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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally it has been updated.😊 Nice part πŸ‘ even I liked something which made me laugh. πŸ˜†
Sujal is really a big naughty boy who was teasing Sheena knowing her perfect hidden desires.πŸ˜‰ He got the right point and made her excite so she could not say no and she set her mind that she will make Sujal loose.πŸ˜› I just laughed at Sheena's eagerness when she was totally drunk and wanted to have Sujal as she wanted.😳 Sujal was trying his best to control Sheena πŸ€” but he got successful at the end when he brought her to his flat where she came back to her sense very quickly πŸ˜† and later she realized what has she done.😳 She was thinking that she can make him loose but her tricks didn't work over Sujal and see in his last move he showed that why is he called a true business man. I am waiting for it's next part eagerly. Try to update soon dear.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey great that u updated the FF. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Hilarious update, I agree with Mahak I too found it funny. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Sheena was in full talli mode and Sujal was trying his best to control her and she was trying to almost rape Sujal. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Sujal being a man how much he could control himself but still he managed to bring her at his flat. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Now when madam is back o her sense and reminded her deeds she is unhappy and wanted to run away.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Sujal is really damn naughty how can he play such game at wee hours of night? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ On purpose he chose that naughty game.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ I have seen it in Desi Boys. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Sheena my baby, how can u even think that Sujal will let u win the game so easily? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† He made her win easily firstly but at the end he won and Sheena was shocked more than being surprised. 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
I think her over confidence ruined many things.
Update soon for some naughty moments.

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Posted: 12 years ago
love ur all ff's.. All are beautifully written.. keep writingπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Update😊

Atlast Sujal succeeded in his mission of getting Sheena back to home otherwise the scene would be different on city's streetπŸ˜†πŸ˜³

The game is just like inflammable liquid which is added to their hidden desires lets see who win this gameπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Continue Soon😊
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b


Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! -thanks a lot for loving it

Sheena was totally out of her senses and Sujal was trying his best to control her!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes he had a hard time

She wants him and is ready to rip his clothes but Sujal manages to save his dignity and get her inside the car!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe warna oski izzat lutjaati

Sheena has really gone mad and what is she doing inside the car!!!!! - as u said she had gone crazy

She was kissing him while he was driving and just wouldn't let him go and poor Sujal had to control himself!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes poor guy

Thank God they did not have an accident on the way and Sujal managed to get her to his apartment!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes he still was sober enough to control the situation

He took her to his apartment to take care of her and get her sober and then send her home, so it seems like his intentions were good!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he is a decent guy

Sujal wanted to have Sheena but he waited for her intoxication to wear off and that was really sweet of him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes because it means more than just an encounter for him

Poor Sheena was so embarrassed when she came back to her senses!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hehehe anybody would be

She had unintentionally revealed her hidden desires while in her intoxicated state and now Sujal knew that she also wanted him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - oh yes everything is out now

Sujal was taking care of her but he also enjoyed her awkwardness!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he couldn't resist

He is really naughty for making her believe that something had happened between them!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - the situation called for it hehe

It reminded me of Shahrukh in Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh i guess many scenes have come after that

Sheena was so angry when Sujal started laughing and I loved it when she jumped on him!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - she was bound to be annoyed and i can see u luv the wild side more

It was very cute and funny but Sujal sure turned it hot again by pulling her closer with the dangerous passion in his eyes!!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he has that charm

Sheena freaks out when she finally notices that she is in Sujal's apartment and wants him to take her home but now Sujal's intentions does seem so good anymore!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😈 😈 😈 😈 - it was abt time and well there were many things and that just the end to it. Perhaps he has other plans.

Sujal was trying to seduce her and she stopped him but he isn't one to give up!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - of course as if he wouldn't do it then who would?

