Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#431

The first part ws like a dream come true..Dont know how many times i reread that portion...Mayank clicking the most adorable sight ever-a sleeping nupur with her sleeping son on her lap...that scene wud hav been a treat to watch in real...*sigh*...
Anyways i think mayank is over reacting this time...I dont see varun having some great difficulty in boarding...hope nupur can make him open up soon...its high time now...
Beautifully written...
Cont...

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#432

so many questions to answers

is fight is the only solution?

nice update

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

god you update after ages and still the little positivity in the beginning is crushed with mayank's paranoid thoughts...please show us some light in the next update...and more than that, make the update sooner!

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

nice updt payal
hope mayank open up soon.
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

awesomest update

hope mayank too realise his nupur's true feeling

wat she did 4 their son..not to give pain to him..

thanks 4 the pm

msay god bless u

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#436

amazing part

do continue soon

eager to read nxt part

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Passion_17

@Passion_17

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

I'm really waiting 4 d showdown nw...nupur needs 2 knw d reason behind mayank's detached behaviour...she has every right 2 knw...d way u described Mayanks reaction on seeing dem was very beautiful...n he clicked a pic of theirs 2... 😳 Hw adorable...:)
Pls continue soon...I cnt wait 4 another 15 days 4 d nxt update 😆
N dnt worry abt ur writing n story...u r doing a very good job at it...I'm loving it 😃 Thanx 4 d pm:)

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

very nice update.

continue soon

thanks for the pm.

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ESHITA GHOSH

@Eshita_Sweety

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

i am reading the last few parts of ur ff...by checking ur pms..i m very much irregular on i-f n datzz y on bein late my comments r appearing one after another..sorry abt the same but i make sure i check all ur ffs..as i love reading them! :)