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maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
different story. please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
well that was awesome update...
can't wait for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
will we be getting an update today...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sooks
First things first

"And don't ever give me orders. I am as much neck deep in this shit as you are. Understand?" She said and walked out of his cabin.

"Bitch" He growled in frustration and picked up the blaring phone.

This was the best line of the update ;D

Yeah coming to other things, this was pretty emotional.

Geet's reaction to the changes in Maan's lifestyle were completely understandable, something to which I could connect very well. I was glad to read that Maan noticed all those things and was even missed her.

I guess this does happen in relationships when concern and anger get converted into sarcasm and indifference and hurt feelings are masked by awkwardness. The worst part is that the mask keeps slipping off and the real person behind it peeps out, making it impossible to forget them.

Do these relationships survive the damage and become as they were ever again? I guess not.

Screw the nostalgia.

Nice update


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

Hey Sooks

First things first

"And don't ever give me orders. I am as much neck deep in this shit as you are. Understand?" She said and walked out of his cabin.

"Bitch" He growled in frustration and picked up the blaring phone.

This was the best line of the update ;D

Yeah coming to other things, this was pretty emotional.

Geet's reaction to the changes in Maan's lifestyle were completely understandable, something to which I could connect very well. I was glad to read that Maan noticed all those things and was even missed her.

I guess this does happen in relationships when concern and anger get converted into sarcasm and indifference and hurt feelings are masked by awkwardness. The worst part is that the mask keeps slipping off and the real person behind it peeps out, making it impossible to forget them.

Do these relationships survive the damage and become as they were ever again? I guess not.

Screw the nostalgia.

Nice update




Nicely said!!! Touche!
mechantefille thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooks are we getting an update today? Or is the lack of sleep marring your eloquence?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks :D
Sur_10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
"Update status: New chapter in an hour"
on behalf of Sookie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey are we getting an update today? Or maybe this is your once a week day off?

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