I loved the way she confidently leaned back with her legs crossed over one another!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - well i guess that was one of her best quality that she held her head over her shoulders

It reminded me of Demi Moore in Disclosure!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm

Sujal is such a tease and is teasing the tigress as he knows how competitive she is and would accept the challenge!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yes only then will there be fun

He surely knows how to make Sheena do what he wants!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he sure does

Trust Sujal to come up with the inventive idea of strip chess at this hour of the morning!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - thats wat makes him so special

I liked the deeper meaning of the set each took!!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - glad u did

Sheena is confident that she could win the game even knowing that Sujal is capable of tricks!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - well she isn't the one to accept defeat that easily

The chess reminds me of the music video of the song "Aa zara" from Murder 2!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 -yeh the big inspiration for this idea

Honestly this game seems to be a win-win situation for Sujal!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - oh yes

Sheena can't seem to decide whether she was more excited about beating him or gettting him out of his clothes!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - well im sure she wud have luved the latter better

Sujal is succeeding in his plan to distract her as after he took off his shirt, all Sheena seems to think about is how sexy his body is!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - oh yes him and his tricks

Sheena underestimated Sujal and Sujal was not going to let her win so easily!!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - that was the plan from the beginning

Sheena was coming up with some insults as she was winning but Sujal's reply was just full of double meaning!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - thats wat makes it more fun

Both of them drinking water to show it trail down their body and distract the other was hilarious!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Well two can play at that game!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - right both of them are equal in playing games

Sujal won in one move and Sheena was shocked!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - it was a big shocker

Sujal's remark about the king and the queen was just too much!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab wo kuch aisa na kahe kese hosakta hain

Sujal is never one to lose and always gets what he wants!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes thats why he is sujal garewal

Sheena was winning but suddenly the tables were turned on her and this makes me suspect foul play!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - well perhaps something is fishy

Sheena is in so much trouble now as Sujal has won all her clothes and now she has to remove them!!!!! - oh yes she is in big trouble for sure


Edited by awaazilicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Now dats called a worth waiting UD πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ wonderful as always πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘ or shud i say worth waiting moment for Sujal to burst his emotions πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜† - thanks a lot Puri.

Sujal can really be a tease to the core πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† teasing the tigress (sowie) poor girl Sheena πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Who plays game at 3 in the morning 🀣... but trust Sujal to come up with inventive ideas of Strip Chess πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Smart Boy - yes he surely is a very creative guy in order to get what he wants

Wonder if he was eager to be the winner or looser πŸ˜³πŸ˜›... as he must have liked to be either πŸ˜‰πŸ˜› - well yeh apparently both ways he wud get what he wants

Lets wait & watch for Sujal's after-win celebrations πŸ˜† - surely





Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Hi Arwa - hey Suhana

Update was really sizzling hot.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - thanks a lot

Sheena was quite mad to arouse Sujal to this extent.I mean she started seducing him in car itself.Poor Sujal!! he had a hard time coz its a surprise they didn't met with an accident on the way.- hehehe yes she sure had gone mad but he was in control

Chess can b so seductive ..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ never came across anything like this but it was fun reading. - yes it sure id very innovative

Sheena has completely lost her mind and thus she lost the bet.I dont think she actually minded it.πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - ab kya kare mahole hee kuch aisa hain





Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was superb.- thanks alot

Trust Sujal to come up with the most creative idea...even at 3 in the morning. - hehehe yeh surely

continue soon




Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

loved the update... - thanks a lot

loved this carefree sheena...poor sujal...he had to bear a lot...i am amazed that they didnt meet with an accident...hahaha - yeh she had lost control but thankfully he still had control

sujal surely knows how to make sheena do this according to his wishes... - thats what makes him so good

she actually accepted the bet and played such a game...she is in trouble now.. - that she sure is

lets c what she does now... - yeh lets see
continue soon




Originally posted by: arpita25

Finally it has been updated.😊 Nice part πŸ‘ even I liked something which made me laugh. πŸ˜† - hehehe glad it did

Sujal is really a big naughty boy who was teasing Sheena knowing her perfect hidden desires.πŸ˜‰ He got the right point and made her excite so she could not say no and she set her mind that she will make Sujal loose.πŸ˜› - yeh he has that quality in him

