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@eminent

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Alright I've finally caught up- 7 chapters all in one day! 😃

I have to say I'm loving this 'complicated relationship Maan and Geet share. It kind of reminds me of the characters Conner and Jenny in Ghosts of Girlfriends Past...-especially the photo bit... (Jennifer Garner w/ Matthew McCon.)

Anyhow I'm hooked like I was to your Till Humans....
I really appreciate and love the intricate details you put into your works Sookie- it gives more dimension and dynamics to the story and the characters.

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

superbbb!!!!

glad to see that someone is with maan in the office who his helping him and has a become a great friend of his!

continue soon!

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chalobhago

@chalobhago

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

LOOOVED IT!!! Sookie your trhiller is great but your drama has something completely different about it, even with all this love/hatred in it...It reminds me of my freindship with my bestfreind, who I consider as my little brother, so we dont have all that love/hatred beetween us but we have experienced a lot together and also met a lot of conflicts in our lives

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-Saibo-

@-Saibo-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

He has this weird twisted plan doesn't he? But gosh he's adorable with geet :P

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Fabulous chapter!!

Ah, Satya is back with a bang 😆 I love his character :)

And once again, the Maan-Geet repartee is a refreshing read <3

xoxo

Aanya

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Edited!...

And I missed Satya - gotta say after Till Human...I imagine him as Sushant ❤️ - superbly underutilized in the industry!😡

I Absolutely LOVE Vertical Horizon.

So is the music or the video in tune with Maan/Geet at the mo??

Perfect - Satya's back! It was bout time a friend/devil's advo.../Sidekick ...nah! / voice of reason...was introduced in the picture.

I gotta say they almost seem to have chemistry between themselves!! And as the new best friend status unveils - Satya's faced with trials too. Nicely done!!

And Maan has a picture of Geet - a reminder/ a memory of happier times or a life when it wasn't all that complicated - or was it just the moment he fell in love with her? Am I analysing way too much here?? 😲

And!!! He's so sure about it - so basically they've had the convo before about their relationship status - and he's the one who's sure - she isn't. Suddenly the hot models in his hospital bed make a lot of sense. And...so do Geet's responses/reactions.

Maan is quite forthcoming towards Satya about info bout Geet - are the others in the family as aware??

And it's so convenient - wanna hide - oh, the hospital's always there! Perfect!

All in all - given, the status of things int he company - seems like Vikram and Mitalee feared the day, Maan utilized his brains to work in one of the Khurana companies!!

P.s. - this is the only FF where I actually bother reading the rest of the comments! Sigh...what have you done to me , Sookie!

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Loved it so much!
Maaneet are so cuteee<3
i hope they are a couple in this ff!
thanks for the pm
cont soon

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Awesome. Maan is trying to find out what is he for Geet. You seem to have a never ending attraction for Satya, isnt it? In fact I was wondering if I was reading an epilogue to "Till human voices wake" after reading the opening line to Chpater 7. It took sometime to understand that you have a Satya here too.