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part 12
Geet didn't resign?
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Part XIII

It was late evening and Geet was still working in office as she needed to complete the project

Adi Sir and Pinky enters the Geet's Room

Pinky: Geet you don't want to go home today'''.. It's already 7.30'..

Geet: Pinky no yaar just need to complete this today''. As we need to give the final sketch to Mr. Iyer''.. so that we can start our work as soon as possible''

Pinky: But you can do this tomorrow also'..


Geet: No Pinky I need to complete this


Adi: Geet do you want us to wait for you'''. I mean if you need any help from us''.


Pinky: Ya Geet Adi Sir is right''.. If you need any help we will wait''


Geet: No No Adi Sir, Pinky I will finish very soon''''..


Adi: But it will be very late'' Will you be able to go home alone''.


Geet: Ya Adi Sir I will manage'' It won't take much time I will leave early'.. You both don't worry'.

Adi: ok Geet'' Bye and take care''..

Pinky: Bye Geet


Geet: Byeee Adi sir, Bye Pinky

Geet called up home and told them that she will be late and not to worry'' and again she started working. Geet was very much engrossed in her work that she did not realize the time''. It was 9.30''''.


Maan just finished his work and was about to leave and he passed through Geet cabin and was shocked to see Geet still there in office''.


Geet was in her own world with pencil in her mouth and making drawings''..


Maan just looks at her from outside'''. He is totally stunn looking at her''.. He was admiring her'''


Suddenly Maan comes back to his senses''. And enters Geet cabin'


Maan: Pencil is for writing not for chewing'''..


Geet is shocked to see Maan and removes pencil from her mouth''


Geet: Sir aap''.


Maan: Geet ghar nahi jana hai aaj tumhe


Geet: Sir actually I was completing this''. It's just about to get over'


Maan: Geet you know what the time is?????


Geet: looking at the watch'' Oh shit its 9.30'.. I did not realized it''


Maan: Ya its 9.30''' You complete this tomorrow''..


Geet: ya'''


Maan: Geet Its already very late''' I will drop you home''


Geet: No sir I will manage''. I will take a cab''''


Maan: You won't find a cab also''. It won't take much time''' I will drop you home''..

Geet: No Seriously Sir'' I will manage''


Maan: Ok Geet''.. Aab chale'''.


Geet: Ha chaliye'''

Geet was searching for cab but she was not able to find it''.


Maan comes near Geet


Maan: Geet''..


Geet gets scared and turns''


Maan: Geet daro mat mai hu


Geet : Sir aap gaye nahi'..


Maan: How would I leave you alone and go''.


Geet: Sir what???


Maan: I mean'''.. I knew it that at this time you won't find cab''. Now come and sit in car'''.


Geet: Sir but'''


Maan: aab apni zidd chodogi and will you please sit in car''''. Or you want to be more late''.


Geet: no I will come''




Maan drops Geet home'''.


Geet: Thank you Sir


Maan: Its ok Geet


Geet: Why don't you come inside''..


Maan: No some other time'''' Bye Good Night


Geet: Bye Sir. Good Night'. Thank you once again'.


Maan Home


Savitri: Maan beta aaj bohot late ho gaya aapko'..


Maan: Ya mom actually I had some work''..

Vicky: Bro I was trying your cell''.. you never answered my call'.. and I also tried our office no'. you were not there'''.


Savitri: Maan you had meeting outside''..


Maan: No Mom was in office only and then went to drop Geet home'..


Savitri: Ohhh so that's the real reason that you are late'.. anyways get fresh dinner is ready''..


Maan (self thought): She is such a hard working girl'''. (Maan sees Geet face with pencil in her mouth) and smiles


Geet Home


Madan: Geet Beta aaj badi der kardi ane mai


Geet: Ya Papaji I had called Home''.. I had to complete that project as then I will take leave for Pari's engagement''.


Anand: Ok Ok ''' Now go and get freshen up''.. we are waiting for you for dinner''.


Geet (self thought): Maan Sir itne bhi bure nahi hai''.. thode Hitler type hai but he is so helpful'''..

Precap: Pari's Engagement (Maan and Geet face to face)


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Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome
maan apko pyar ho gya hai geet se

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
both feeling differently for each other
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Wow maan thinking about geet and smiling... Hmmm so lovely and geet thought maan was hitler type..? Thanks for the pm continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago



Superb Ana 😛

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