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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Tanzie...Awesome update...

Abhay and Piya are getting really attracted to each other...update soon...and thanxx for the pm...


Thanks Seli 🤗 It's just the beginning... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Bloody Brilliant. ABHAY IN TOWEL.DROOLING. RUDE ABHAy.😡

I want a hot apology. update soon.


🤗 Snig, apology? 😲 From when did Abhay Raichand do apologies? 😆 but Piya Jaiswal knows too well to make her way from Abhay Sadu Raichand... wait and watch 😉


Thanks Prati 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

Awesome update

Loved it Thanks Pari 😳
I hope Abhiya will be together soon Not so soon but things will bring them closer 😳
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priya.1

Tanzie it was awsome!!!! I guess aryan is surely gonna do something n nt let pia go...Waiting for the next part & thnx for the pm


Thanks a lot Priya 😊 Aryan aoores Piya and he will surely do whatever he thinks is best for her 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya7fan

amazing...superb...outstanding...🥳 Thank you soo much 🤗

i think aryan is also falling for piya..😊... Lolzz...why everyone thinks so and even if he does whats the prob? Stefan and Damon both loved Elena in TVD isnt it? 😛

abhay called designers so that piya cud get herself nic edresses was so cute...😛 Every girl loves to get pampered 😆

thanks for the pm...grea job...love ur ff..👍🏼 Glad you love it dear... i hope you will enjoy reading further as well 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya


this part was really good... i enjoyed evry bit of it... abhay is sooo concerned 4 her nd aryan is really a good frd... thanks 4 d PM


Thanks shafaq...glad u liked it 😳 Both thr brothers are gem 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Hats off Tanzy...👏

Great work done..🥳Thanks Sweta 🤗
I'm not finding any suitable words to describe your amazing work...😊 Awww... im overwhelmed 😳
Starting with Aryan and Piya... I love them and their friendship totally...😳 Aryan's care towards Piya... Cheering up Piya,Coming home for lunch or dinner just to have with Piya so that she doesn't feel alone is very sweet...😃 IKR...aryan is a sweetheart...love writing about him 😍
I love the way how Aryan reacted to the things done by Abhay for Piya... It totally cracked me up.. 🤣What a shock he must have got by hearing all those things...😆 Now Aryan will also fall for Piya or what?? No no please aisa gazab mat karna haan... 🥺 Huge shock 😆 Aryan behaves like a cartoon sometimes but he's very sensible...trust me 😆 and why scared? in TVD stefan and damon both loved Elena and protected her so whats the prb here? nxt chpt will clear ur confusion anywy 😊
Coming to Abhiya... Oh I just adore them...😳 The scene where Abhay gave her milk and Cookies and smiling when she was eating was really adorable...
And the way you described Abhay coming out in towel and Piya just bumped into him was seriously dreamy...😍 I'm still drooling over it...☺️Felt really bad for both of them though...😭 Finally Abhay is feeling attracted towards her..And Piya ka toh bas.. She has started falling for him..😆 give them some time to discover this pull...tabtak let them fight 😆
But seriously great dialogues written by you Tanzy... I specially loved that Abhay's dialogue on Illegal areas...😳 thanks..i loved it myself...pata nehi kaise dimaag me agaya 😛
Jeh... Bichaara.. Iske alawa kuch nahi bolungi uske liye...😉 Jeh wont be bechara soon...Piya misunderstands him and soon he will too and then starts the real war 😉
I always forget to say thanks for sending Pm..😆 Thank you..😊 no need to thank...my pleasure sweetz 😳
Amazing work..⭐️
Continue soon...👍🏼
Lots of love...🤗 same to u 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

abhay sure can be a khadoos. Poor Aryan caught in between them. May be if there was no middle person they would be really be on a better ground. And Abhay isn't it a bit over whelming to have 3 designers waiting for you to choose the clothes and dress you up. Wow for th eifrst time guess Pia in this sotry is getting such a royal treatment. Abhay knows to spoil a girl. So waiting to see what is the unexpected thing going to happen in their lives. Is their sister going to drop in.

Oh and before I forget thankfully its good that Aryan kep the vase intact or else Abahy would surely knock some sense into his darling brother and it wouldn't be very pleasent.


OMG... 😆 these two alone in the same house... there's a possibility the house will get smashed they will fight so much but offcourse they will make it up afterall they can hardly resist each other 😉
No..the sister wont come in the scene so soon... i have another story for her in mind and it will come at the right time 😳 unexoected specially from Aryan... u will get to know in the next update 😊
hahaha... Aryan acts like a cartoon sometime but he's very sensible... he's the only one who can add some senses into Abhay's brain at the right time 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

tanzie...wow...super duper update...abhay and pia are in emotional crisis...i hope their love blooms soon...and omg..the towel scene was hawt... I know...Abhay in towel...i had super fun while imagining ☺️


i wish sach main in show i get to see him...i wont talk much abt that...warna brains kahin aur chalne lagega 🤣 Teri brain kya bas yahi direction me chalta hai? 🤣 show me Abhay ko towel me dikhaya tha na...locker room shower scene... ☺️ ekber aur dikha diya to mein to... 😍
so is aryan alao falling for pia or he considers as frnds...we will get to knw soon... everyone thinks he's falling for Piya 😆 well that's next chapter about... UNEXPECTED...wait till then 😉

btw...ausum and fab..loved it...update soon..thanks for pm thanks a lot 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rosamale

what an update yaar👏👏👏 u always wonders me by the way u write. so Aryan won't let her live. i thope he is gonna play cupid in Abhiya's love. who is that Lady Raichand? When will we get some intense Abhiya moments other than this hide and seek😛... waiting eagerly for ur next update. and thanx for the pm


Thanks Rose 😃 Awww...thanks for such a huge complement 😳 Aryan will help Piya with everything he can 😳 Lady Raichand is their sister 😉 are hide n seek ke bich bich me milega intense abhiya moments... 😉 next update will be up on thursday i guess 😳

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