I just laughed at Sheena's eagerness when she was totally drunk and wanted to have Sujal as she wanted.😳 - hehehe yeh she was

Sujal was trying his best to control Sheena πŸ€” but he got successful at the end when he brought her to his flat where she came back to her sense very quickly πŸ˜† and later she realized what has she done.😳 - yes he finally took care of her

She was thinking that she can make him loose but her tricks didn't work over Sujal and see in his last move he showed that why is he called a true business man. - yes he is a very sharp one indeed

I am waiting for it's next part eagerly. Try to update soon dear.
- surely





Originally posted by: varshita

Hey great that u updated the FF. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Hilarious update, I agree with Mahak I too found it funny. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - i'm glad u did

Sheena was in full talli mode and Sujal was trying his best to control her and she was trying to almost rape Sujal. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe yeh poor poor him

Sujal being a man how much he could control himself but still he managed to bring her at his flat. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - well lets just say he isn't an animal

Now when madam is back o her sense and reminded her deeds she is unhappy and wanted to run away.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - it happens to everyone

Sujal is really damn naughty how can he play such game at wee hours of night? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ On purpose he chose that naughty game.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ I have seen it in Desi Boys. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh yes he sure did everything on purpose

Sheena my baby, how can u even think that Sujal will let u win the game so easily? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† He made her win easily firstly but at the end he won and Sheena was shocked more than being surprised. 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 -of course he is too smart for that

I think her over confidence ruined many things. - yes it did

Update soon for some naughty moments. - hehehe






Originally posted by: nivi26

good one!πŸ‘πŸ‘



Thanks alot for loving it so much



Originally posted by: Vidhi1989

love ur all ff's.. All are beautifully written.. keep writingπŸ‘



Thanks a lot for loving my fics so much



Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Lovely Update😊 - thanks very much


Atlast Sujal succeeded in his mission of getting Sheena back to home otherwise the scene would be different on city's streetπŸ˜†πŸ˜³ - oh yes aisi cheeze ghar ke andar ho to behtar hain

The game is just like inflammable liquid which is added to their hidden desires lets see who win this gameπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ - yep it is very inflammable and yeh well sujal has won

Continue Soon😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hehehehehehehe πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Ab ye mat poochna ki has kyoun rahi hoon. kyounki maine aisa update expect nahi kiya tha. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe i can totally understand

But anyways sab se badi baat hai ki akhir tune is FF ko after a long time update to kar diya na. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - yes i did

Nice and funny update as well. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - thanks a lot

Sheena was out of her senses and poor Sujal was trying his best to control her πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† but the liquor has affected her very badly and she has lost all her sense 😳 😳 😳. I was smiling while reading it.😊 😊 😊- yes she was a gone case and im glad u liked it

Sujal has tried his best to control her otherwise god knows sorry arwa knows what would have been happened? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - hahaha yeh

Sheena has unintentionally revealed the hidden desires in her and know she is feeling embarrassed to face Sujal when she is in her conscious state. 😳 😳 😳 - anybody wud feel that way

Sujal has intentionally teased her as he knew that it will trigger the lioness inside her and soon she decided to play when she was not even ready and wanted to leave for her house. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - if it is one thing then it is a challenge which she can't refuse

Oh god what a dangerous game!!!!!! 😲 😲 😲 I can't be ready to play it as well anytime. 😳 😳 😳 - hehehe danger is his middle name

Sheena was feeling that she can win the game so easily it means she underestimated Sujal.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ He is a perfect business man than how can let her win that easily? πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - yep a perfect business man indeed

First he gave her easy victory but soon when Sheena was trying to divert his attention it didn't work on him. Just one last move and Sujal won it easily shocking her. 😲 😲 😲 - bohot shaatir jo hain

Now I am desperately waiting for next update which should be romantic. 😳 😳 😳
- hmmm lets see what happens

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Posted: 12 years ago


Burst of emotions pt2

"You've clearly cheated." Sheena burst upon him. She wasn't going to easily give in.

