Translucence - Finished. - Page 16

part 3 ...

I look forward to reading your updates, Sookie. Great update! Skeletons seem to be stuffed into the Khuranas' closets. Hm.. So Maan wants to find out the mystery? And Geet doesn't want to did into the past. The physical assault was unexpected. I'm starting to like this Geet. lol

wow!! it's getting interesting.

chapter 4 ...

My heart going

When I read through first quarter, it hurt me, the way Geet reacted. Not that I mind the way she grabbed him and slammed him in the wall. It was stupendo fantabulously fantastic. It was worth the hit, not for this Maan but the Maan on the show. I know I know it's not his fault that he lost his memory but where is the heck his common sense..may be grazing the grass somewhere.

Coming back to my point, the reason I was upset cause then, it's a hate relationship between those 2. Then I said, you know there is nothing will grow in between these two, then why taking to the heart.

I had read few times the part with Maan conversing with his father and the last part with Geet.

Father craves the love for his son, and seek for forgiveness and looks for solace. The burden of regrets getting heavier to be carried on the old shoulders. It was the beginning, of the relationship that might cure the wounds to lead towards healing. Make the most of your regrets. . . . To regret deeply is to live afresh.

Son, holds back to cajole with his father as the past does not let him through. Let the months and years come, they can take nothing from him, they can take nothing more. He is so alone, and so without hope that he can confront them without fear. The life that has borne him through these years is still in his hands. Whether he has subdued it, he knows not. But so long as it is there it will seek its own way out, heedless of the will that is within him.

Maan to Geet, vice versa is a friend who speak the language of silence an understanding of each other's unsaid words, the sentiments that is the connection that keeps them in humor. Impulsive actions torture each other for the time being. But realization haunts to seek for forgiveness such is the relation I see through my eyes.

Perhaps the most important thing we bring to another person is the silence in us, not the sort of silence that is filled with unspoken criticism or hard withdrawal. The sort of silence that is a place of refuge, of rest, of acceptance of someone as they are. We are all hungry for this other silence. It is hard to find. In its presence we can remember something beyond the moment, a strength on which to build a life. Silence is a place of great power and healing.

Let put aside the sheer presence of each other and the heart race up the beats..turning cheeks to pink. After all we do have something in common to bring out on surface.

It might not be relevant to what was written today, perhaps it was an excuse for Shalu's thoughts to ponder in words.

Wow...love your FF...like this Maan and Geet very much. So they know each other since a long time...i really am curious about their past. It will be fun to watch these two joing forces against whoever has wronged them. I hate that Vikram and Mitali...what cowards...when they were insulting Maan it was okay but when they got it back, they started getting physical. Man what a famiy...

can't wait for the update. Please update soon and add me to your PM list.
Thanks

Loved your take. So Mrs Handa was a more than a match for Sr. Mr. Khurana!! Well I guess, then both Maan and Geet are in equal footing!😉

Wow Sookie! This is completely different from the previous one. I love the charecterization of Maan and Geet.