~*Arhi FF--Unbroken*~ Chap 6 Pg 20 - Page 7

Originally posted by: -Manita-

Nice presentation; well written update !!!

Originally posted by: Zbegum

WOOO! update! hahahahaha! khushi bit arnav!

arnva reaction?! next please!lol

xxx

Originally posted by: SK1991

awww dear...lovely update yaar...👏
waiting for next one...😳

Originally posted by: -Fatz-

Amazinggg update...loved it...Arnav used to be so nice to Khushi, i wonder why they became enemies...anyways this update was superbbb and this bit was hilarious:

"You know that tv show i watch? The one with the very hot guy in it?" she asked him. Arnav looked confused, what does a tv show have to do with her crying, he thought.

"Yeaa?" he managed.

"Well, he died..." Khushi replied in between sobs. This was the end. Out of all the things in the world she was crying over a guy who died in a TV Show? This girl is unbelieveable, he thought to himself. Arnav was tempted to laugh but he knew better then this. Instead he pretended like it was a tragedy.

"Oh my God...how could they kill him, he was an amazing fella!" Arnav replied, putting his best dissappointed expression on his face.

"I know..." Khushi sobbed, "That stupid producer, how could he be so mean...just wait, wait tell i learn Karate, he will be my first target."

amazinggg work...keep it up...!!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Ammie!!

I loved the update.

The flashback scene was really great to read. I love the contrast in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. You've written it really well.

Looking forward to the next part dear!!

Thanks for the PM...😊