The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113

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funnymonkey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

Don't use past tense when referring to Arjun Rampal. You must always love him! Lol! I watched the movie because of him as well. When he came onto the screen I squealed and whistled and was told to shut up. But I cared not a damn. I think I had a moment of silence, admiring his existence. Then I proceeded with my lusting session 'aaah-ing and oooh-ing' throughout the whole movie.

Which reminds me. Watch Force! Oh man! Even the villain was hot! I was so confused. WHO DO I SUPPORT!? John or the sexy villain!? *runs around in circles screaming Maaahi*

ahaha oooppps I mean I still am obssessed with Arjun...omg when he came in the song Dhano my frinds and I went crazy..and we started singing and dancing and whistling 😆😆😆

OH MY GOD!!!AAAHHH JOHN my other obsession..he is so hot and his body is is Yummy lmao...I am getting way too excited now..I am so glad he is single..😆😆😆

Wait there is a sexy villian in the movie and it is not JOHN? Who is it? OH MY God now I have to watch the movie 😆😆

If I have to amke a list of the guys then I would say
1.) Arjun

2.) Maan/John😕😕

3.) Ranbir

4.) Imran

5.) Maybe shk (but he is getting old...sorrry shk fans😆😆)

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sammy !! Damn , Geets exaggerated histrionics and self pity nearly drowned out Maan's struggle with himself in this update !

Freak man! This woman is .. she's.. 🤣.. huh..🤣.. sneezed like a man! too much snot for such a tiny nose!🤣. paranoid about miracle baby.. and made him shoot a a traffic light, threaten an entire hospital and miss his all-imp flight for her constipated little behind!!!🤣.. 🤣

Damn, NOw I 'm feeling bad for Maan 🤣.. This has to be the most helter-skelter-nut brained-flighty-Ms veritable 'embarrassment'-walking-in-two-shoes I have ever come across in all your ff's🤣

Brilliant job.. Update soon !

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Princess DD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

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I have no words... First let me finish rolling on the floor and laughing out as loud as i can

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jdots

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

hey u updated again...Wow that is nice..

Liked you update...

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590865

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Ch 15
aaawww maan left her... I'm so happy that she chose death over incarceration!!! No silly, not bcoz I want her to die!!! But bcoz it made maan open up to her!!!

Girl I thought you were done with the shocks 😡 What was all this now??!!!
I was eating my food when I read about maan doing ahem ahem with that bitch!!! 🤬 and literally I choked on my food!!!

Why are you so hell bent upon making me hate maan??? I digested the fact that he kills people cold-bloodedly... but this was tooo much to digest!!! Maan with another girl in bed... can't even imagine!!!

