~*Arhi FF--Unbroken*~ Chap 6 Pg 20

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Nice presentation; well written update !!!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

WOOO! update! hahahahaha! khushi bit arnav!

arnva reaction?! next please!lol

xxx

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@SK1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awww dear...lovely update yaar...👏
waiting for next one...😳

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Fatima

@.infinite.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Amazinggg update...loved it...Arnav used to be so nice to Khushi, i wonder why they became enemies...anyways this update was superbbb and this bit was hilarious:

"You know that tv show i watch? The one with the very hot guy in it?" she asked him. Arnav looked confused, what does a tv show have to do with her crying, he thought.

"Yeaa?" he managed.

"Well, he died..." Khushi replied in between sobs. This was the end. Out of all the things in the world she was crying over a guy who died in a TV Show? This girl is unbelieveable, he thought to himself. Arnav was tempted to laugh but he knew better then this. Instead he pretended like it was a tragedy.

"Oh my God...how could they kill him, he was an amazing fella!" Arnav replied, putting his best dissappointed expression on his face.

"I know..." Khushi sobbed, "That stupid producer, how could he be so mean...just wait, wait tell i learn Karate, he will be my first target."

amazinggg work...keep it up...!!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Ammie!!

I loved the update.

The flashback scene was really great to read. I love the contrast in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. You've written it really well.

Looking forward to the next part dear!!

Thanks for the PM...😊

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Very nice update! Loved the possessiveness of Arnav. The flashback was also very good Continue soon.!

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

hehehehe she bit him now that is funny...continue with the next part no cliffhangers

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

nice...please pm me, when you update...

Thanks

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

hey the story is quite interesting!!!!

pls add me to ur pm list!!!

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shaheerdiwani

@shaheerdiwani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Hey Ammie ... Awesum update darling ...man ... Arnav Singh Raizada is back ...he alwayz makes our dear Khushi cry ... I really want to know wat has caused dis enemity between so close friends ... btw luvd d tv show actor vaala scene ..too gud ... update soon pls ...cant wait for d next part ...n I bet no one wud have slept thru it ... 😃 gr8 work !