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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

ossum dear

superb

no words to say dear

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avantika

@avantika_singh

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

AMAZING ONE MARVEE

OUTSTANDING AND CAN'T DESCRIBE IT IN ONE WORD

FABULOUS

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sky_86

@sky_86

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

wowww..thats was awesome but a marvee OS? ..hmmm lets just say i prefer your FFs...please update awaken me and SOMS...SO LONG AS U UPDATE THEM MORE OFTEN ..U R FREE TO TO WRITE AN OS..I DONT MIND..BUT FFs are more your forte..i love your attention to every nuances of characters that u portray...

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

AHHH!!!

that was amazing, wonderful, and fantastic!!

it was suspenseful a little and i LOVED THAT

and i knew that Maan would never do that!

It was simply breath taking...

I was little mad at dadi and Geet's mom for a whole but all is well now!!

Thanks for this wonderful OS...

it was an wonderful read!!!!!!

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Your First OS was just tooo good... amazing... i loved it to the core...

Story line was totally different... Really you had beautifully portrayed the characters.. especially Geet...

Hell is what she goes through in that few hours... trust me i felt sympathized and empathized with her soul because of the way you had written... just wonderful...

And MSK... wow... I wish we see such characters in real life too... The love that is beyond anything...

You can explain a lot in detail in FF... but in OS it needs to be short, sweet and to the point... and trust me nothing was missing... it was perfect...

Continue writing such different concepts as OS...