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Posted: 13 years ago
A lovely update as usual Sooks.
This Geet is a feisty one. RAWR. 😆
Loved the Maaneet convo as usual, now I'm really curious to know what happened between the families!
Is the copper and zinc thing really true? huh, I'm learning something new everyday.
Thanks for the PM and Sookie zindabad! 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow sookie love ur update!!!
cant wait to read more!!
defo there is a dark past in both their life!!
continue soon..
love it!!
thx for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
How come its only me who noticed that Geet was blushing and Maan's heart rate increased (which wasnt the case with the "topless" wannabe model but a fully covered Geet) when they were close to each other?Thats why my heart rate went fast too😃

I guess I keep looking out for these things and thats why I noticed this...

The convo between father (the formality level is surprising - not papa, not dad!!) and son was kind of ...i dont know what to say... feel sad for the lack of affection in Maan's life in his childhood - yet he went ahead with MIT and ivy League - whoa !! I would have drowned in drugs !!😆

Its getting fishier and fishier - Maan's father betrayed, Geet's mother betrayed... kind of loads of sh** in their history...😡

Grand update, love you Sookie...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

How come its only me who noticed that Geet was blushing and Maan's heart rate increased (which wasnt the case with the "topless" wannabe model but a fully covered Geet) when they were close to each other?Thats why my heart rate went fast too😃

I guess I keep looking out for these things and thats why I noticed this...



My dear you are not the only one noticed that...😃 a piece of my post on the closeness...

"the sheer presence of each other and the heart race up the beats..turning cheeks to pink. After all we do have something in common to bring out on surface."
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl


Yes GF, read most of the Maaneet ones - i just love her subtle humour (witty humor with brains!!)- my special likings are the adult content notice, maan losing memory and maan on geet's scooty (i think i shud go back and read them once more)😆 - but she is so kanjoos with plain romance - i wonder what she'll do in this one - she says this is something that she hasnt written before - i hope she doesnt end up killing maan out of extreme alcohol consumption( its a drama you know, that too Sook's drama, so i am expecting the extremes) or pair up geet with someone else(Jaz syndrome😆)...I'll die of heartbreak if these happen..

Let me know where to order one more😆



Sorry I'm butting into this elaborate conversation - but I gotta say - the whole discussion on that 'Works of Sookie'' have me thoroughly engaged !!! Thanks! I was FF deficient!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille



Sorry I'm butting into this elaborate conversation - but I gotta say - the whole discussion on that 'Works of Sookie'' have me thoroughly engaged !!! Thanks! I was FF deficient!



Oh no need to say sorry...its an open forum...anyone can butt in and input their valuable cents...
this is how Sookie's writings are she get her readers involve with each other...if you have not read the one's we are referring do read them...I highly recommend. although some of them I don't get it but there is still something there that it pulls me to read...(excluding Death Talkies 😳) And don't forget the one Maidens and Madmen. Its 55 Word Fiction, it has 55 words only.
My Favorite and the 1st encounter of Sookie's work was He creates history and hands me a miracle (OS)
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 4
amusing...
wow they actually have a common past, their parents...
Maan has all the abilities and talents that can take him to heights...
wanna read more on these 2...
ur stories always impress me and attracts me so much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! I love Maan's character in this one, really <3

Oooh you really are making it dramatic! I'd love to know more about Maan & Geet's shared history!

Fabulous work, Sookie! I'm more in love with this FF, than my comments convey :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime



Sorry I'm butting into this elaborate conversation - but I gotta say - the whole discussion on that 'Works of Sookie'' have me thoroughly engaged !!! Thanks! I was FF deficient!



Oh no need to say sorry...its an open forum...anyone can butt in and input their valuable cents...
this is how Sookie's writings are she get her readers involve with each other...if you have not read the one's we are referring do read them...I highly recommend. although some of them I don't get it but there is still something there that it pulls me to read...(excluding Death Talkies 😳) And don't forget the one Maidens and Madmen. Its 55 Word Fiction, it has 55 words only.
My Favorite and the 1st encounter of Sookie's work was He creates history and hands me a miracle (OS)


Yes Yes Sookie _ realize - I talk about you on ur own thread on your OWN story about ur work - So me asking u outright!! Babe - Links please!! I think a PM in in order...uhh frm me to u i.e

@Newdime...Ola--and thanks a load!! Am addicted to this Maan and I've only read the murder mystery so a heads up was very welcome!!

@Mysty - waddup!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting...liking it...love and money ! wow nyc combination !!
too many mysteries in the hiding I get...would love to see how they unfurl and seems like there is a lot more to both Maan and Geet...some childhood friendship...something close something that makes them connect to the other ...

The chemistry is brilliant and the character portrayal of the Khurana Clan is bitchy...excluding Maan he is kinda longing for genuine love and care...hope he finds it in Geet..maybe he has its just in denial !

Nice series Sooks :)

Take care,
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