The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113 - Page 46

Wow... m shocked beyond wits! I have never-ever unreserved any of my slots so soon! God! I don't even edit my comments in my sister's FF and to top it all I don't even bother reserving a slot, I make her do that from my ID! And no need to assume anything, I am openly declaring I am an ideal younger sister.

I was eating Maggie for dinner (and I will soon be murdered at the hands of mum! Just till she finds out I dumped her veggies for noodles)... Why am I telling you about Maggie . . . Well the thing is! I almost spewed it while reading! Because you girl have written the CON (wait a minute! I do not mean the Deed here, I meant . . . as you-must-have-guessed . . . constipation) with such vivid and authentic description that nothing was left to my imagination and I could without so much as any effort, conjure the image of Geet sitting on the toilet seat holding her stomach! And I am very much certain I will not be able to digest the Maggie now. So much for standing in the kitchen for fifteen minutes and cooking!

One of my favourite lines I've ever read on IF (Did the virgin till marriage rules apply only to women? If she was planning to save herself up for marriage, then why can't a bloody guy tread on the same pure path! )

I read the line and I was like BINGO! I actually shrieked!

Now, coming to the pressing question . . . Girl what, wait! Let me reframe it . . . WHY (screaming and crying) why do you always put Geet in such horribly embarrassing situations! Men should be put in such situations and women should enjoy having fun! I do realise conjuring MSK sitting on the toilet seat and all wouldn't really be good for his image but do I care, not really! As long as the men suffer or whatever you'd find me grinning and when it's Geet in a tight spot you'd find me crying! God! She is such a darling and you made her take life decisions while peeing.

When I read the previous chapter . . . I cussed and mentally strangled Maan to death! I wanted him to be fed to the sharks and the sharks to be torn apart and incinerated and the ash buried in pig shit! But you girl turned the tables cho bery bery nychly, that now I feel guilty for having thought so!

PS: Although I know you must have been told so countless times, still . . . You are a gem for a writer!

You seriously are an insane person. Love the insanity too much. From where to where in two updates!!!!! Too bad for the miracle child of John and Arjun when it will be delivered. She will yet make a murderer of this man I am sure, and a face full of snot is just revenge for how she felt.

Superb, outstanding, marvelous, rain of rose petals on you. Satisfied, or need more?

Awesum updates
Thanx for two updates

LMFAOOO!!!!!! 🤣 🤣 WOMAN u made me look like a fool laughing like a banshee (since u include her everywhere i felt the need to include her too lol) in the midst of utter silence in the comp lab and get those weird and she is crazy kinda looks from all the other students there ( i tried so hard not to laugh but failed miserably).. WHERE i ask WHERE do u get these crazy imaginations from?? (duhh ur brain but umm yea) u r soo unpredictable and hilariously hilarious like how did u just come up with all that snot scene and the constipation problem and my god were u so descriptive🤣... ahh i absolutely LOVEDDD both of these updates and i seriously cant wait for the next one...GOOD tht maan wasnt with that 🤢 sanjana or else i would have, ummm would have killed him ... and my gosh our geet is such a drama queen lmao stomach cancer ?!?! 😆and her little rants about dying and her last moments🤣 i tell you u r one heck of a writer and i have a confession to make.. I absolutely LOVE YOUU 😛 ok so now i tried my best to give u a long comment but now its ur turn to make another long chap and update asap 😃

girl, im at the moment killing myself laughing!!
im happy that maan has nothing more to do with that bi*** and also sorry for him that he missed his flight because of geets ehem ehem. verrryyy immmportanttt problems like stomache cancer!!! 🤣 🤣🤣
me just now wondering if geet will realy survive after this!!!!
continue soon!!

YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT WAS FOR ME TO NOT LAUGH OUT LOUD AT WORK?

i em really happy for ds update..