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layna

@layna

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

why did u do this to me?? i'm in tears marvee. how can you write something so beautifu, i hate you ❤️

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

...😛

1stly 4 PM me...😃

u did a ...😳

as well as dear...👏👏👏

dear...4 ur updates dear...😃

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just ..

...😃

really ur updates...😃

4 ur future updates dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️... tons of ...4 u dear...😳 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕 Note: guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

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PoojaMishty

@PoojaMishty

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Its amazing dear!!!!

Waiting for more OS from u..

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anks_ams

@anks_ams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

just loved it.. awesome piece of work:)

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

that was absolutly beautiful marvee

i was literally crying for geet at the beginig poor girl

all alone and no support

the end was awsome ...the middle was awsome and actually everything was beyond awsome

u should write more os

but i absolutly beyond loved it

thax for the pm

raina u seriously made myday

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akshaya1231

@akshaya1231

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Super!! 👏
it was awesome!! so so sooo interesting.. 👍🏼
every line brought a different thaught in my mind..
Will be waiting for your other os..really soon! 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Hi Marvee...thanks 4 da pm! Congrtas on ur first OS! It was beautifully written. Emotional, intense, painful n happy! All in one! Geet wanted Maan's baby n decided to let Maan sleep wid Sasha so Saha can have their baby! Poor Geet, cld nt become a mother! She agreed only for Dadi n the family! Bt Maan did nt agree as he knew his Geet! Waiting 4 another OS from u!