Sujal simply laughed. "Come on Sheena be a sport." It was true that he had indeed cheated and he had no shame whatsoever.


It wasn't about the spirit; rather it was about principles which always remained her strong foundation. She had read his lusty deep eyes and the mischief in his smiles told her everything. He had played tricks on her. Then again she couldn't hide her feelings any longer but still being a woman she was hesitant to display them so openly. "I'm so not going to let you win like this."

"I guess it's too late for that. I suggest you give me my winnings or you know how I always snatch things when I don't get them." The dark passion in his eyes could have scared anybody and it was confirmed he would do exactly that.

The time ticked on and she knew there wasn't a way out. In a way it excited her and at the same time, her heart pumped anxiously. It wasn't easy to just remove her dignity in front of him even though they were in a strong steady relationship. It was the first time and she wanted it to be meaningful and not just a challenge won.

Sujal very well knew what she went through yet he also had sensed from the beginning of that night that she was ready but had small glitches here and there. He loved to tantalise and excite. "Come on Sheena I'm waiting." He stood up gradually and leaned towards her across the table as if ready to pounce on his prey. "Warna tum jaanti ho ke me to le hee lunga."

"Nahin." An amusing panic ran within her as he approached closer. His irises were diluted due to the ecstatic pleasure becoming high on his nerves. She leaned back. His play wasn't over. "Nahin?" He went closer and just as soon as his hand would have had reached the fabric of her red dress; she jumped up and sprung to a distance.


(Sheena's dress)


The cat and mouse game was even more fun and he knew she also loved to be playfully harassed. The huge space of his hall truly gave more scope of running around and it increased a lot of adrenaline levels. All of a sudden they had turned into teenagers because if she ran right he blocked her way and if she turned the other way quickly he followed and it just continued for the next ten minutes or so.

Once or twice he nearly had her but she slyly got out of his grip and he was just left hearing the echoes of her giggles throughout his apartment. It touched his heart and was more determined to never let her go out of his life. Something new had developed yet he hadn't deciphered the emotion but he knew it was something deep.

Soon his thoughts were disrupted by a cushion attack. It flew on his face as if the enemy had thrown a bomb. The initial two seconds went in aghast but then he quickly recovered to have revenge. He chased after her and she ran to save herself and the playful game eventually came to an end when he cornered her against a wall.


Her front was pasted with his weight stuck to her back. Her arms were splayed out across the wall on both her sides as his hands slipped through her fingers making her shudder all over. She breathed heavily as the exercise had pumped up her heart very well and plus the proximity had increased a lot of levels within her body. Instead of feeling tired it felt fresh and rejuvenated. His strong male essence totally heightened her senses and her lips twitched with an unknown sensation taking over her. Plus she felt his hard shaft in between her legs, which made her almost bend down in order to seat herself on it. Then again she prevented herself from doing so because no matter what happened she had to take control of her feelings. His warm breath on her bare neck and shoulders felt unusually cold.

Sujal felt her body loose up one moment and almost immediately stiffen again. He knew it wasn't easy for her and then again it wasn't easy for him either yet he just wanted to flow away in the river of his passion. His hands soon left her arms and then rested onto her upper body fondling her bosom slowly. Her tight and bumpy areolas were felt even through the two layers which made him crave to reach inside and play around with the pointed tips.

It was hard for her to express her feelings since his touch had simply made her lose all her senses. Then, began the series, of his soft kisses on her bare back, neck and shoulders. The joy of being aroused was one thing and just being that close to him was another. His cold tongue had made her shudder yet she didn't want it to stop.

However all of her senses hadn't died just yet because as soon as she felt him unzipping her dress she became unresponsive and he sure felt that. "Sujal please."

