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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: princess163

okay, i know the previous comment was RUDE.

i mean , i didn't say anything about the update, just asked for more, but, can I not be selfish today, please?
I have atest in a day and i am going crazy

yep i will be posting some more later tonight😆 I might as well finish FO off by tomorrow😆 of course epilogue will come later . . . and no ur comment wasn't rude😃 so chill😃 . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

yep i will be posting some more later tonight😆 I might as well finish FO off by tomorrow😆 of course epilogue will come later . . . and no ur comment wasn't rude😃 so chill😃 . . .

yayyy!
okay!
I will be waiting, and since I expect aashu to be here on time, I will tell her to taxt me when u update😉😆
Thanks!
but, FO ending??
i know you informed us long back but still!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: crazy_niddzz

hey sweetie...!!!😊


loved the update...!!!😛

so much has changed over d past 7 mnths...meha has started walking...thats the best part...!!!😳

NT is really happy wid rohan...well she deserves the happiness...!!!

annie is in town...haaye arjun ke liye...not bad...!!!ali re ali arjun ko partner milne mein bari ali...😆

pinky's imagination and thinkin went lil far thnkn that maan and geet are together again...but alas reality is sumthn diff...!!

annie is meha's doc and she helped her walk on her legs...!!!

maan is still on his duty..not bad...lage raho...!!!

seeing her dance wid arjun ...he thinks she deserves all the happiness but is still stuck in the past and wid him...lil does he kno he has no effect on her...!!!

they all danced in mismatch and finally how they came wid their destined partners ...life will also fall in place...*fingers crossed*

pammi abhi bhi zinda hai...babaji danger is still lingering...!!! koi nahi, she will be dead😆 actually m thinking whom to kill, Dev or Pammi . . .😆 may be both😆

maan just has to open his mouth and she wil forgive him and will b back in his arms but he has sumthn else in mind...!!!!!that is if he opens his mouth . . . He makes me feel sick Wait i am not supposed to say that . . . i wrote his insanity😆

abt the epilogue scene...even i would love to b surprised...pyara wala haan...no jhatkas...will love to read watever u write...but plz pammi ko meri taraf se do jor ke chate jaroor dena...!!!why would i give jatkas in epi . . . of course it was sweet and short😆 . . .

i want dev to gidgidaofy to have meha in his arms just 4 few mins...after initial denial...maaneet agree and den meha does porty on him...lol...i have lost it...yeh bhi koi batane wali baat hui...muski ko pata hai...lolhaha . . . Geet would never agree to let him even touch meha let alone hold her and i won't let her . . . and yes i know u are a darling😃

waise i was thnkn abt TL ka honeymoon and came to a conclusion that maaneet ek dusre ko moon ka pata nahi din mein starts jaroor dekhane wale hai. indeed, you know i like Tom n jerry😆..haaye cant wait...kitna kuch hai line mein...TL ka honeymoon, BSLS ka gay revelation , mera doggy talk (if thats considered and if muski can fit it sumwereyep sweetie, i am including it😃 after all dost ne bola aur main na karun yeh nahi ho sakta😆)...vicky ki dhulai in BSLS.bechara😆..arjun ki tuti haddiyaand his worse date😆...OMG..i m so excited...and to top the list we have paami ka murder exclusively bu muski...watch live on FO thread wen muski updates...stay tuned...picture abhi baki hai mere dost...!!you crack me up at times😆

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hey babaji...inka kya hoga..???you should be asking me that😉
maan actually asked her to move on wid arjunkuch toh normal kiya...woww...kya suggestion tha...lol...it killed him 1000 tyms to utter those words and to ask her to moce on but he did it ...just 4 her...i m ssly feeling bad 4 him now...geet was so shocked and angry...when she said who are u and wht=y shud u matter to me and why will i hold back my life 4 u ...vagera vagera to maan...,my heart actually went out 4 him...!!!che-riously u felt for maan . . . wopiieee😆 don't ask me why m laughing i do not know😆

he was right why wouldnt she doubt his love after what he has done to her...so much pain and agony..!!!

beautifully described muski...hats off to u...!!👏oye flatter karna band kar . . . don't me fly high

finally we kno that arjun-annie are together and maan was shocked at the revelation...geet told him jitna he shud kno...!!!

loved adi-pinky-annie...lol

geet cried...poor soul ...maan stabbed her heart all over again by suggesting her a life partner to move on wid...she can never stop loving him...even she knos that...!!that is how she has been throughout the story . . . she can nevr stop loving him😊

geets life really had depth ...lil does she kno its all not achanak...he is her shadow since past 7 mnths and is loving her keeping his distance...he was wid her at every poin of tym in past 7 mnths...!!!

They were both destined to be ruined . . . But it was him who brought the hurt down on them...muski this line was just awesome...maan will go in self hatredness mode if dis continues not that he is not hating himself now...but after hurting her again he will kill himself...plz bacha lo use...mere liye...hehehe is already in slep hatred mode . . wait he is in self destruction mode😆 haha bacha dungi jaldi kya hai . . .😉

elo...ali re ali knife chi bari ali...lol...ab geet aur gussa hogi...he is hurting himself instead of telling her the truth..he is keeping her in dark...she deserves to kno the truth...kaun samjhayega yeh maan ko...!!!sadly he won't tell her . . . and so annie and pinky n adi will come onto picture😆

i m feeling really bad 4 him know...only pammi's ruthless murder and give me peace after all the pain maan went thru...!!ruthless murder . . . me under pressure

annie has got brains...not bad...i m impreassed...finally geet will b wid maan and he will tell her everythin in unconcious state...just mah guess...me commenting live...so running to read the update...i m excited...high hopes😆 maan won't tell her anything😆 his mind is jammed and i am not that predictable Tongue

maan ne unconcious state mein kuch nahi kaha...babaji...mein galat direction mein energy waste kar rahi thiAww . . . koi baat nahi energy ka kya hai aati jaati rehti hai😆...geet accepted that she was in hospital 4 him...she cant see him in that state..!!!
wat the hell is maan upto obviouly uninteligent stuff😆...kyu haath ka naksha khrab karne pe tula haiMoron😡...is he out of his mind..???sadly yes😆

yippee loved the ordering geet...maan ki toh chup bilkul chup kardi...finally dey will talk...geet needs an explaination...yuhu yuhu...they will talk but not about what u think they would😆
pammi abhi bhi zinda hai...danger is still lingering...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
The words below the update excite me !!! ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ninand


Jeez.. now we cant have you thinking about cliffs and all sweetheart! quick.. go have a look at Geet from BSLT.. That nutcase will give you a new perspective and silly smile to sport.. quickly go. we can wait until then.

my kamina like button isnt workingOuch . . .
haha . . . Geet in BSLS is indeed a nutcase cutie😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
that was grooseer than the teaser! sob sob sob..itna torture???
i like ani here...! kuch to karegi...!
and i loved geets lines...
everyone deserves a second chance...nt found hers..i am sure maaneet will too!!
wth is dadima into this non intrefernce policy?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
u merciless creature u😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
yes yes... we will get some more... will be waiting for further update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Congratz 4 new thread dear,nice prtt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Started writing again . . . will start posting soon . . .

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