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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Arwa a big sorry mai last part par bhi comment nahi kar paayi thi so here is a common comment for both the updates. Good updates. 👏 Sujal n Sheena kuch jyada hi pass aa gaye hain aur Sujal bhi acche se jaanta hai ki his magic always works to Sheena mana bhi nahi kar paati us ko kisi cheej k liye. 😉 Sheena itna tired thi fir bhi Sujal us ko apne saath party me le gaya kidnap kar k. 😆 In dono k romance ka cota to khatam hi nahi hota ab jahan dekho vahin start hain.😉 Par Sujal ko aise bet lagane ki kya jaroorat thi? Us ko kuch ho jata to Sheena ka kya hota? 😒 Thank god he is safe n i am agree with Sheena ka gussa. Song accha tha kaafi and dono ka romance to humesha hi mast hota hai. 😃 I hate that rascal. How dare he to misbehave with Sheena?😲 Jab ki vo acche se jaanta tha ki vo Sujal k saath hai. Good lesson Sujal gave him n it showed ki vo Sheena k liye kitna possessive hai. 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sujal bhi chahta hai kuch aage aur past 6 mnths me un ka rishta bahut strong hua hai to i am pretty sure ki ab dono apne relationship ka next step lenge.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey great that u updated and u know me how lazy i am with comments 😛 😛 😛. I always do this and u always forgive this that's y it has become my habit to take advantages. 😆 😆 😆


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Thank god Sujal is safe, just like everyone i said this too bcz v all care for him more. 😉 😉 😉

Sheena was so depressed and hell shocked and she doesn't know how to react.😭 😭 😭 All were highly panicked when they located his body just lying without any movement. and he came back with that victorious smile and obviously Sheena will be fuming over his careless attitude.😡 😡 😡 She was damn scared but he is Sujal Grewal who knows so well how to control her. 😳 😳 😳

They were so cute and romantic in all their romantic sessions. 😳 😳 😳

How dare that bas***d to do such thing with her? 😡 😡 😡 What he thought of her? 😡 😡 😡 But the best part was Sujal's attitude when he was about to kiss Sheena.👏 👏 👏 Firstly people adore this beautiful couple and now Sujal's attitude for that kameena proved that Sheena is a lot more than a gf who is with Sujal now a days.😃 😃 😃

Just like Sheena i too was overjoyed with his impulsive and perfect revert.
That dog deserved that. But thank god Piyush entwined at perfect moment otherwise this fight could have been taken a bad shape. 😈 😈 😈

The roar he had in his voice announced that Sheena has very very important part in his life. 😎
😎 😎

Finally they have completed half of the year 🥳
🥳 🥳 and that's y they were partying and Sheena was high on drinks obviously more than limited can create such effects.😆 😆 😆

The desires she used to hide every time were now shown perfectly now and Sujal also wanted that from a long time and i am sure that they will not be able to control themselves. ☺️
☺️ ☺️ But Sujal was right that neither the place nor Sheena's condition was perfect for that.

