Fall Out ~MG~ 4 ~ LAST PART PG 23 07/09 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
😊it was awesome...but i have a wish dear please give us some happy moments in the present...rather than just ending the ff with both of them comin together...would luv to read some lovely scenes between them not in past but in present...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Teaser

"Keys" she cried as she rummaged through her purse.

Her fingers trembled as she pushed the key into the ignition. Her hands shuddered as she put car on gear and her legs shivered as she hit the accelerator. Holding the steering so tight that her veins throbbed, she drove at breakneck speed.

"Stupid idiot moron' what does he think of himself" she muttered to her herself, in frustration. As though he listens to everything she says. He did not listen when she begged him to tell her what mistake she had made. And now when she said a few words in anger he took it as God's verdict. Her own words reverberated in her ears while tears made their way down her cheeks.

Go die for all I care. At least then I will have some peace . . .

She would die if something happened to him. God no! Please no! Her heart bled with the thought that now when they were so close to happiness she may lose him forever. No! Nothing would happen, she won't let anything happen. Rubbing her cheeks with the back of her hand she mumbled incoherently "Why am I crying? He is fine. He will be fine and I won't cry. I won't think negative." Soon fresh tears cascaded down her face. Her snivels and muffled sobs restricted her breathing, while she felt a bile rise up her throat.

She braked outside the mansion and pushing open the car door, she dashed towards the house. She hit the bell repeatedly until the door opened. Disregarding anyone's presence around her she strode inside and towards the stairs. Taking two stairs at a time she climbed up as fast as she could.

She breathed heavily as she stopped at his room door. "Maan" she screamed in panic.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow super teaser ! So she is finally going to know some truths courtesy Annie and the lot eh ?..

But I still wanted this man to get spanked. seriously.😳 From the start hes behaved like a complete moron. From all that revenge and hatred just cause he wouldn't ask her for an explanation neither give one, to 'I wont forgive or forget( neither let you do that) drama, to the jealous rage, to this self-mutilating self-sacrificing crazy psychotic stalker avataar !

I tell you the man is just not normal!šŸ˜† Lord the kinds of things Geet has to out up with for having loved him !.. She deserves a Nobel Prize for it.


oh please do update soon! Can hardly wait.. But please can we have Geet deliver at least a couple of kicks to his melodramatic ass. ph pleeease!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome teaser cant wait for the update by the way when r u updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anushaarja

plzz jaldi make her forgive him... humse ye nahi hoga...šŸ˜•
yaar i can never trust u hahah u r so right......šŸ˜•šŸ˜•

ek palak mein ek baat kehti ho toh dusari pal mein u turn d events ... u noe totally ulta...😲 i thot der he go... confessing... well even if maan would have confessed he wouldn't told her the things he has been doing in the past seven months and a few othersšŸ˜† hence others will tell her😳 but no... u din't make him to... i think der is more torture 4 maan yet to come...🤢 challo ek batati hun, nothing worse is coming his way at least not from geet's side . . .
khair... plzz don't give cliff hangers my sweet li'l devil...😈😈😈 i was actually thing of giving a very bad cliff hanger but then maine socha itna bura bhi nahi banna chaihiye mujhe (of course you wouldn't have liked maan being shot) šŸ˜†mein latkana nahi chahti... u noe i fear of heights n cliffhangers...šŸ˜²šŸ˜•šŸ˜”*scared face* plzz daya karo aur update bejo...šŸ˜›u know i was in shillong for three years AND i LOVE heightsšŸ˜†... update will be up tomorow😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
looking forward to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG...!! breathing heavily after reading the teaser..!!!
She finally realized what she said in anger to him...but too late to realize...he already left...😭
oh god hope he does not hurt himself...!! 😭
muski ur such a tease......
plz now give us an update...!!
eagerly waiting for the update..!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Damn, woman - plz plz update soon - it's getting so spicy - I was sitting at the edge of my seat!! damn damn damn!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome teaser cant wait for the update by the way when r u updating

most probably tomorow😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Damn, woman - plz plz update soon - it's getting so spicy - I was sitting at the edge of my seat!! damn damn damn!!!

will update it by tomorrow . . . 😃
@Bani . . . tujhe aaj pata chala i m a tease...😲😲

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