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Posted: 13 years ago

hey
first of all i m so sorry 4 being late
kya karo mai hun adaat se majboor 😆

Part 5

Love shots

well written ,awesome part

very romantic as always❤️

Dar ☺️ mr Sujal is so romantic n scary 😆


best place in the whole world 4 sheena wow i think she should say "Please Sujal let me sleep for whole life." ☺️


continue




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Posted: 13 years ago
car scene is nice
well great idea kidnap her mr Sujal
Sujal's possessiveness 😆"Kis ki maut likhi hain jo ke yeh haq mujhse cheen raha hain?" good one
sheena thinking abt challenge is right seems dangerous 😲
hope he is fine
awesome part 👏
waiting 4 next part
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey sorry for not being able to comment on previous update. 😕
Here comes the comment for part 4:-
Sujal can never control himself,😳 i think jab se vo Sheena k saath relation me aaya hai tab se kabhi bhi apne work par just like Sheena 😛 vo theek se focus nahi kar paa raha hoga.😆 Bechari Sheena kya kare vo ab to us k pass us ka na heart hai aur na hi mind dono gaye Sujal k pass.😉 Uper se work pending hone ki vajah se vo itna thak gayi thi ki kuch aur soch hi nahi paa rahi hai 🤔aur Sujal us ko to bus romance k alawa kuch nahi soojhta hai ☺️ aur ye naya tareeka dhoondh liya hai us ne Sheena ka mood fresh karne k liye but that was hot and passionate 😍 even Sheena was unable to control her desires.😳 Sujal is too smart,😊 he knew Sheena will wander for a perfect dress so he gifted her and when he saw her in that dress his mind gone out 😍 and again started their passionate moment. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Coming to the recent update

Awesome,👏 just everything was perfect for a romance.😳 Sujal and Sheena are just perfect for just romance 👍🏼 and the special thing is that they start everywhere.😳 Sometimes i think they just go in any party for romance before time.😆 Thanks to those people who came there and they broke off.😛 Sheena was really damn tired and that's y she slept there on his chest and only their favorite song did the wonder and she woke up dancing at the beats.😍 Sujal purposely bought her out and once again a pool party.😲 Not only Sheena sometimes i too feel fed up with such parties but it's the symbol of belonging to high society .😕 Sujal didn't give her any chance to refuse and he kidnapped her almost.😉 But why the bet? 😕 Sheena was worried he should think it first about Sheena than such bet should be accepted. 😒

