The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

****N--E--X--T W--E--E--K****

omg...

and the update was fabulous.. lol :D .. the last paragraph was gr888 .. :D :P .. geet no meeting maan's eye.. :D .. lol ..

gr8 update.. and continue sooon ...

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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

RESERVED OMG, I won't be editing the last spot i reserved 🤣 ILOVEYOUSOMUCH! 🤗

I have no words to describe how funny the update was. NO WORDS.

Also, i love the way Maan struggles with his emotions n all.

Edited by cooldude10 - 13 years ago

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

*Swati faints...THUD*

Koi hai? koi mujhe thappad maaro...main din mein spne dekh rai hoon...mujhe Sammy ki ek aur update dikh rahi hai😲

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

are you sure 200 comments is the criteria Sammy?

200 comments main bhot jaldi laake de sakti hoon😛

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

a lot of chummis and jhappies...for update like an express train...
i mean i seriously need to pinch myself to see whether this is a dream...u gave two updates in a day.😆
BUt i cant help thanking u for giving me back my sleep and make me sigh in relief that maan did not sleep with that s**t...
wow...thank god he has a better sense to keep that woman at bay...
but geet sufferign from snotty nose and then followed by constipation...u described it in too detail that i doubt now whether will i be able to have my dinner without being disturbed by these poopy and running nose images...🤢
but geet manages to fool the Don maan with her over exagerating banter...but maan has fallen for unladylike ways, that manages to make her stand out among the crowd of bimbos...
well i love u..i dont care whether u r a girl or a boy...i am irrevocably in love with u...but care to answer my Q...whether ur female lead are inspired from u...are u like geet, with unsahaven legs, snotty nose...and complaining publicly about bouts of constipation that u suffer from..if yes...then u make an interesting company😆
keep writing sweetie
and once again thnk u for this adorably cute and lovely update...with no cliffhangers...
I LOVE U
reva

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

ossum just loved it dear

omg !!!!!!!

really for that she made him to run like anything!

really great dear

i m just laughing !holding my stomach

dear make her leave the place which she says she wont return in to his life and where he may knew about his feelings more

or pls make geet as another don daughter who is famous than maan and maan likes him more

she dont like his father so only she came out of the house

hope we can see this dear

pls update thenext one soon

may be u give us short but we want ur ff badly

and i dear i m med student from next week i ll be busy so pls dont tink i m not commenting dear

but waitng for the update

hope we can get tommrow dear

plzzz

beforemy hetic classes start i want to read as much as i can

plzzz

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

chapter 16 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ,,,,,,,

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sky_86

@sky_86

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

wooow..how do u plan to write such embaraasing stuff s in your FFs..i mean realistic but nonetheless too much intimate to discuss let alone write about..i must say you are one hell of a writer and yes thanks so much for upadating so back to back..i applaud your ability..thanks for pm...superrb track...

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Awesome update dear.. Love geet sitting on toilet seat thinking abt her life.. Love her talking abt her imaginary consummation with john and arjun.. Loved her constipation problem.. Loved how much maan cared for her..she sneezed on his face.. Ur this update was funny..though i am a bit satisfied abt maan and his mistress but i like geet was thinking he should have been a virgin poor girl...maan missed his flight for her..god he is gonna be so very possessive for her god save our geet..

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 13 years ago

#450

Am I dreaming or hallucinating so many updates together, luck must surely be favouring us 😆 Jokes apart, seeing all your PM's just gladdened my heart, loved the updates especially as Maan and Geet seemed to be developing feelings for each other.

But my darling Sammy, why constipation 😕 why not any other illness 😕 this is so unromantic 😕 But not surprising coming from you, there's bound to be some twists 😆

Here's you applause for so many updates👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