SS/FF - With Or Without You - chp 38/pg144

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Kruthi

@IshyMishi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#791

Awesome twist,,,
Aranav deserved this prank 👏👏👏👏

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#792

loved this update.sooo amazing.keep going.

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#793

all three updates were awesome vrush

Khushi telling him she wont sleep with him... rofl...

Nani not getting angry but happy seeing the peeking bra... lol..thats kinda unimaginable...

then the emotional blackmail and giving in to it and then eagerly waiting for it...

Both their fighting with themselves is written very well...

payal and junta is hell bent on making it tough for Arnav... hahaha...

loved the updates vrush... looking forward to their new begining... yes yes i mean their SR... hahahaha...

vrushu - i wanna see a hawt, passionate, romantic HM also... pretty please

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#794

just read ur last 3 updates,v good..they gt married.yippeee...and mischievious payal..thnx for pm.waiting for nxt

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#795

rush , mai tumhe marro yah phir gale lagaoon 😆
it was simply awesome 🤣

shadi mubarak tujhe bhi .
which should have happened 10 chapter ago you successfully did it after 10 👏👍🏼

Aranv ki tho nikal padi 🤣
you kept the tension through out the shadi , i was holding my breath while reading 🤔

🤗 if i ask you when is next update i tell you i make you work to much and you leave us at such a point 😭

thanks for all the lovely update, it was so much fun reading.
you have all the qualities of becoming a succesfull SP CV 😉

👍🏼

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Haahahhaha this one's awesome!!

LOL I can clearly imagine Arnav's expression when he found payal under the ghungat.

It was just amazing !

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nabeela.

@nabeela.

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#797

Loved all 3 of the updates! So it was Nani after all 😆 she saw the peeping bra and didn't say anything? 😲 naughty Nani! 😆 O yes Arhi are finally married 😃 but why o why did that have to be Payal sitting on the bed? 😒 lol naughty Payal! Hm I wonder what'll happen about Khushi's condition once she's finally alone with Arnav... Please update soon Vrush, I'm dying to read the next chapter!

Edited by iHeartTVD - 13 years ago

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Good morning Vru!!!

Just read the last 2 updates and they're FAB!!!

Congrats on passing 100 pages...century poori ho gayi!!

Finally they're married. I'm sure Arnav is going to seek revenge for finding Payal there instead of Khushi!!

I'm interested to read how this 'condition' is going to be handled by Arnav and Khushi!!!

Thanks for the PM...😊

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#799

Can't press the like button??

But wow! phew..wow..haha

what intensity!!👏

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#800

A marriage of two is about love making
It is not about money raking
You should only be glad if
A marriage of two is for love that is true

well done vrush

You missed reading my comment on page 106 :O:(

Well any how

Yearning

Yearning from desire
You opened the floodgates
Touched the soul
Made me shake, quiver, and roll

Yearning from desire
You taunted and teased
Touched the soul
Made me wanting, craving, for more

Yearning from desire
You just disappeared
Touched the soul
Made me empty, crying, and lull

Yearning from desire
I will you back
Touch my soul
Leave me
Yearning for more

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