New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam

Awww tanzie. . such a fabulous update...
I'm speechless... thanks so much dear...im really happy you liked reading it 😳

Abhay ignores piya but The way he showed care...& brought clothes , food for her. . .very touching. That's what he always does na... cares but doesn't show offcourse...very complicated

Aryan is sho shweet !! always trying to cheer up, Pia ! Why do i feel dat aryan is going to bring abhiya closer! Let's see what part Aryan plays in the entire thing 😉

The towel scene was super hawt. .
& those lines :
(Abhay supported himself against a wall and closed his eyes. His body was trembling as well. "You are going to be the death of me and yourself Piya...why?? why?? " )
when will this guy let his guard down & accept his love !!
I just hate the control he has over his emotions. . his loneliness for such a long time makes him even more strong.. he's afraid of love... coz he might destroy it..

The precap 'unexpected' looks damn interesting. .
Hmmm!! Wat unexpected things r going to happen?. . Hehe u will know in the next update 😆

Thanks for the pm & beautiful update
continue soon next Thursday inshAllah 😳
tc

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

awesome chapter Tanzie!!❤️ Da AbhIya scene was beautifully described.😍 but is dis necessary 4 Abhay to hurt Piya everytym? 😡 Poor girl...

R u going to update da next chapter soon?😆


Thanks dear 🤗 offcourse necessary... thats what he always do 😆 pyaar ki suruat nafrat se hoti hai na 😉

are you trying to kill me? itni jaldi 😲 next Thursday I hope 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Brilliant chapter Tanzie... Thanks Nidhz 😃

You make me crack up completely at places🤣 You must rofling after reading Aryan's reactions 😆
Good resistance Abhay...lekin kab thak😉 jada der tak nehi 😉
Lady AR sounds interesting and intimidating... she wont be coming into the scene so soon 😉
Thanks for the PM
Contnu soon🤗 will surely do...thanks dear 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Super awesome update! I love the friendship bond between Piya and Aryan! They are so cute! 😛 And Abhay feeling a bit jealous of their bond is adorable! 😳 The Abhay in a towel scene where Piya walks in to his room was hot! 😳 But I felt bad for Piya later as she felt cheap for not controlling her feelings. But Aryan cheered her up! I'm so happy that Aryan said he won't let Piya leave this house as she brought sunshine into their house as well as Abhay's life! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊


Thanks Deepi 😳 Jealousy will keep them closer 😆 thanks... Abhay in towel has to be HOTTT ☺️ Sadu Abhay Aryan is my sweetheart 😳 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

lovely update
really abhiya scenes were damn cute😳 Thanks dear
but he was seriously rude with her why he has to hurt her and himself so much😡 abhi rude hone do... Piya will take Abhay's class...wait and watch 😆
but the last line by aryan has really shocked me to the core😕
i hope he is caring for her just like a friend or more so a brother
please no love triangles here we already have jai for this in ur story
thanks for pm and please .update soon and clear my doubt regarding pia and jai's relation hahaha... ohh everyone is asking the same thing... well you have to wait till the next update for breaking the ice... 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey tanzie😃awesome update dear👏👏👏👏👏👏...loved abhiya scene...omg that was super duper hot...abhay in towel☺️...omg...loved aryan n pia's friendship...dont tell that aryan is falling for pia...no this cant be happening...otherwise abhay n aryan's bond will break.n i dont want that...plz...hoping for more abhiya scene in coming update...plz update soonhav a nice dayluv usunita
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update tanzie...👏
sorry for late comment...actually i read it the very moment u updated...but ws unable to camment...😕
Dear this is one of m fav8 ff...😊
coming to the topic...though the entire part was awsum but i liked that part most...where pia was in abhay's room and abhay wrapped in a towel...the moment was intence...and ohh abhay is failing to resist his attraction towars pia...m so loving it...😳.and afterall it has to b like this...😉

and that line of abhay...illegal ares...😆 too naughty...😉

m loving pia ariyan bond...😳 aryan is so sweet and cute...and i think now aryan will try to bring abhiya together...😛

dear update soon...desparately waiting for more abhiya romance...😳

T.c. love u...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

nyc dr... i liked d way abhay feel jelous n care 4 pia... lived d abhay room scene... n i hope abhay will be cool with pia soon... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...


Thanks Akshi dear... well as you can see the heat growing 😉 Abhay's mood will swing like a pendulum as usual he will fall and again try to hate Piya and finally he will surrender 😆

Originally posted by: rayrose

wow! awsome update!
what an appreciable post.

thanx 4 the pm...


Thanks Rose 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Wow nice update...👏⭐️😊 Loved Pia-Aryan's blooming friendship...❤️ Thanks a lot Prerna 🤗Aryan is really very nice, friendly and funny too😃.He is jaan of this FF...He truly is 😆 sadu Raichand is to spoil your mood and Aryan is to cheer u up 😉 Abhay won't be able to resist Pia for long...Both of them are getting attracted to each other and it will be difficult for them to ignore each other...sure he will soon 😉 OMG, he(Abhay) is jealous of Aryan...😆 He felt guilty for it.. its that he cant pass the time wid Piya which aryan can.. he cant hav brkfast wid her and these things r disturbing him... making him frustrated This one(FF) is fast becoming one of my favourites...❤️awww...thanks a lot dear...that's a huge complement 😳Precap sounds interesting...Thanks a lot for PM.Eagerly waiting for next update.Continue soon I will as soon as I can...maybe thursday 😳...Good Luck!!! 👍🏼


@Black, ans dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

wow lovely update tanzie. love abhay's care for pia and just loved his dialogue of illegal territory


Thanks a lot Dishu... yaha Sid nehi haina so I need someone to deliver the one liners to add some tadka in the ff 😆

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Tanzie wonderful update yaar so abhay pia have started feeling love for each other thanx for pm


Thanks a lot Rashu 😳 It's just the beginning... age age dekho hota hai kya 😉

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