SS/FF - With Or Without You - chp 38/pg144

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

Doo a poll!
Make them have a SR
urm the reasons, because they love each other! Haha
you can make them go all the way and then the next day they might realise what they did and start to avoid each other?
Nd then for a while they can do foreplay?
Some banter between both?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#812

LOL loved the prank! arnav is gonna be sooo pissed! loved the intense feeling building in arnav throughout the wedding though. GOOD SHOW!

your writing is amazing as usual!

cant wait for the next one!!!

thanks

xxx

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gilgamesh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

Wow ... three chapters together!!!! Loved 'em all, especially Nani's attitude and the prank ... also loved the way you have paced the story...didn't think the 2 wuld get married so easily...awaiting the next one... (I noe, I noe, v r being pushy, but this is your fan base after all 😉)

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pri12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#814

very niceee...acha hai ...bahut acha hai...abh aur kya likhu

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#815

Nadia and Mariam

chalo..achcha hai..apna opinion de diya

woh kehte hain na..suno sabko karo apni..

toh ye lo 😛

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bikerider

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Posted: 13 years ago

#816

rush , after today epi i do not want immediate SR 😆
I want some more tadapaifying for Arnav, he deserves for using aukath yet again 🤣

so pull it again dear, no SR for next two chapter.
one you pull with payal for some more time and put kushi to sleep 🤣
one you can spend on after shadi rasam 😉 getting arnav more tensed.
i want him to suffer at least in your FF

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#817

Yep darling..

Arnav ko sabak seekhana jaroori..hai!!

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#818

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Nadia and Mariam

chalo..achcha hai..apna opinion de diya

woh kehte hain na..suno sabko karo apni..

toh ye lo 😛

aaah vrush ab thumara dimaag me kya chal raha hoga yaar

but whatever you write i know itll be good

btw what was todays epi like?

acha, bura?

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#819

filler tha!!

ye bachkane harkatein??

i want intense..love story...

jo nafrat aur mohabbat saath lekar..chalti hai...

par..yahan toh...johnny walker meet mr grouch hai!