That was expected yet he still had wanted to test his instincts due to which he never stopped. Yet after he realized she was uncomfortable he couldn't go further. He sure stopped the kisses yet he didn't increase the distance between them. "It's okay Sheena." His silky voice whispered into her ear. "I won't do anything that doesn't make you happy." He laid an affectionate kiss on her cheek. "We'll do this only and only when you're ready." That was it and he moved back like a noble man.

The nobility overwhelmed her almost to the extent that she was assured that if there was anyone she wanted to be with right then was him and no one else. Before he could have gone further she leaped onto him from the back and wrapped her arms around him. "You're the best thing that has ever happened to me Sujal." She rested her head on the back of his neck. "I don't think I'll want anyone else to be my first mate than you."Her soft voice lingered into his ear.

Sujal absorbed the sweet essence of her perfume mixed in with her natural odour and then turned around holding onto her hands. The sincerity in her eyes told him how much she was ready and willing just the way he wanted her to be. It was the correct time. His palms cupped her face and with a smile he kissed her forehead. Then gradually moved down to both of her eyes and down to her cheeks. The final destination was reached on her face and he grabbed her soft flowery lips into a rather soft going onto harsh kiss.

What appeared like an innocent kiss turned into a tornado as he grabbed her rear tight and raised her up against the wall and rested her on his knee as the kiss deepened into the depths of her complicated mouth. Her hands ran through his silky strands as both lost their breaths immersed in the high passion.

Yeh raat rukjaaye, baat tham jaaye, teri baahon main

Khawaishein jagi hain pyaase pyaase labon pe

Khud ko jala doon, teri aahon main

The lips were given a rest but only her's as his savoured the bare body of her neck and shoulders. His cold tongue slithered up and down and across. She held his head tight and closed her eyes to live the moment to its fullest.

Aaghosh main aaj mere samaa jaa

Jaane kya hona hain kal

She slightly pushed him back only to pull him back into her embrace to allow him to continue as she also drank the sweet salty sweaty beads off his upper back and shoulder.

Aa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Aa jaa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Jee le...

His hand slowly worked on unzipping her dress and eventually let it fall free onto the floor. For the initial two minutes he feasted upon her semi naked body and then he lifted her up to move towards the single armchair and lightly dropped her on it.

The position was awkward yet she managed it well and splayed her legs out as if it was an invitation. She had a seductive smile on her face as she expected him to come closer and take advantage of everything. She felt as if all her inhibitions were dropped and whatever was to happen next was the best thing.

Yeh jahaan saara bhool kar

Jismo ke saaye tale dheeme dheeme chal raat bhar

Pal do pal hum hain humsafar

The abhi dono yahaan honge subha jaane kahaan kya khabhar

Her black lingerie looked totally hot and he was determined further to remove it. As it was he had won all of it so he definitely deserved it. He bent closer and held onto the two sides of the chair with a deadly passion hidden within his eyes. He could sense all the signs coming from her body indicated that "just come and get me and release me".

She gave a short wicked chortle and pulled him towards her into a tigerish kiss. The soft net fabric of the black lingerie itched against his bare chest as he moved up and down during the kiss.

In haste he worked on opening the clasp behind her to relieve him from the awkwardness of the fabric.

Aa ja zara khud ko mujhme samajha

Jaane kya hona hain kal

Aa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Aa jaa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Jee le...

The rest was left to fall automatically as he picked her up in his arms and sauntered down the small corridor towards his bedroom. The kiss wasn't broken as it was too intoxicating to leave.

There was unusual hastiness in all his actions whereas she wished for him to have taken things slowly as she wanted to cherish each and every moment of their first intimate session.

His room was a mixture of black and white which increased the intensity of the magic around them. It was dimly lit by side table lamps and as the distance between the door and the bed became smaller, both their heart beats increased to extreme levels.

As he dropped her lightly onto the black satin sheets she shuddered as they felt cold. Perhaps because she was almost bare with only one barrier left on her body to be removed. She pushed herself back and played around sensuously with the sheets exposing her feminine body with pride.