Try to update whenever u get time.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally i am happy n satisfied that Sujal is safe.😃 How dare he do it by scaring Sheena to hell? 😡 He must think about her as well before trying such acts.🤔 Sheena's anger was obvious and Sujal knew well too much how much he scared her. Vaise bhi Sheena yahan Sujal k saath hi aayi thi na. 😔 The party was nice n everyone was enjoying it n our SS r always busy with each other.😍 How cheap some ppl behave sometimes!😲 How could Kunal think that Sheena is such kind of gal? Sheena was giving him good lessons but i think this man needed a solid reply from Sujal and it was sufficient for him. Thank god Sujal reached on perfect time and Piyush controlled them.😛 Piyush bhi samajh gaya ki Sheena is really special for Sujal.😳 Celebration time wowww 🥳but when Sujal was in control than Sheena must b as well. Par Sujal to humesha sab samhal leta hai na.😉 update fast waiting for their romantic session.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks a lot
Sheena was so depressed and her heart nearly stopped when she saw him lying without any movement!!!! - yes she was really scared
But then Sujal grabbed her hand and pulled her inside the pool and kissed her underwater!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes it was a big surprise
Obviously Sheena was fuming over his careless attitude when he came up with that victorious smile on his face!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - anyone wud be angry at the situation
Thank God Sujal is fine and he surely had us all scared!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes after all he is the hero so he has to be alright
He literally scared the wits out of Sheena by pulling that stunt and he totally deserved the blows she gave him!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - he most certainly did
But he surely knows how to win her over and comforted her as she was crying!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 - he always knows how to woo the girl
He should think about Sheena before trying out such acts!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - well he is used to just thinking for himself
The song was very nice and perfect for the celebration!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks
Their dance was indeed very romantic and too sexy as each was leading the other on!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - their chemistry is quite gud
Sheena is crazy about Sujal and just being with him gave her all the energy for the party even though at first she wasn't in the mood!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes he rejuvenates her all the time
Kunal is such a loser and is eyeing Sujal Garewal's girlfriend!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 - make that big time looser
How dare that bas***d misbehave with Sheena and try to force her when she turned him down??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - are oski nazar hee ghandi hain to what u expect
He just wants Sheena in his bed anyhow and thinks she is that type of girl!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - yeh horrible man indeed
Sheena ne usse accha jawab diya and he totally deserved the tight slap she gave him!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes he did and she showed him his place
Why are the people so useless that they stare and do nothing at all when such a thing is happening??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - because that is their plain dumb mentality
Thank God Sujal the hero came in perfect time to save her and teach that dog a good lesson!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - hero's entry is always dramatic
I loved Sujal's comment when he smacked Kunal!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - and he comes with witty dialogues
Sheena was scared by the fight and had to get Piyush to stop Sujal before the fight took a bad turn!!!!! - yeh things had gone dirty
Sheena was very impressed by Sujal's passionate declaration to Piyush and the way he showed his authority on her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh it is something every woman wud luv to hear
This showed everyone how important Sheena is to Sujal and that she is more than just a girl he is dating!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - surely it showed more
She was overjoyed to see that he truly cared for her and hugged him tightly on an impulse!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 - she was overwhelmed
I loved Sujal's possessiveness of Sheena and he thinks of her as his!!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes he very much does
Piyush was very happy to see his friend so happy with Sheena and understood that she is really special for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - everyone cud see it
Too bad Sujal left for his business trips magar gaya tabhi toh Sheena phir se apne kaam mein efficient ho paayi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 - hehehe yeh they needed to stay away from each other in order to get back to work
Finally our lovebirds have completed half a year of their relationship and it's celebration time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yippeee
Their party is really rocking with blaring music, drinks and dancing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳- no party is a hit without it
Sujal and Sheena are as usual looking hot and gorgeous and I loveee the combination of red and black!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - they r the colours of hot dark passion
The song is very nice and just perfect for their celebration!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - i'm glad u liked it
Sujal and Sheena danced together and showed the world how happy and how much in love they were!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - yeh they wanted to show everyone
Sheena has gotten a bit drunk which has turned her wild and she is all over Sujal!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehhe she sure can't handle her drinks well
He is having a hard time controlling her and she is just driving him crazy!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yes both of them are stuck
She is expressing her hidden desires now and Sujal is aroused and both of them have become desperate for each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - hehehe ab mahole hee kuch aisa hain to
But thank God Sujal was in his senses enough to get away from there as neither the place nor her condition was appropriate for what he wanted to do to her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course it wasn't
I am sure they will not be able to control themselves tonight!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm chances are certainly vague
Their relationship is very strong and it's time they took the next step!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - lets see what happens

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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks a lot for loving the part


Originally posted by: Mrsimisam

D update was jst fab...luved it...😃 - thanks very much for loving it

D prank was really scary...poor sheena...she was so worried...😲 - yeh she really was afraid

Bt finally sujal succeeds and comforts her...👍🏼 - well the hero has to always win

who is dis kunal...???...m sure d ''WO'' in sujal n sheena's life...😡 - yeh nothing more than a looser

Aww last part was d cutest..😳...LUVED IT ...👏 - thanks very much





Originally posted by: -purnima-

Lovely UD 👏👏 ... from the title itself seemed to be a happy happy UD 😃😃😳 - thanks very much

aww mean of sujal 😳😆 ...he literally sacred wits out of sheena 😆😆 poor girl 😆😆 but guess she must have forgiven after the kiss 😳 😳 - yes she was really angry but its hard to stay angry with him for long

kunal 😡😆 ...wanted to wish him all the best in advance 😉😆but before that Sujal "the hero" is here 😳😳 ... guess Kunal deservd it 😡😡😡 for eyeing Mr.Garewal's girl 😆😆God help u 😆😆😆... & in future other persons if any, who try to manhandle Sujal's GF 😳😆 - yeh it was his warning for everyone

celebration time 🥳literally after 6 months 😉 😛... i guess for sujal 😳😆 the man in love 😳😛...thank god atleast one of them was in senses enough to leave the place 😳😆... as 4 sheena darling she had completely lost it 😆😆😆 - hehehe well got little bit carried away in the celebration

hope the couple have nice time 😉😆😆
- hmmm let's see


😳





Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hi Dear😃

Nice part!!!! Awesome👏

Cont.soon

Ayushi⭐️






Thanks a lot Ayushi for loving the part so much


Originally posted by: priti11

wow just wow..

