is shocked to see''..

Pari gives the invitation card'.. and says to all that you all have to come'.. and ask about Geet'.

Ranjana: Pari Beta who apne kamre mai hai use yeh jaan kar shock lagega''

Pari: ha aunty I know'.. who bohot gussa hone wali hai''

Sakshi: are yeh kya Geet to yahi hai''

Madan: Geet hume laga tu apne kamre mai hi hai'..

Geet: Ha papaji mai wahi thi who to Pari ki awaz sunkar niche ayi aur yaha to kuch aur hi chal raha hai'''

Pari: Hiii Geet''

Geet: Pari yeh sab kya hai'..

Pari: Geet actually everything happened so fast that I couldn't inform you'.

Geet: ha phones toh don't work only''.. and run away angrily

Ranjana: Pari jaao Geet bohot gussa hui hai lagta hai''

Pari: ha aunty abhi mai apne dost ko manake ati hu'' Maine kaam hi aisa kiya hai''

Pari goes to Geet room

Pari: Sorry Geet''. Naraz ho kya'..

Geet: nahi nahi bohot kush hu''. Mithayian baat rahi hu aaja khane ko...

Pari: sorry yaar... and makes a baby face... yaar shirf engagement kar rahi hu shaadi thodi yaar sach mai sab kuch morning me hi decide hua aur mummy daddy ne insist kiya ki engagement kar lo'. Yaar sorry please man jaao na'.. Mummy bhi yahi keh rahi thi ki Geet ko bataya ki nahi''.. Please Geet sorry yaar''..

Geet: bus abhi kitna sorry bolegi'. Yeh bata jiju hai kaun aur kab hai engagement''

Pari hugs Geet tightly''

Pari: uska naam Arav hai... He is a doctor and who US rehta hai isliye to sab fatafat hogya fix'.. Who dad ke friend ke friend ka beta hai'' Actually he is here for some days so they decided that engagement kar dete hai'.. marriage can happen after 1 to 2 years''

Geet: Am so happy for you yaar''

Pari: Tumhe agle din raat se hi ana hai samji tum'.. Mom dad bhi yaad kar rahe the tumhari'.

Geet: yes maam''

Pari and Geet goes down and all are happy to see both of them'

Pari: acha Aunty, uncle mai chalti hu aap log ayega jaroor.

Anand: Pari beta mera aur bhai sahab ka ana to muskil hai as we have to go out of town for a day for business meeting and tumhari chachi aur aunty to gurudwara me jayegi who bade saheb ayege us din'..

Madan: But Geet ayegi na humari taraf se''..

Pari: Uncle, aunty kya aap log bhi'.

Ranjana: Pari Beta but hum shaadi me jaroor ayege jab kabhi hogi tab''

Next day in office

Geet goes to Maan's cabin

Geet: May I come in Sir

Maan: without even looking up'. Yes

Maan notices Geet: Ha Geet bolo

Geet: Sir I need off for 2 days'''

Maan: But kyu Geet''.. What about the project''.

Geet: I will complete that''.. But I need 2 days off''

Maan: I am asking you the reason'''.

Geet: Sir'''..

Geet was about to say and that very moment Savitri enters Maan's cabin

Savitri: Maan Beta

Maan: Aare Mom aap yaha''.

Geet: Hello Maam''

Savitri: Aap to''..

Geet: Maam aap bhul gayi lagta hai mujhe''' Mai aapko interview ke din mili thi''

Savitri: Ya ya I remembered now''' Geet right''

Geet: yes Maam

Savitri: Geet Beta Maam nahi aap mujhe Aunty bulaye'' Mujhe yaha sab aise hi bulate hai''..

Geet: Ok Maam I mean Aunty''' Mai chalti hu''.

Geet leaves''

Savitri: Badi pyari bachi hai''.. hai na

Maan: Ji Mom'

Savitri: Chalo kisi baat mai to sehmati bani aapki aur humari'

Maan: Mom I did not answered you for that''

Savitri: To Maan Geet pyari nahi hai kya'''

Maan: Mom maine aisa nahi kaha'''.. chodiye use why have you come here''.

Savitri: Nothing I was just passing so thought of stopping here''.

But you did not answered my question

Maan: Mom please stop this''.. you know me very well I have lot of work to do''.

Savitri: Ok am leaving I have many work to do'''

And walks off with a wicked smile'' (Self talk) Maan ko bura nahi laga itna chedne ke baad bhi''''

Maan after his Mom leaves: Geet is very sweet girl but zidd ki toh koi limit hi nahi hai'''

Precap: Maan admires the beauty of Geet''..



I Hope you all liking it... Will be waiting for all of your response...

Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update loved it cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update...

Totally loved it...

Precap is dreamy... maan admiring geet... 😳

Waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved the conversation between maan and his mother
Wateing for the next
Preacp is very interesting
Do continue soon

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