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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

That was amazing! I loved it! I knew he was inside! :)

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

"And if we're dead and in heaven; well who the hell cares because I love it,"---this line touched my heart.

Marvee I think u have taken oath that whether ur OS are sad or happy u will surely make ur readers cry... very soul touching OS and very beautiful perfect end.

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m-g19

@m-g19

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

that was simply beautiful os.

i think u shd wrt dm more offn ,

lkng 4wd 4 more lighter, naughtier plots.

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Can we have an epiloque ...please ...

and may i add the song was PERFECT ! ...fit it sooo perfectly!

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

lovely update

👏👏👏

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Lovely OS

loved it so much

thanks for pm

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Wow Marvee really brilliant OS!! Loved reading it a lot!!! The concept was also really awesome! Definitely do write more OS!

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

that was beautiful...i didnt doubt maan at all...i knew he would never go through with it and sleep with sasha...chi! Dadi...i can understand...usse toh aapni khandaan ki padi hai...but Geet's mother...tauba...what is wrong with her? she is advising her daughter to ler her husband spend a night w/ a woman to concieve a child...i think in this day and age we all know that once isnt always enough!! and what is she nuts!! she thinks the media will go crazy over a test-tube baby or surrogate? but not the fact that MSK slept with another woman to have a child...ridiculous i tell ya!!! ...enough of my rant..i just had to vent...but i know you did it for purposes of the story...which...i loved!! its sad that many women cant have children...and our desi society wont let them forget it!!

JAZ

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

awesome os
thanks 4 the pm

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Tesha

@Lov26

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Awesome OS!!! 😊😊😊

I'm touched by your lovely story which is the reality for some women but like your story I have usually seen the couple overcoming their hard time with lots of love. Hopefully this will always be the case.

I agree and absolutely love this line : "rishtey pyaar se bantay hain, khoon say nahi. Blood may be thicker than water but blood can sometimes hurt us, love never can."