loved d upd.
cont.soon...



thanks a lot for loving it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Arwa

Update was really gud.👏 - thanks very much

Sujal indeed scared Sheena by pulling that stunt ..she was very worried over him and her concern made her angry with Sujal. - yes she very much was

But Sujal knows how to woo his Sheena..They make a nice pair. - he surely does and yeh they are hot together

Kunal is such a looser.😡😡 but Sheena liked that Sujal is so possessive of her.He thinks her as his. - a number one looser and yeh she is lucky to have him

Their aniversary party seems quite fun and both Sheena and Sujal r desperate for each other😆😉 - hmmm currently that is the situation

Waiting for the next part..😃




Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Awesome Part😊 - thanks very much


Thank god Sujal is fine not only Sheena we readers were also scared but he needed the blows for scaring us😊😉😆 - hehehe well he is the hero so has to be fine

This Kunal seems to be very cheap kind of person when he knows that Sujal is here then what type of behaviour he is showing to Sheena thank god Sujal came in time to save her and this cheapo gets good bashing from Sujal he really needs this 😡😡 - yes the looser learned a lesson for sure

Sheena was very much impressed by the way he spoke to Piyush and showed his authority on her what else an she ask for her👏👏😊 - yeh she was lost for words

Our love birds completed 6 months of their relationship but in this period Sheena was really frustrated as she stayed away with him and the desire of being with Sujal kept irritated her 👏😵😳 - hehehe distance makes the relationship fonder

Sheena was all drunk in the party she does not know what she is doing and that is scaring Sujal but in the mean time he takes her away from the crowd before she starts to play the game😆😆😉 - surely she needed a lot of controlling

what is going to happen next cant wait for it😉😳😊 - lets see

Eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon😊😊




Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Arwa a big sorry mai last part par bhi comment nahi kar paayi thi so here is a common comment for both the updates. Good updates. 👏 - its ok and thanks a lot for liking them

Sujal n Sheena kuch jyada hi pass aa gaye hain aur Sujal bhi acche se jaanta hai ki his magic always works to Sheena mana bhi nahi kar paati us ko kisi cheej k liye. 😉 - yep the more closer they get the harder it becomes to resist

Sheena itna tired thi fir bhi Sujal us ko apne saath party me le gaya kidnap kar k. - yes once he decided he wont spare her

😆 In dono k romance ka cota to khatam hi nahi hota ab jahan dekho vahin start hain.😉 - yes they can't get enuf of each other

Par Sujal ko aise bet lagane ki kya jaroorat thi? Us ko kuch ho jata to Sheena ka kya hota? 😒 Thank god he is safe n i am agree with Sheena ka gussa. - very true but u c he doesn't think abt others half of the time

Song accha tha kaafi and dono ka romance to humesha hi mast hota hai. 😃 - yes thats what makes them hot

I hate that rascal. How dare he to misbehave with Sheena?😲 Jab ki vo acche se jaanta tha ki vo Sujal k saath hai. Good lesson Sujal gave him n it showed ki vo Sheena k liye kitna possessive hai.
- yes he needed to show what she meant to him and no one cud cross the line

Sujal bhi chahta hai kuch aage aur past 6 mnths me un ka rishta bahut strong hua hai to i am pretty sure ki ab dono apne relationship ka next step lenge.😉 - hmm let's see what happens




Originally posted by: arpita25

Finally i am happy n satisfied that Sujal is safe.😃 How dare he do it by scaring Sheena to hell? 😡 He must think about her as well before trying such acts.🤔 - yeh he is wel land he shud think abt others too especially his gf

Sheena's anger was obvious and Sujal knew well too much how much he scared her. Vaise bhi Sheena yahan Sujal k saath hi aayi thi na. 😔 - yeh she was really mad

The party was nice n everyone was enjoying it n our SS r always busy with each other. - well they can't get enuf now can they

How cheap some ppl behave sometimes!😲 How could Kunal think that Sheena is such kind of gal? Sheena was giving him good lessons but i think this man needed a solid reply from Sujal and it was sufficient for him. - yes there are many with such characteristics but there are also people to teach them a gud lesson

