Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

wow payal very nice update...

very nice...:):):)

continue soon...

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

they are apart from 10 yrs thats long

the past was lovely very cute

thanks for the pm

😊

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bhargavi

@gopi06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

nice updt payal
thanks for the pm

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Nice update😳
cont soon

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

exceptionally well written...their past is heartwarming n present at the same time heart wrenching...whats the thing thats falling them apart?n whats the remedy of this distance which is keeping them apart 4m each other?💔plzzz remove their distance yaar..it hurts to see them so helplesscontinue the next part soon plzz

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Awww i loved loved loved the flash back :)

Im guessing the issue has to do with Varun???

Anyhow, do update soon..you are going great, girl :D

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

intresting n strange..the present is full of loads of aprehension...while past has a sweet strt..tht indeed is need in present too...

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mayur247

@mayur247

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Very nice part Payal! Please continue soon! :) It was lovely to read their past! It was so cute...😃

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Past was cute

Plz update it soon

thanks For pm

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shivi02

@shivi02

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

"Mayank'who tumhe yaad hai naa'kal who Varun is gonna come so'would you'"

pallu when u edited the dots vanished in btw...do take care of these small things😊

hope u don't mind me saying😛😳

nice update...looking forward to see what's the real problem bwt them

love ya🤗
shivi😃