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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Wow..😳
Abhay and Piya part was Amazing...😍Abhay changed Piya's wet clothes...☺️ His eyes were closed Seli..don't be so happy 😛..he's a gentleman 😳

A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali
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Intro of Lipstick chudail in Aryan style 😆
update soon...👏🤗 next week 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya_abhay_love

awsome update...

thanx for pm

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: priya.1

awesome update tanzie!!!!!!👏

really liked that abhay didnt want pia to leave him n go away... & i specially last line whr aryan says the lady has used all the lipstick available in manali🤣... that was superb dear!!!!

Thanks Priya...glad you liked the update. Aryan is funny and next update you will know how he flirted with Deepu 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie wonderful update loved aryan caring fo pia and their convo it was cute dipu kab frame me enter hui ? And yes start their love track soon thanx for pm

Thanks Rashu 😳 Deepu pehle si thi...2nd update pe I wrote that it was deepu and prabeen who tried to kill Piya. read the 2nd and 3rd chpt...things will be cleared dear 😳 their love track is at on and off... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for the late comment. .

Awesome update, tanzie
loved it
OMG ! Aryan is married..poor guy , he has suffered too..
Wow! The healing therapy was wonderful !
Aryan's last text was hilarious. . "I just met his business partner. A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali ". .hahaha. . U cracked me up. .
Eagerly waiting for next update!
Thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear
again sorry for the late comment
awesome update👏. loved it😃😃
aww i felt bad for aryan😭, but wow he's married. hope things get better for him as the story moves on...😊
im glad pia blasted abhay. he needed it😆. poor pia has such a painful past😭
thank god abhay saved her, n things were heating up in there😳☺️ naughty abhay😳
really looking forward to the next part
thanks for the pm
take care🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful tanzie!!!aw soo touchng n romantic !!!lovely yaar!!sry 4 da late rply...continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

chalo...finally m bk...😉as usual a rockng updt...👏pia planng to leave????? i gs dts nt happening...😕abhay...god...hes too much...😳i lv d way pia throws hs attitude bk on hs face...😆awww...so abhy dsnt want hr to leave????...cho chweet...😛aryan marriec???????😲 ok...dt ws 'unexpctd'...😆i gs dr s more to cm bt peehu...n pia...c s sch a magnet 4 danger...gosh...😲acha hai...kam se kam abhay isi bahaane uske paas to ata hai...😉gosh abhay changng pia's drs...☺️bt y ddnt u gv d dtails?????...😈🤣 abhay hs alrady strtd avng a soft cornr 4 pia...acha hai...😉so pia gts hs famous healng therapy...lucky grl...😆 abhay hs broght pia's proprty????? gud...nw i gs pabeen deepu ke antoim din nazdeek hai...😡 i hope abhay gvs dm wt de dsrv...aryan s such a sweet frnd...😳n alina?????i gs c wl b upto smthng nw...😲 do cont soon...lv u loacsss...🤗

Good to see you back 😃the story has to move on and in order to do that she to go Confused right... the chapter name is dedicated to Aryan 😆 his eyes were closed ok so don't aske for details Tongue Alina will have a important part here...wait and watch ... next update will be done by saturday I guess Confused
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

Oh wonderful Abhay had it coming from Pia. He plays these mind games which is kinf of torture for everyone. So its good he got a taste of it too. So now he has brought all the property of Pias so what is he going to do. And a warewolf is in picture too so what is the vampire going to do about that.

The first part was really good and would love to see such moments were Pia shows Abhay his place. Though towards the end the poor girl was so confused.

Thanks 😳 He should actually know how it feels when he throws the same kind of attitude to others 😆 not all the property... fractions of it..but he will fix everything soon... werewolves has to be there... khurana's are all wolves.. except for Alina..whos a hybrid. Piya's confused state will soon increase..
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice update dear,sorry for late reply exams are there...abhay is feeling bad for piya ...nice...abhay saves piya superb
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

WOW...beautiful update tanzie 👏 thanks Indu 😳

ariyan-pia bond is really sweet...and that part...ariyan saying...pia has guts...offcourse she does...its only pia who can handle our attitudebazz abhay 😆 BINGO 😆
oops aryan married...thts surprising 😲 so is pihu's chap going to b introducd ?? soon very soon 😉

humm...so abhay bought pia's property back...so sweetEmbarrassed...thts y he is abhay. true..😊

then pia unconcious in the pool and abhay saving her...mouth to mouth...aww...☺️ ye abhay bhi na kabhi bazz nahi ayega ...always ready to kiss pia...😆 aree it was a life saving situation 😛

pia in abhay's bedroom...abhay changing pia's clothes...pia's face turning pink...☺️.aww...so romantic 😍 and abhay thinking...she is almost dying and evn in this situation she is worried abt ...ohh abhay this is the beginning dear...pia gets totally insane when it comes to u...😆 and dear u have wrote this part so well...i cud visualize the whole thing while reading...great work 👍🏼 thanks dear...but dont forget his eyes were cloes..gosh man how many times I have to repeat that 🤣... he's a gentleman ok? 😳

p.s. omg what was tht tanzie...dipu used all lipsticks of manali...🤣 that was too hillarious 🤣 thanks.. fullto Aryan style 😃

a/w update soon dear...waiting fr more abhiya romance...😉 will get it for sure 😉 😛

t.c. love u...🤗 same to u darlz 🤗

-indu

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