Thank god Sujal reached on perfect time and Piyush controlled them.😛 Piyush bhi samajh gaya ki Sheena is really special for Sujal.😳 - well Piyush is always there to save the day as always

Celebration time wowww 🥳but when Sujal was in control than Sheena must b as well. Par Sujal to humesha sab samhal leta hai na.😉 update fast waiting for their romantic session.
- yes there is much to celebrate and well lets see who can control the other


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey great that u updated and u know me how lazy i am with comments 😛 😛 😛. I always do this and u always forgive this that's y it has become my habit to take advantages. 😆 😆 😆 - do i have a choice hehehe


😆
Thank god Sujal is safe, just like everyone i said this too bcz v all care for him more. 😉 😉 😉 - yes he is one of the pillars of this story

Sheena was so depressed and hell shocked and she doesn't know how to react.😭 😭 😭 All were highly panicked when they located his body just lying without any movement. and he came back with that victorious smile and obviously Sheena will be fuming over his careless attitude.😡 😡 😡 She was damn scared but he is Sujal Grewal who knows so well how to control her. 😳 😳 😳 - hehehe yeh she was bound to be angry as he pulled a very stupid prank which was unforgivable yet she couldn't stay angry with him for long

They were so cute and romantic in all their romantic sessions. 😳 😳 😳 - they always are

How dare that bas***d to do such thing with her? 😡 😡 😡 What he thought of her? 😡 😡 😡 But the best part was Sujal's attitude when he was about to kiss Sheena.👏 👏 👏 - yes Kunal is a big looser and he deserved what he got

Firstly people adore this beautiful couple and now Sujal's attitude for that kameena proved that Sheena is a lot more than a gf who is with Sujal now a days.😃 😃 😃 - yes he put a mark on his relationship

Just like Sheena i too was overjoyed with his impulsive and perfect revert.
That dog deserved that. But thank god Piyush entwined at perfect moment otherwise this fight could have been taken a bad shape. 😈 😈 😈 - well he was just showing how much she meant to him

The roar he had in his voice announced that Sheena has very very important part in his life. 😎
😎 😎 - oh yes definitely

Finally they have completed half of the year 🥳
🥳 🥳 and that's y they were partying and Sheena was high on drinks obviously more than limited can create such effects.😆 😆 😆 - hehehe she got little bit carried away int he celebration

The desires she used to hide every time were now shown perfectly now and Sujal also wanted that from a long time and i am sure that they will not be able to control themselves. ☺️
☺️ ☺️ But Sujal was right that neither the place nor Sheena's condition was perfect for that. - yeh so lets see which one controls the other

Try to update whenever u get time.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear great update.😊 Thank god my hero is safe and sound now.
Sujal and Sheena were busy with each other 😳 but what was the need of that bloody sick man to behave in such a way with Sheena 😡? Sujal's anger was not wrong.🤔 How can people be so much cheap but some people think that they r very smart by behaving like this 😳. Thank god Sujal came for her rescue at perfect time when she needed him the most. Sujal's anger showed the importance of Sheena in his life and no body should dare to touch or hurt his Sheena now. Piyush helped them to separate out otherwise something big and disastrous would have been happened.😕 Great that they have passed six months in their relationship and now i think soon they r going to cross all the limits in their relationship.😳 I think even Sheena wants that that's y she is unable to control her feelings in the club
☺️ but Sujal knows the limits and how to control her. 😉 Songs u used were nice. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey dear great update.😊 Thank god my hero is safe and sound now. - yes and thanks for loving it


Sujal and Sheena were busy with each other 😳 but what was the need of that bloody sick man to behave in such a way with Sheena 😡? Sujal's anger was not wrong.🤔 How can people be so much cheap but some people think that they r very smart by behaving like this 😳. - well some people are just made that way.

Thank god Sujal came for her rescue at perfect time when she needed him the most. - hero's entry is always sufficient

Sujal's anger showed the importance of Sheena in his life and no body should dare to touch or hurt his Sheena now. - yep it was a gud lesson he taught

Piyush helped them to separate out otherwise something big and disastrous would have been happened.😕 - yeh he needed to be controlled for now

Great that they have passed six months in their relationship and now i think soon they r going to cross all the limits in their relationship.😳 I think even Sheena wants that that's y she is unable to control her feelings in the club
☺️ but Sujal knows the limits and how to control her. 😉 - yes now let's see what happens next

Songs u used were nice. - thanks a lot
Update soon

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