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

A huge sorry for being the lastest one to comment. 😒 Romantic update 😳
Sujal was trying to finish his unfinished bussiness when Sheena teased him n he got irritated n left d place now it was Sheena's turn to manao him. 😛
But jab Sujal naraj hoga tab to manana hoga na aur yahan to vo bus acting kar raha tha aur dekho again chance pe dance n both r starting their cute n romantic love sessions newer.❤️
Thank god Sheena n Sujal were conscious abt their premises but loved her bold dialogue that shayad vo darna chahti hai.😉
Obviously busns parties r kind of boaring for ladies except they belong 2 them n same thing happend to Sheena wen Sujal's whole attention was over bsns dscsons. 🤔
Thank god Sujal's boaring convo got over n saw Sheena lost in his fantasy world, loved her sweet warning for his second old gf his work. 😍
Tired Sheena slept over his chest which made his situation embarassing but thank god he awoke her n they danced on d sweet beats of their fav song. 😃
Not again, Sujal again planned a party when she needed a rest but when Sujal has made his mind can ne1 say no to him n that too Sheena? 😎
He knew d best option for him will b 2 kidnap her as herself was least interested n thank god he controlled his passion sensing her tierdness.
She was feeling alone n stranger there n now Sujal n his bet.😔
She was shocked n abt 2 break ne moment, ye Sujal kabhi kisi ki nahi sun sakta just he thinks abt himself,let's see wat happens next. 😕
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much
Just because Sheena stopped Sujal from continuing with the kiss he was irritated and left the car!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - all men r like that
But Sheena didn't give up aur usse mana hi liya and he too was just pretending to be angry!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh they simply love teasing each other
Sujal arrives early at a party just so he can romance Sheena while they are alone!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he always plans well
Sujal is back to romancing Sheena and continued his kissing session with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - now he can't stay away for long
All the time in the world is not enough for them to romance!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yep it isn't
I loved Sheena's bold dialogue ke shayad woh darna chahti hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh as she totally trusts him and wants him to do whatever he wants to bring her pleasure
Due to the people arriving poor Sujal and Sheena had to leave their love session!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - they simply forget the world around them
Sujal surely looked like a cute clown with lipstick all over his lips!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - he always does in watever avatar he is in
Sheena being the dutiful girlfriend she is wiped it off before they entered else Sujal would have been really embarrassed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - she is there to take care of him
They really do look perfect together and is surely the best couple there!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - most definitely they r
As expected Sheena got bored while Sujal was busy in his business discussions!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - it was natural of her since she didn't have an input really
Finally the discussion did get over and Sheena was lost in his fantasy world!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - that was her only option to pass the time
Sujal is head over heels in love with Sheena and so is she and while she loves to stare at him, he too loves it when she is like that!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - they simply can't get enough of each other
I loved her warning about his other girlfriend which is his work!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yeh the typical complaint nearly all women have
Poor Sheena is very tired and she found the cosiest and most comfortable place for her to sleep!!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱 😊 😊 😊 😊 - all the extra work has paid a heavy toll over her
Sheena looked very cute indeed sleeping on Sujal's chest!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - like a child
It was getting embarrassing for Sujal as everyone was staring at them!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 - obviously since they were a midst public
He wanted her to get up and finally she had to agree and dance with him on their favourite song!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - it is very hard to say no to him and to their magical song
Though I am sure Sheena would have loved to sleep on his chest forever!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes surely she would have
It was lovely to have them dance on their favourite song again and be under its spell!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes their magical song made for them
Sheena did the right thing by dragging him out of the party to go home as she was totally exhausted!!!!! 🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱 - yeh otherwise he wouldn't have moved
It was very sweet when Sujal let Sheena rest on his chest in the car and kissed her forehead asking her about why she was so tired!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - after all he cares abt her too much
Sheena really works hard to achieve what she wants!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - that she does
Not again!!!!! Sujal has plans to take her to a pool party on Sunday when Sheena is so tired!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒- yeh he is becoming unreasonable
Phir party?? How many parties does Sujal have to go to aur apna nahi toh Sheena ka toh khayal kare that how tired she is!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - well he is a popular guy who socializes a lot
Sujal said that he would kidnap her if she refused and Sheena actually loved that thought as it sounded so adventurous!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- of course, bad is always too gud
How can anyone say no to Sujal and especially Sheena??😎 😎 😎 😎 - its very difficult indeed
Sujal doesn't want to let go of her and wants her to stay with him tonight!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh he can't depart himself from her
He should have sung "Abhi na jao chodkar ke dil abhi bhara nahi" like Raj did in Lost!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehe yeh that was sweet
Sujal has become very possessive about Sheena and even her joke gets him worked up as he cannot stand the thought of her being with someone else!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - of course he can't allow anyone to take away his precious possession
As promised, Sujal literally kidnapped Sheena and Sheena had to get ready for the party instead of sleeping as she had wanted to!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - as i said very difficult to say no to him
Wakai Sujal ko toh bas party karne ka bahana chahiye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well thats wat sets him loose
Sujal loves challenges and can never back down from one but this bet is a bit scary!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - it surely is yet which challenge isn't
Sheena is soo worried about him and Sujal should think about her before doing such things!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - well sometimes he doesn't
Obviously Sujal always wins and as expected Kunal surfaced first losing the bet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 - the hero always wins
Poor Sheena is about to have a heart attack seeing that Sujal is still underwater!!!!! - anyone wud be too scared for sure
I hope he is fine and not hurt or in any danger!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmm let's see
I am sure he would get a good scolding from Sheena when he comes out and that would serve him right!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - of course it wud

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit


Hi Arwa - hi Suhana

Update was full of love shots.😉😆😆 It was very romantic. - thanks very much for finding it so

Sujal is surely head over heals in love with Sheena and so is she.😃 They dont miss any opportunity to kiss each other even in the middle of the party😆😆😳 - hehehehe they can't get enough of each other

I guess Sujal looked cute with lipstick on his face😍 - yeh he surely looked gud

Poor Sheena is indeed too tired and she slept close to him..Sujal was really uncomfortable with all the stares 😆😆 - hehehe yeh it was embarrassing alright

Sujal loves challenges but this bet is bit scary.Poor Sheena!! she is abt to have heart attack. - yes its very scary indeed






Originally posted by: -purnima-

Love shots 😳😳.. "Love takes over " this UD😛😆😆... - yes it certainly does

aww that was cute way how sheena manofy Mr. Garewal 😆😆😆 & agree with her he wud have surely looked as a clown with lipstick 😆😆😆 a cute clown indeed 😆😆😆 - well they both are perfect for each other as they know how to handle the other

guess sheena found most cosiest & comfortable place to sleep 😍 but poor her inspite of being cudn't rest much 😆😆😆 & had to dance with him 😆... hope she njoyed it 😳😆 sujal surely njoyed the dance 😆😆... - yes indeed she was knackered yet how cud she possibly resist their magical favourite song and him

aww so Mr.Garewal doesn't want to let her go 😆😆 abhi na jao chodkar😛dil abhi bhara nahi 😆😆😆 - that song seems to be favourite amongst u all

My God 😲😲 wat a bet for sujal 😲 it was surely scary 😆... but being hero he is 😍 he will have to win 😳😳😳 ... - yes the hero always wins

continue soon 😃.






Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hi Arwa🤗


Brilliant!!!! Awesome!!!! Superb!!!!! Part!👏👏👏 - hey thanks a lot for loving it

Verry Romantic Part!!!😳☺️☺️ - i'm glad u liked it so much

Hope Sujal is fine!!!😕😕😕 - yeh let's see what happens


Cont.soon

Ayushi







Thanks a lot for loving the part so much




Originally posted by: Mrsimisam

Very very romantic update...😳 - thanks a lot for loving the part so much

its only luv luv n luv...mauka milne ki der h bas...😉.. - hehehe yes they simply steal chances to be together

N sheena sleeping on sujal's chest was too cute...😳 - surely it was

Scared of d bet n waiting 4 d update...😃 - yeh lets see wat happens



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey first of all a big sorry for being late with comment but i think it has become my habit now to say sorry every time 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hey its ok

Coming to the previous update.
Sad one yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - yeh i know its very sad

I hate Sujal seeing like this, he was shattered and i was angry with Sheena without knowing what has she done with him.😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- hmmm yes its very sad for his situation too

How can Sujal be like this? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - thats the big question

Lovely way u described his state you are master in that. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - thanks a lot for appreciating it so much

The flash back was interesting and hot as well, the way Sujal always tease her knowing perfectly her desires which she always try to hide but Sujal is really too smart for that. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - surely its hard to hide her desires when around him

Obviously when she will be distracted than how can we expect her to work properly? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - very hard indeed

Sujal knows everything and when he thought to bring her in the party with him he gifted her dress and couldn't stop drooling over her 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes he is bowled over her beauty everytime

Thank god Naina chose the option to go with him in party instead the later otherwise we can't imagine what's gonna happen? ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
- couoldn't say it would have bad though



Awesome update and Sujal and Sheena always turn the heat on.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep and it becomes too hot

How much they want to romance?😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Their romance quota never finish. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 All the pillars and walls will have a solid proof of their love chemistry.
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - most definitely they all will

Sheena's behavior turned off his mood and he quit but Sheena knows very well how can she turn on his mood. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - after all she is there to take care of him

Thank god the entered in the party and thanks to those people who came their on time disturbing their love sessions.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yes otherwise they wouldn't have stopped at all

How cute Sheena slept over his chest and he was getting embarrassed!!!!! 😍
😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 - well it was awkward in public na

He wanted to get her up but only that song could have done that magic and it did. 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 - yes their magical song

She got up and thanks she pulled her out of the party to go home and have some sleep and when Sujal saw that and he already had a plan he didn't do anything. 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 - yeh she was really tired and he finally saw that

How can she refuse him to go in the party with him because Sujal never give chance to anyone to say no.
- yes its very difficult indeed

That was funny that he almost kidnapped her. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe yes that's Sujal for u

What was that?😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 How can they bet like that? 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 Sheena is too worried. Obviously Sujal always wins but where is he now?😒
😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - it was a dangerous challenge indeed yet the hero always wins

Update fast dear.






Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

awesome part😊😊 - thanks a lot Shreya


whenever and how much they love each other they cant get fullest out of each other anywhere they are turned on😆😆😆 - yep it is very hard indeed to stay away

but when sheena did not allowed him to do so his mood was again off but sheena knows how to make him again in his usual mood and he again taken off her to their world of pleasure☺️☺️😳but thank god that the guests are turning up in time for the party otherwise they both were still busy in their own sessions of love😳😆😉 - hehehhe she is his better half so knows how to bring him back to her. and yes it was a blessing that others turned up in time or they wud have never stopped

poor sheena she was with her sautan 😆😆😆 but this sautan always leads sheena to the beautifull moments which she spent with sujal😉😉😳 and now she is dead tired so she thought of making a pillow of sujal but when noticed the people around him and tried to wake sheena up but she being sheena she almost cuddled more to make a very nice pillow😆😆😆 - yeh after all she was really tired and he was the best comfy place

here in car also while returning from the party sujal asked her to come along yet another party but she is no good mood for another party but as he said he said he will kidnap if she refused to come and he done exactly that😆😆😆 - it is very hard to refuse him especially when he makes a decision

but what happened to him in the pool is he in some danger😕 - well let's see what happens

waiting eagerly for the next part soon😳
shreya😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Gud one 👍🏼 I think Sujal n Sheena ko poori duniya me jitna bhi waqt hai na kam pad jaayega agar de bhi diya jaaye romance karne k liye to. 😳 Ab yahan party start hone waali hai phir bhi dono lage hue hain romance me .😉 - hehehe they simply can't stay away from each other so wat to do

