New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 41

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally i m here, ready to comment!!!! 🤗

although i av so much to say n i wl try my best to express it through my words!!!

hun dat was something out of d world reli!!! hats off to u👏 Thanks so much heenu... i cant take so much of praise..dont make me blush plzz 😳 😛

frm d very starting when aryan entered AR villa n abhay started wid his lecture n he said mar gaya!!

n then when aryan said "detective nahi usse bhi jayda khatarnak!! lawyer!! dat both were totally awesome thanks dear.. Aryan is the jaan of this FF.. 😳

after dat abhay's changed xpression on pia's wedding news n wid so much of concerned he said-ask her abt her marriage!! n ofcourse aryans' dialouge made me reli laugh ""So you aren't really mad at me because I was late but you were more worried about her health?"

n after dat , dress scene was superb!!! i m speechless tanz, i mean nt for a single moment i felt dat , this scene shouldn't av been here!! every single scene was perfect in itself!! awww...soo much of appreciation... cant thank u enough...😳 Aryan is funny bt he's also intelligent so he doesnt say the wrong thing ever 😃

n then when again aryan came back n found designers in his house n d way u xpressed him at dat particular moment , dat was totally fun reading!! His shocked so why sud I try to hide it 😆

"breaking antic shina vase"😆

n dat whole khumbhkaran part was so so sweeet!!!

d best part abhay's jealousy, gosh aryan is making me crazy!! me too but soon you will see a complete different side of him 😉

abhay-pia scene was wowww n abhay's behaviour was kinda xpected n pia's reaction after d incident was so natural n beautifully potrayed!! Piya is kickass...she wud cry but answer Sadu Raichand back 😡

tanz bf4 abhay-pia, i wanna c aryan-pia growing relation!!! Hi5 😆

n aryan's last words- i m 99% sure, aryan wants pia to b in abhay's life n i loved d way he said, he won't let her go, bt abt 1% depends on u!!😉😉

beautifull, fantastic, fantabulous, mindblowing, awesome update

luv u n a big huggy to u hun🤗 super bear hug to you for being my friends and loving my writing so much...luvv u loads 🤗

Originally posted by: luvd

Superb fantastic awsm.the way aryan speaks n his thoughts adds humour in this story.abhay n piya its like ''do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke''bt wat to do abhay feels like ''teri meri meri teri premkahani hai muskil''abhay though he doesnt want to acknowledge bt he surely has softer side 4 piya.plz update soon.

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Wow tanzie wht an update.1st Aryan ki halat sun kar hasi aa rhi thi.Abhay spinned his head.And wow Abhiya's were tempted 2 touch eacj other.Tht was hot.Abhay hurting Pia is common so it hardly effects but uff Abhiya were sizzling hot.I love last line of this update'Pia actally brought sunshine in Abhay's graveyard life'.Plzz continue.I m ager 2 know who is lady raichand & will she b as gud as aryan is wod Pia or not?😕😳

LUV U 🤗