Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Things are getting more confusing with time

Wanna know there past

Plz update soon and Thanks foR pm

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

was wondering what happened to this ff!...i hope you do more frequent updates...kinda confused about what may have gone wrong...but if i were to make a guess, i feel like she was kinda career-oriented and sent varun off to boarding school...cuz you said varun was the only thing they disagreed about...i dunno i may completely wrong but just guessing...i hope varun's return brings them back together as a family...continue soonnn

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

beautifully written

their past was nice

eager to read next part

continue soon

thanks for the pm 😊

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

this is just so heart wrenching payal...wonder whats the dreadful past dat has caused so much distant feelings in mayank's heart...it might b sumthing related to nupur's career..but something more crucial has to b there...but what, is yet to get unveiled...this time continue really soon dear😊

Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 13 years ago

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

i am little confused, so waiting for Next part

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

waiting desperately 2 know wht went wrong btwn both of dem!!!!

it seems like mayank's ego s coming between their love...

nice update...ur writing depicted nupur's n mayank's emotional turmoil perfectly...continue soon

thanx fr d pm🤗

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

akhir howa kya hai...in dono k Beech...???
i can't see them like this...plzzz palluu...🥺
n i want to see...where is VARUN...???😕
well as usual a fab update pallu...the feeling they r both going through...u wrote it so well...👏
i wont say u to continue SOON...kyun k aysa tu honay nahi wala...hainaaa..🤔
tu update LATE...😳🤣
okay just kidding...😳😆
luv yaa..❤️
Annu🤗

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Just read d start

Wow

Another one

Totally loved it

Cont soon

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Part 2:
Past was nice

Wanna know d reason for this stiffness

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

I luved every bit of it..
As the title says,falling apart is not easy.At times,the memories from past floods back in and no matter how u try to withhold from it,u find urself getting caught in the webs.
cont soon