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gangesegb

@gangesegb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

congratzzz on new one...

just loved it...

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

awesome OS...

loved reading it...

thnx for PM...

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Shalini

@shalini01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

marvee this was amazing, please do more 😃

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

hey

lovely os,,

thanks for pm dear..

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Love the os, and the song selection is perfect for it. Poor Geet was in such turmoil. But i love how you conveyed the depth of their love through your writing.
Thanks for the pm.

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

hiii

congrats on ur 1st os

loved it

loved da concept

poor geet

loved maaneet

he is da best husband

loved da ending

cute

plz do write more

thanks 4 da pm

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

it was beautiful :-)
made me cry nd laugh at da same time

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

it was awesome OS
really loved it...
haye geet pahle bol deti ki sirf aur sirf Geet ka hai tu, tu itna pain thodi na hota
thanks for sharing such an lovely OS dear

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

wow fabulous os luvd it

totally amazin fanx 4 da pm xx

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Your First OS...👏
Interesting concept...
Beautifully potrayed Geet's feelings.Every words was emotionally explained.
Feelings sad for Geet... she would have been going to hell in those few hours.
Am really shocked with Daadi n Geet's mom.
I understand Daadi's situation but how could her own mom force Geet to allow her husband spent a night with another lady. Didnt she see the pain in her daughter's eye.. She was begging to them.
Geet was so helpless.. She need to go along with their idea so that there will a child from Maan's own blood.
The ending was superb. Maan will only be Geet's. He came before her. Knowing that she will come to their love filled cottage.
thx for the pM...

You should write more OS... Its beautiful...