FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 43

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Haha.. Bechara Maan. Can't wait to read
more!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bansi-

Wonderful update..!!! 😳 thank you!
hoho..c i guessed it right dat maan might have hurt himself while staring at geet...bechara wall se takra gaya...!!! 😆 yes yes...you guessed it...most people did...i have to be more careful and confuse you guys
ohh Pammi pregnant...loved the way he saw geet's hand on his wen she said he was going to b a chacha...lovely...😳 he he...Pammi and Teji's story is moving along quickly...to make room for Maneets
aww...he was so eager to meet her n din leave a chance to b near her...n upar se she is going to leave in the same house with them...yaayyy hold your horses...aage aage dekho hota hai kya ..this is going to b really fun n interesting...eager to c how he will control his imbalanced hormones in front of her.. 😆...pehle hi wall se takra gaya...aab aage kya hoga..??? 😆
aare yaar...you aint seen nothing yet...just keep watching to see what an idiot maan makes of himself!! 😉
ssly lovin it...!!!
wonder wat had transpired in the past that they r separate from each other......😭
that will be revealed in good time...sabar kaor 😛
but loved this update...
cont soon plz Jazz di...😛



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

Maan stood with is arms out stretched ready to engulf her with his arms. There she was, coming closer'closer'closer'past him''''wait, past him?...🤣🤣

Maan just kept watching her'and watching her'and watching her'and'''BAM! He had literally walked into a wall..🤣🤣

This one statement caused Maan to nearly choke on his food. Great, just great ' add inability to eat to his inability to walk! 🤣🤣

maan ko koi bachao...is tarah to usse next time hospital jana pad jayeha...🤣

either for mental illness or for injuring himself...😆🤣

i still cant stop laughing...maan making a fool of himself...

continue soon...


Maan toh gaya kaam se...aab usse koi nahin bacha sakta!! 😆...just wait to see what else he will end up doing ...you think this was funny...just wait!! 😛

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

mee again.. me too me too me too!! 😛


hellos...me is here too...to enjoy the last of my treat...and after that deathly boring lecture...i could use a laugh... gosh i miss school...the plan is...after i get my license...im going to go back to get my MBS in Hospital Administration 😳

I am right in keeping this last...i had a gud laugh...of course i only paid attention to the past where all is well...not like the present where poor Maan is getting drunk 😭...ohhh...the poor fellow... lol...just zipping through the present so you dont have to dwell on it...good good...what ever gets you through it 😛
okay...so i oficially love this love smitten Maan of urs...he can't watch where he is going when he sees her, he can't speak when he sees her...😳😆...he is totally a gone case...he might as well get down on one knee..😆..( too early to ask for that ?...ya probably)...hehe... he he...i think smitten is the new word...i've seen many people use that term...but it totally fits...Maan toh gaya kaam se...head over heels and everything!!! 😛

I love the whole happy atmosphere this story has...like...Maan's realtionship with his brother and bhabi..or Geet and Tej's relationship...everyone seems happy 😃 its a big family based story..i have another one thats totally family based and not nearly as sad or confusing as this is...he he...im thinking about posting it...😉

OMG...Handa is moving in 🥳...Maan just won a lottery...he can look at her all he wants now...should be fun...i hope his business doesn't shut down cause he will always want to be at home 😆 yup!! Handa in means Maan ki dimag ki batti fully out!!! 😆

Loved it Jazzy 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

🤣.. poor smitten boy!🤣.. lovedd it.. update quick !

i think im going to have to start calling Maan Mr. Smitten...everyone is calling him that 😆

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luv angel

Awww! So cute! Loved the update and I can't wait till the next one! Continue soon and thanks for the pm :')

glad you enjoyed it yaar...next one up soon and teaser up in a bit

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

past was hilarious 😆

where is geet now in present 😕 is she hospitalize or something

the present situation and where Geet is will all be explained in good time...enjoy their love story...the beginning of their love story any way...lots more to tell

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

he walked into walls and geet ddint noticed what he has in his eyes for her...poor maan

Geet hasnt noticed...but she will...shes totally jhalli here 😉

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hopehot

aww maaan's completly smitten by her😳 ..omg ..i thought geet was running into some guy's arms which turns out to be pammi 😆he's going to be a chachu🥳aww i hope the bump isn't too bad ..but that was really ..🤣🤣

loved it 😃

lol...another guy...are you kidding me...as it is everyone is after me about the present...if i stick another guy in the past...you will all KILL me 😕...not taking that chance!! 😉 and the bump was nothing...for that laughter Maan will do anything right? 😛

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
awesome dear...
less painful and really had a smile and at one time laughed too...
Maan is smitten by Geet...
OMG he spreading his arms to hug but she ran PAST him to hug her SISTER that was so funny...
poor Maan...
so in this its Maan who is clumsy and at this rate he sure has to get treated in some way or the other...
cont soon dear...

this story definitely has lots of more fun, love and laughter to come...so enjoy...and watch for more of Maan's antics...he's a complete duffer 😉

JAZ

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