Now I'm off to reading part 16.. Will comment on it after reading

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Ok I'm just gonna update my comments for both chapters here.. but first of let me say that though I am not lusting over John .. but those pictures with his absolutely large biceps and tattoo and all ... really made me think otherwise ... *fans herself* ☺️ and OH! I have come to a conclusion. Never again shall I read any of your updates in my uni library. NEVER. Even if it means that you've updated I shall wait till I get home because dammit I need to react openly and not have to restrain my choking laughter .. gosh that was horrible. ___________________________________________________________________________ Ahhh I knew she would pick death. And you made her say what I said in my last comment 😃 .. wow I predicted right.. and what happened afterwards was pretty scary ... I was literally sliding off my chair in anticipation .. almost chewed all my nails off thinking she was going to drown 😳 .. that was horrible .. he can be so sadistic it's scary .. but then we are talking about a gangster here.. And you FINALLY make him let out his feelings!! 🥳 Gosh how I waited for this because I really wanted to sympathize with this man no matter how much I hated him so far .. I mean there just had to be a valid reason he is so effected by her and a reason for why he does what he does for a living. Gosh having to relive all those horrid memories day after day .. night after night .. must be excruciatingly painful for him .. somewhere down the line I think he may feel his actions for killing "cowards" are justified .. for him .. although it is totally and ethically wrong for him to do so on any level .. so although I hate him for ending so many lives so easily and without any hesitations .. you really did your job in making me realize why I can feel for him in such situations .. I mean you see so many people who've gone through such horrendous incidents in their life . esp Maan at an early age .. that they are desensitized with the notion of killing .. these moments in life show them the other side of life .. the harsh/cruel/disgusting one from which you figure out that being a coward is not the answer rather facing problems head on is much better.. I mean he was just a kid but I hope he doesn't blame himself for not being there for his sister when she was going through the torture .. really hope not! The fact that he even CRIED .. I mean you can see how mentally scarred he has become with that one instance that he even let his guard down enough to tear up in front of a girl let alone Geet.. but she understood his stance just like I have come to ... good job Sammy .. I mean you actually justified a gangster's actions so well! 👏 And ohooo you're GOOD! Writing Geet's POV first and then Maan's to totally put us in a fix.. I mean first off the dining room scene was flipping hilarious and how she make him choke with her shaving comment ... goodness she is truly somethin 😆 but I mean right the next second with Sanjana's entry 🤢 I was muttering all the curses from the English dictionary at him! I was like ughhh how dare he.. ew ew ew .. and that excuse of a woman with her s**tty attitude ... disgusting to say the least! I felt just like Geet that time minus the constipation 🤣 oh man poor Geet .. she is going through the worst day possible and then this ... dear Lord that was painful to read LMAO .. I can't believe you did that 😆 Has she not gone through enough pain that you're giving her such a problem ..😡😆 But yes I almost puked when I read that Maan was on top of Sanjana .. aghhh I almost felt my stomach rolling with disgust .. but then thankyou for updating the next part to clear all our doubts.. you saved me from muttering curses at him and changed the POV .. Ohhh I felt sorry for Geet that was was bawling over with tears .. they both care for each other but right now that's the last thing they'd want to admit to themselves let alone each other. I mean Maan has been acting like a frantic maniac ever since that pipeline day .. he's been cleverly avoiding any possibility of him killing her .. and I was right that he saw a bravery in her that he saw in noone else ..esp a girl .. so he's totally fallen for her but the moron won't admit it!! 😡 And as for Geet ... the pool incident totally changed her mind again though she had to witness that horrid sight although it wasn't what she thought it to be ... oh damn I wonder how much she's going to avoid him now .. And then the whole constipation scene 🤣 LMAOOO stomach cancer.. nice one xD ..the dude was already troubled with a mere sneeze (btw snot EWWW 🤢😆) and she's going around happily saying she has stomach cancer and is going to diee 🤣 OH MAN Lord save him if he ever gets married to her and she has to give birth .. the thought itself scares me 😳😆 .. but gosh that was hilarious .. and again .. fact that I read this in the library DID.NOT.HELP. Okay so Geet totally just saved herself from potential death for the 50th time since she met Maan ... so good for her for looking away 😆 .. but I'd want to die too if a guy found out about my CONSTIPATION PROBLEMS! 😳😆😆 AMAZING UPDATES SAMMY! MUAH MUAH MUAH I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU! ❤️🤗❤️🤗 .. there is that enough love for ya!? 😃 Z

Edited by Mk.Gh - 13 years ago

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

sammy both the updates were so awesome... i totally loved them...

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samidsamid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Awsm updt...jst cnt stp laufing...oh hell conticeptn...omg poor geet feeling bad 4 her cnt even face maan...;)

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590865

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

Ch 16
thankyou sooo much that maan didn't do anything with that bitch!!! But is he virgin?? I guess not!! I'm so with geet on this that y is it always girls r expected to save their virtue till marriage n not men 😡

The constipation problem was so hilarious... Geet faked it to be stomach cancer and poor maan even believed her!!! his threat to the nurse was adorable... That shows how much he cares for her!!! But Now she's in serious trouble!!! Lol!!!

Thankyou so much for clearing everything and love you loads...

Plz continue soon... Will be waiting...

Ps sorry my like button is not working... Will press it later

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shamla sadique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#480

first of all luv u luv u luv u alot for the 2 updates
Geet sneezed on maan eeewww
stomach cancer lol! I hada tough time stopping my laughter...continue soon...

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