Khwaab hoon main to makhmali

Palkon main leja mujhe maine diya mauka tujhe ajnabi

Meanwhile he fiddled around in the drawers as if he sought something. It appeared as if he had always prepared himself for that such night as he had hoped it would certainly take place sometime.

He held several scented candles and randomly stacked them around the bedside. He knew the aroma itself was enough to entirely arouse her and to give him more power in order to satisfy both of their hunger.

It seemed it worked almost immediately as she clung onto him from the back and gave him soft kisses, lightly sucking his soft silky skin. His male odour made her want more and more as if she devoured some sweet dessert.

Hosh main aaye na abhi

Ek duje main hi kahin khoyi rahein teri meri zindagi

It wasn't in him really to allow anyone else to have taken the upper hand in anything so he pushed her back against the soft satin pillows and buried his head in the crane of her neck and kissed her bare shoulder like a hungry lion. His cold tongue slithered around her frame and she quivered as the sensation turned from cold to hot.

Khamoshiyan dhadkano ki suna ja

Jaane kya hona hain kal

At last he put all his weight on top of her delicate yet strong body and continued with his series of soft kisses wherever he found access. He trembled with immense pleasure as his whole body went loose as if it adapted to mold into her body automatically. His gradual thrushes brought out quiet squirms from her which in return made her wrap her arms around his tightly shaped back.

Aa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Aa jaa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Jee le...

The movement of his thumbs around her hardened tips gave her an uncontrollable feeling. She literally held onto the sheets beside her to tolerate it and to make it worse his masculine hardness pushed against her bare thighs making her want to shout out loud for him to stop or she would shatter into pieces. It had only just begun and already she had reached to some heights.

As he moved to the other side, his hand slowly traveled down along her navel and entered the top of her forbidden land underneath the black barrier which still stood in its place. His two fingers softly played around with the top end of the feminine lips.

Just the touch made her release heavy gasps as the virgin area was at last inaugurated and since it was fresh and new she knew it was going to leave a raw mark. As well as it gave her a delicious treat it also gave her discomfort. It was bound to as it was totally new.

It wasn't as if he had practiced it several times yet at that time it all came naturally. He moved further down and continued with the soft rubbing.

Soon it turned a bit harsh as he increased the intensity. His arousal had reached its moment and he knew that if it wasn't released then he would burst. The strokes became rapid as he pushed harder and heard her soft moans. It was the correct time. He knew it.

However he wanted to play further so he rolled her over and pushed the little man up and down. It sure made her squirm and he knew very well she loved it. He laid soft kisses on her beautiful arched back whilst his hands slowly fondled her mounds as if he squeezed a bunch of sponges. Out of random instinct he drew something with his finger on the curve of her spine and she almost understood what he wrote.

Her initial reaction was of surprise yet when she turned and looked into his intense eyes she felt as if she saw someone entirely new. Something had changed within him and it made her feel very special. She pulled him on top and engaged into a delicious session of kisses. His hands went all over the place as he simply couldn't resist feeling her each and every part.

Finally his brain jumped up and down desperately as if it wanted him to do something. He knew it was the correct time as both were high and if it happened then, it was the peak. Therefore all remaining barriers were removed and he feasted his male eyes upon the female bare beauty as he knew it was something else to see in person.

Normally she would have felt coy yet she didn't know why but she felt only he had the right so she was totally alright with her bold display. However she shut her eyes as somewhere she knew it wasn't easy to look at him whilst he stared at her like a hungry animal.

Without further delay he bobbed his head slowly in between her legs and devoured the sweetness with his tongue.

As his cold tongue slithered in and out she let out soft groans but soon the sweet pain tortured her and she had to be released. It electrified throughout her body and she screamed.

He continued with the tantalization as he simply couldn't resist. It felt like an addiction as the more he supped the more he wanted.

Her hands remained sprang within his hair since the pain was unbearable. At times there were soft groans and at times there were loud squeals as many unexpected things took place.

