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So Much Guys for all your likes and comments...

I hope you all are liking it...

Updating Part XI...



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PART XI

Conference Room

Everyone was already there in the conference room''' Maan enters the room and the meeting starts'''.

Maan: Hello Mr. Iyer

Mr. Iyer: Hello Mr. Khurana.

Maan: So can we start with the meeting'

Mr Iyer: Ya before that I would like to tell you something Mr Khurana we know that your company is a reputed one. But we would like to also inform you that our Hotel should be unique from everyone else''

Maan: Mr. Iyer don't worry it will be totally different'

Mr. Iyer: We believe you and we have seen your past work also that's the reason we are here so can we see the presentation first'..

Maan: Mr. Iyer we suggest that lets first discuss the finances part and then we can see the outlook of your hotel'.

Mr. Iyer: As you wish Mr. Khurana

Maan and Adi started discussing the financial part of the project with them '' they wanted to prolong it as much as possible as Geet was still going through the file'''. The finances were all over now they were waiting for the rough outlook for the hotel and Maan and Adi gets worried as Geet had still not come''. Maan with his eye contact ask Adi about Geet and tells him to call her'.

Mr. Iyer: Mr. Khurana we are ok with your finances part'. I have also discussed with my colleague even they are ok with it'. So now can we have a look at rough sketch''..

Maan: Ya Mr. Iyer why not sure

Maan was getting tensed as Geet was still not there in the conference room and Adi who had gone to search Geet had also not written

Sasha thought I should take advantage of this and Geet ko nicha dikha sakte hai'.

Sasha: Mr. Iyer we have our rough planned ready see I will go show you the outlook of it'''

And she tries to open the file and Geet enters''.. Loking at Geet Sasha makes faces and self talk humesha ahi jati hai galat waqt pe'''

Maan gets relaxed looking at Geet.

Geet: Sorry sir for making you all wait

Mr. Iyer: Oh its ok Ms''..

Geet: Geet sir'..

Maan: Geet Mr. Iyer and his team wants to see the rough sketch''

Geet nods her head'..

Geet start showing them the sketch''

Geet explains them in minute detail how it will look and what all things it will contain''

At point such situation arose where one of the team member of Mr. Iyer ask Geet that why cant we have a surrounding of some different kind then what are you showing at present'..

Geet: No sir it wont look good''

Till the end Maan was also with Geet in all facts but even he did not like the idea of surrounding of Geet was trying to portrait''..

Maan: I think Geet they are right this surrounding will not go with the structure''

Geet: no sir this will look good after everything is done''' This is the rough sketch but once it is finalized this will surely go well''..

Maan and Geet without realising that they are in conference they both go into the argument'''.

While Mr. Iyer and his team was enjoying this Sasha just cant see this so she interrupts'.

Sasha: Geet when everyone is telling why you don't listen to what they are saying'.. Tum apni manmani hi karti rahogi


Maan and Geet realises that they are in meeting

Mr. Iyer: Ms. Sasha I think we should wait till the time we see the final sketch'' may be what Ms. Geet is saying may turned out to be really nice''.. Mr. Iyer turns around to his colleagues and says What say????

His colleagues agree to it'..

Sasha (self talk): pata nahi is ladki mai aisa kya hai jo sab log iski baat mante hai'''.😡

Mr Iyer looks at Maan and Geet and say: Can I ask some personal question if you both don't mind''..

Maan: Ya Mr Iyer why not sure''..

Mr. Iyer: Are you both engaged????😉

Maan and Geet both shocked and looks at each other and says NOoo''.😳😲

Mr. Iyer: Its ok mujhe aisa laga aap dono ki bonding dekh kar'' and they way you both were fighting and trying to explain to each other''.

Maan: No Mr. Iyer it not like that''..

Mr Iyer: OK Mr. Khurana we shall take your leave and this project is yours now'.. I think I have given it in the right hand'..

Maan: Thank you Mr. Iyer

They all depart'''

Geet goes to cabin of Maan

Geet: May I come in Sir'.

Maan: Yes without looking up

Geet: Sir this is my resignation letter'..

Maan: Geet I thought we have already discussed about it'..

Geet: Sir but I never agreed to it'''..

Maan takes a letter from her hand and cuts into pieces

Maan: Geet you are not going any where'' I need you and the silent'.. I mean this company needs you. I don't want to lose a good architect like you''' Am once again sorry for it''

Geet: Sir but '''

Maan: Geet am not going to listen to anything now go and complete the project'''.

Geet leaves and Maan self talk: kitni ziddi ladki hai yeh''' jo baat pakad ke baith jati hai baith hi jati hai'''. but she is good''



Precap: Geet angry on Pari'''



I Hope Guys you all are liking it... Will be waiting for your response...

Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
best part r u both engaged
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Posted: 13 years ago



Fantastic Part 👏
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HI ana its very nyc and good too ..as usual maaneet at their cute fi8... wow!!!!!!!!!waiting 4 the update...

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