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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

i m here😊

dat was something reli wonderful n magnetic⭐️ Thanks so much darling 😳
starting frm d very start, deepanita is big blot on d name of a mother😡😡😡 She is and I'm gonna prove that soon 🤢 btw, no neelchi in this FF 🤣
nw coming to d rest of d update, starting frm aryan pia convo- so pia found out a way to move, bad, bt i knw " inne sone mondaan nu chad ke kithe jayegi"(ok dat was in punjabi let me translate, where she wl go leaving behind two handsome hunks😆😆) n above dat abhay nahi jane dega n i just love pia-aryan's bond, a beautiful frndship,a frndship everyone wish to av!!! 😳😳😳 I understood half btw.. mujhe thodi thodi punjabi samajh me ati hai 😆 yes...their frndship is very beautiful and suporting and soon you will see another nazara of that 😉
nw i would like to tel u something "related to our connection"- u knw yesterday i was watching kis desh mein hai mera dil episode where prem pulled heer in dat hotel room n dat song o re piya n when i read ur update, my jaw got dropped, i was like wat, cn u read my mind???😲😲 are you kidding me 😲 this is freaking awesome.. 🤣 🤣 now you listen, I chose that hotelwala scene first whr heer was in wedding attire and edited it to look old... but later thot they were married 50 yrs ago and aryan in suit doesnt suit atall so I changed it to this pic... talk abt connection 🤣 🤣
oh!!! i felt reli bad for aryan, she left him😭😭😭, don't knw how to judge her at present??😕 you will see her at present within nxt 2 updates so dont judge her now 😳
bt i liked d description of his royality n richness through d description of his laptops😉😉 thanks 😉
this pia is nt so vulenrable, she knws very well how to answer ,beechara abhay😆 aur aryan to in dono ke baach me pis jayega😆
n ok nw coming back to evening part, so abhay brought pia's property, wowww, prabeen n deepanita, get to ready for ur dimse!!🤢🤢 lipstick aunty ki lagne wali hai soon 😆
now wat to say should i b happy dat pia fell in d swimming pool or should b sad😆😆. bt i think i m happy (ofcourse nt on human grounds), bt agar wo nahi garti to abhay use bachta kaise. wo bhi itni hotness ke sath (full to besharmai). bt dat scene was beautifully written, d best part it was too natural, d feel was tryly beautiful!!! i intend to be more besharam 🤣 trust me 🤣 more hotness scenes coming up...i promised this one would be more romantic 😉
damn good hun!! rocking!!!
luv u loadsss n a big hug to u 🤗 luv u tooo 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie wht an update I so loved it dear.1st lke Pia evn I m shocked tht aryan was married. Thanks sweetheart 😃 and is shocking news ke liye hi chpt ka naam hai unexpected and you will see his wife soon 😉 Oh applause 2 dis guy he is a sufferer himself but never showed & now comes 2 our Abhiya. he's no dukkhi atma like Abhay 😛 God Pia literally killed Abhay wid her rude words.But tht was nice 2 c Abhay was sad jst coz Pia cried & not coz he was scolded😛. good for him na...yeh sirf suruyat hai...bajane do Piya ko uska band 😆 I love tht pool scene.Abhay lost his control but pagal har baar control kar leta hai.It was so romantic of Abhay healing Pia's broken bones😳.In all awesome Thanks dear... 😊

Luv u🤗luv u tooo 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update! loved every bit of it...😊..abhay changing piya's clothes..umm...so hot 😳..please update asap😆..can't wait to read another chapter😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww nice update dear..abhay is so caring..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanzie sorry for the late reply I am really dying at my work place but ur FF was superb update soon. Next time lamba comment dungi promise. bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited=>😆

Abhay changed Piya's dress!!!!!!!!! 😳 He's eyes was closed, ok? Embarrassed
Abhay was feeling Piya's skin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 That he can't stop 😆
Piya was also feeling something!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 Resisting Abhay...nah.. impossible 😉
U r soon going to be da 'Best Romance-Writer',m telling u!!! 😉 👏 Awww darling... i donno what to say...thank you... I just try to feel what I write...that's it Embarrassed[/QUOTE]
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! I'm so glad Abhay saved and healed Piya! I felt really bad that Piya plans to leave Abhay and Aryan soon! I'm glad that Piya is a self-respecting individual who doesn't want to rely on anyone but her not living in that house would make their house empty and Abhay and Aryan's lives would be lonely again! I felt sorry for Aryan, poor guy is still in love with his wife despite her leaving him! And Abhay is so sweet to have bought Piya's property back for her! I hope somehow Abhay and Aryan stop Piya from leaving the house! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

Thanks dear 😳 She has to... it's destiny and they will meet again. That's why the FF name is till the end of time. they will be separated and meet again...Smile She is self-dependent like Piya Jaiswal used to be in the show 😆 time to feel more sorry for Aryan thn Ouch but don't judge his wife till now... you guys will see her very soon and thn you will understand why she left him. will update next saturday...abhi beautiful stranger update bhi baki hai 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvd

Wow tanzie its awsome.abhay himself dnt want to let piya go...aryan is married bt c left...aww...feeling sad 4 him.abhay has got feelings 4 piya thats gr8 n nw they know deepanita is a werewolf.its superb dear.it has become one of my fav ff.continue soon.
With love
srija.

Thanks Srija 😊 Aryan's wife will give a guest appearance soon 😆 Now mission werewolves vs vampires will come soon... thanks a lot for the compliments dear... will update nxt sat maybe.. till thn not possible
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

wow really nice update. love the way abhay is losing himself😉

Thanks Dishu...it's just the beginning... wait and watch 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Awesome Update!!!⭐️⭐️ thanks 😳
I hate Dipannita
🤢, she treats Alina like dirt...she should get the same treatment! she will and her daughter will give it along with aryan and Abhay 😆. Pia-Aryan's convo was nice 😊and i think Abhay won't let her go.Oh so Aryan is a married man.😲Feeling bad for Aryan, Peehu left him.😔 It's a shocker isnt it? that's why the chpaters name is unexpected...well you will see his wife soon SmileAbhay cares a lot about her😊 . he does and it's just the beginnng 😉 Loved Aryan's dialogue" I'm at a party hosted by Prabeen Jaiswal. I just met his business partner. A woman who seemed to have used all lipsticks available in Manali😆🤣 and she's a werewolf!! Will give info soon". thanks.. it came into my mind... lipstick chudail's identity in aryan's style 😃 Continue soon. I enjoy reading this FF of yours😊.Good Luck!👍🏼 and thanks a lot for PM.😃 you are most welcome dear and thanks for liking, reading and commenting 😳

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