Kitna tired thi na Sheena ki Sujal k shoulder par hi so gayi aur Sujal ko sab ghoorne lage ki dono kya kar rahe hain aise?🤔 - yeh it was very embarrassing for him

Thank to Dance jis k liye Sheena uth gayi at least aur dono ghar jaane k liye ready hue. - haan onka magical song jo tha

😉 Phir party? Ye kitne party karta hai Sujal?😲 Us ko apna to nahi par at least Sheena ka khayal hona hi chahiye ki vo kitna thak jaati hai. - well that's what makes him the popular guy he is

Ab uper se ye bet...kya jaroorat thi is ki? 😡 Apne ko aur kitna macho prove karna chahta hai Sujal? Ab jab Sheena se daat padegi na to pata chalega.😛 - he is the hero who loves challenges so it really can't be helped. Let's see what Sheean ends up doing

Jaldi karna yaar update waiting for next part.





Originally posted by: innocent_eyes


Hey gr8 updates arwa , loved it...really sorry din't comment on the previous one n evn now commenting in few lines...ssorry bit busy, will try to comment in more detailed next update...the bet was bit scary, hope our is all safe n sound

take care

Cont soon...



Thanks a lot for loving the part that much and it's ok. I'm glad u found time to finally read and comment.

Yes it is scary yet let's see what happens next





Originally posted by: raheelu

hey

first of all i m so sorry 4 being late
kya karo mai hun adaat se majboor 😆 - hehehe it's forgiven

Part 5

Love shots

well written ,awesome part

very romantic as always❤️- thanks a lot for loving the part so much


Dar ☺️ mr Sujal is so romantic n scary 😆 - he sure is


best place in the whole world 4 sheena wow i think she should say "Please Sujal let me sleep for whole life." ☺️ - hehehe yeh it certainly is the best place


continue


car scene is nice - thanks for loving it

well great idea kidnap her mr Sujal - yep it wud be fun for sure

Sujal's possessiveness 😆"Kis ki maut likhi hain jo ke yeh haq mujhse cheen raha hain?" good one - yeh that's Sujal Garewal for u

sheena thinking abt challenge is right seems dangerous 😲
hope he is fine - hmmm it is dangerous yet which challenge isn't. Let's see what happens

awesome part 👏
waiting 4 next part - thanks alot for loving it a lot
update soon





Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey sorry for not being able to comment on previous update. 😕 - it's ok

Here comes the comment for part 4:-
Sujal can never control himself,😳 i think jab se vo Sheena k saath relation me aaya hai tab se kabhi bhi apne work par just like Sheena 😛 vo theek se focus nahi kar paa raha hoga.😆 Bechari Sheena kya kare vo ab to us k pass us ka na heart hai aur na hi mind dono gaye Sujal k pass.😉 - yep both of them are sailing in thr same boat where they can't simply stop thinking abt each other and all work is left undone

Uper se work pending hone ki vajah se vo itna thak gayi thi ki kuch aur soch hi nahi paa rahi hai 🤔aur Sujal us ko to bus romance k alawa kuch nahi soojhta hai ☺️aur ye naya tareeka dhoondh liya hai us ne Sheena ka mood fresh karne k liye but that was hot and passionate 😍 even Sheena was unable to control her desires.😳 - well he surely had to get her into the mood and take all her tiredness away so what best than to simply love her

Sujal is too smart,😊 he knew Sheena will wander for a perfect dress so he gifted her and when he saw her in that dress his mind gone out 😍 and again started their passionate moment. 😳
- as i said they simply can't resist each other no matter what


Coming to the recent update

Awesome,👏 just everything was perfect for a romance.😳 - thanks alot for loving it

Sujal and Sheena are just perfect for just romance 👍🏼 and the special thing is that they start everywhere.😳 - yeh they simply forget time and space

Sometimes i think they just go in any party for romance before time.😆 - yes they do very much

Thanks to those people who came there and they broke off.😛 - yes otherwise they wouldn't have stopped

Sheena was really damn tired and that's y she slept there on his chest and only their favorite song did the wonder and she woke up dancing at the beats.😍 - well it is their magical song so all her tiredness was bound to vanish

Sujal purposely bought her out and once again a pool party.😲 Not only Sheena sometimes i too feel fed up with such parties but it's the symbol of belonging to high society .😕 - absolutely it is the cost u have to pay for being in high society

Sujal didn't give her any chance to refuse and he kidnapped her almost.😉 - well he does what he says

But why the bet? 😕 Sheena was worried he should think it first about Sheena than such bet should be accepted. 😒 - well thats just something he never does

update soon




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when will u update???? please reply

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