Dil Chahta Hain (RP) Pt10pg43 'On the Go'

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arwa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: golu_1677
Nice part...

Thanks very much for liking it

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

Well I guess everything about the fic from characters to story line to suspense has kept me hooked! 😳 The last part was also great but frankly I was expecting more. By 'more' I am referring to the length of the part 😉😛

Thanks for loving it so far. Well yeah this time it was short but next time will make it big

Originally posted by: Milleegarg
Nice ff dear
Here m new one
All the update are too good
Update soon

Hey thanks a lot for loving it

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Arwa,
Firstly I would say it's a great concept with strong characters.
Very well penned with ur sweet time in updating.
10 parts in 5yrs,OMG. I read all parts in a day. - hehe thanks for loving it and yeh well before i used to have a lot of time on hand and over the years it varied.

With the FB it seems nothing went wrong then y did she leave on that she hates him.
Anyway it's for u to tell us. Just a hunch was it some kind of bet to win her but he really fell in love with her and she came to know of it. - well this is the suspense which will open eventually

As of who is this new character, - it will be revealed

Can I request u to aleast tell us a tentative month u will update
With the kind of suspence in ur fic, u r expecting us to wait for too long for it to update.
Good luck with it and please make it soon. - hmmm i'll try and be more regular
Take care

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Wowww... Loved it... Sheena is suffering and so is sugar... I just know why they separated... I just hope sujal stops torturing Sheena like this... They really love each other... And now this new entry is here... Twist in an already twisted tale..

Hope this confusion gets sorted out soon...

Pls update soon...

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Beautiful update Arwa dear.

Kitna pareshaan karega ye Sujal Sheena ko? I know he is taking all revenge from Sheena in his own way but it's hurting her to the limits.😒 😒 He is too rude to her. 😡 😡 Her body wants rest instead he is making her work and rush.😔 😔

Just love that passionate moment between these too still showing the spark and chemistry which was never missing.😳 😳 Sheena also lost herself with his touch.☺️ ☺️ But their beautiful moment has to break.🤔 🤔

Sheena is no less.😆 😆 He sent a dress for her as usual he used to do.😊 😊 But her ego and self respect didn't let her accept that and she chose a regular dress instead. She isn't wrong if I would have been there to I have done same.

Party was boring as business parties are always boring 🤪🤪 but for Sujal it was fruitful he got what he wanted.😊 😊 Sheena bore him and made him angry as she didn't chose the dress given by him.😛 😛 She wanted to sleep but Mr. Sujal Garewal will not make it possible.🤔 🤔

She wanted to relax but I don't think Sujal is going to make it that easy.😒 😒 He should let her relax now as she needs proper rest to get fit and back in work.😡 😡 Who this new entry is Nikki Aggarwal?😕 😕
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Continue soon dear.

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arwa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
Wowww... Loved it... Sheena is suffering and so is sugar... - thanks for loving it so much. Yes both are suffering for sure

I just know why they separated... I just hope sujal stops torturing Sheena like this... They really love each other... - hmmm true now lets see

And now this new entry is here... Twist in an already twisted tale.. - thats what makes it interesting

Hope this confusion gets sorted out soon... - lets see what happens next
Pls update soon...

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Nice update Arwa..😊

Thanks very much Suhana

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arwa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Beautiful update Arwa dear. - thanks very much Vertika

Kitna pareshaan karega ye Sujal Sheena ko? I know he is taking all revenge from Sheena in his own way but it's hurting her to the limits.😒 😒 He is too rude to her. 😡 😡 Her body wants rest instead he is making her work and rush.😔 😔 - he simply is filled with a lot of hatred due to which he can't see beyond it

Just love that passionate moment between these too still showing the spark and chemistry which was never missing.😳 😳 Sheena also lost herself with his touch.☺️ ☺️ But their beautiful moment has to break.🤔 🤔 - i guess it just isnt the right time

Sheena is no less.😆 😆 He sent a dress for her as usual he used to do.😊 😊 But her ego and self respect didn't let her accept that and she chose a regular dress instead. She isn't wrong if I would have been there to I have done same. - hmmm she knew it will annoy him

Party was boring as business parties are always boring 🤪🤪 but for Sujal it was fruitful he got what he wanted.😊 😊 Sheena bore him and made him angry as she didn't chose the dress given by him.😛 😛 She wanted to sleep but Mr. Sujal Garewal will not make it possible.🤔 🤔 - of course since he has to do the worse to her so she would bow down

She wanted to relax but I don't think Sujal is going to make it that easy.😒 😒 He should let her relax now as she needs proper rest to get fit and back in work.😡 😡 - yes he wont let her off that easy

Who this new entry is Nikki Aggarwal?😕 😕 - u will find out
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Continue soon dear.