At last she was released and it felt as if she lay on a bed of clouds totally soaring away in the clear wind. It had taken place for a few minutes yet it felt her whole life since there was nothing compared to it. It was simply amazing.

Sujal lay on top of her totally exhausted whilst her hands rested on his sweaty back. He hadn't had expected it would have been that enjoyable. His delirious sight viewed her under him and slightly shook his head to pour the sweat beads from his hair onto her rosy cheeks in order to make her open her eyes and look towards him. He wanted to see the equal intensity within her which he held.


Raat rukjaaye, baat tham jaaye, teri baahon main

Khawaishein jagi hain pyaase pyaase labon pe

Khud ko jala doon, teri aahon main

Aaghosh main aaj mere samaa jaa

Jaane kya hona hain kal

Aa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Aa jaa zara kareeb se, jo pal mile naseeb se

Jee le...

After one last look, both scrounged their lips together into a firing kiss and then lay beside each other snuggled as they just didn't want the time to go ahead where they would be forced to go back their separate ways.


To be continued...

Edited by awaazilicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!Superb!!!!!Fabulous!!!!!!Fantastic!!!!!

Sheena realized that Sujal had cheated and isn't going to let him win like this!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

But Sujal is shameless about it and wants his winnings!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

That was very mischievious of him but I guess all is fair in love and war!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sheena is right in thinking that their first time should be meaningful and not just a challenge won!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sujal is teasing Sheena and she is running around the hall with him after her!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sheena's dress is beautiful and very hot!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sujal loves her giggles and is determined never to let her go out of his life!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

He does love her very much but has not realized it yet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was hilarious when Sheena hit him with a cushion and he was stunned for a couple of moments!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

It was too sensual the way Sujal pasted her against the wall and made her go crazy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sheena loves being close to Sujal but she feels that she has to control herself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sujal is desperate to have Sheena in the way he wants!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But when he felt that Sheena was not responding, he respected her wishes and stopped!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is ready to wait and will only take the next step when she is ready!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Sujal is just too good and no wonder Sheena wanted him to be her first mate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

You couldn't have chosen a more suitable song!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The lyrics match their mood and their situation perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Sheena's shyness is gone now and she has become bold and she wants Sujal to take her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Her black lingerie looked very hot and the colour is very much in tune with their mood!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I loved the way he carried her in his arms to his bedroom!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

His room is beautiful and increased the magic around them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The colours are very significant as white is for love, red for passion and black is for lust!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sheena playing around sensuously with the black satin sheets reminded me of the music video of the song "Aa zara" from Murder 2!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it how Sujal created the perfect atmosphere by lighting the scented candles!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

What did Sujal draw on Sheena's spine with his finger??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Sheena feels very special looking into his intense eyes as something had changed within him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Did she finally see his love for her in his eyes??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Sheena felt that only Sujal had the right to see her like that and so she was totally fine with her bold display!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

It seems like she also loves him and felt that she belonged to him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sujal and Sheena are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was sizzling hot!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was beautiful and just perfect!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally Sujal and Sheena became one and they cherished every moment of their togetherness!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

They both are very much in love and this was the right time to consummate their relationship!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

But then what went wrong because now they are no longer together??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”


Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly sorry for unreserving so late πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† dats main reason why i prefer commenting simultaneously later on it gets slipped from memory πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ...Thanks to Shaina_b...for reminding πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...else i wud have forgotten πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

As for UD 😳😳...commenting is important ☺️ its too difficult ☺️...
Its wonderful as always & ofcourse Romantic 😳😳 ...Thats was mischevious of Sujal to cheat πŸ˜†πŸ˜† but guess All is fair in Love ❀️ & as for Sheena...It must have taken all her strength to show her resistance πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Hope this is not a dream for either of them πŸ˜›πŸ˜› & if its real hope either of them gona be regretting or blaming the other 1 πŸ€”...

Can see flashback ending soon & we coming to present...Hope they sort out things soon 😊😊😊



Edited by -purnima- - 11 years ago

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