Janet's FF: IPKKND Imp Note on Page 157 (9/26)! - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago
Janet,

Awesome fanfic!! I love the simplicity and ease with which you right! Your writing style is very direct, but eloquent at the same time...which makes for a wonderful combination while reading!

Three things I'm sooo glad you've included:

- the dupatta scenes! One of my favorite lines: "Woh dupatta mere liye choda hai darvaaze pe?" Such a natural and cute moment! <3

- Anjali as the guardian angel! My favorite: "While the fact that they were so into each other did not come as a surprise to her, what her Chote had the gall to do right under her nose really amused her...She made a mental note to help her younger brother - without his knowledge, of course, or he'll have to go through the trouble of denying the whole thing."

- And finally, the evolution of Arnav Sir to Arnav and back to Arnav Sir. I can't wait to see how you develop this further and when the "Sir" finally drops off. I think you should make Khushi say it naturally. Please don't have Arnav force her to call him by just his name!!

I also LOVE what you've done with Arnav's character!!!!! I'm liking the change in him, but I'm glad you've kept the angry, possessive young man side of him alive at the same time.

I hope you give Khushi's character a beautiful evolution like that too...I wonder how she'll come to terms with what happened in the garden...maybe a call to Payal from the house phone or Akash's phone lol!

Sorry about rambling on for so long...but in short, great story so far!!!!

Waiting for the next update,
Smarty
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was simply amazing
you got me blushing☺️ towards the end
please continue and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! i just lv the way u write.please add me to ur list and send me an update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Amazing!ur just simply tooo good at dis!!!fantastic update janet!keep up the spirit!lookng forward to more steaming hot scenes...tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
kaisa ye isq hai
ajab sa risk hai...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Janet,
Amazing yaar as usual.This is one FF ,I wait eagerly to read.I absolutely loved they way u are shaping up the story,and am pretty sure jodi ki milan will also be fantastic.Loved it man...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi janet, went out of station that's y didnt comment on earlier parts. Now that i've caught up, i am so happy. I just adore this teasing Arnav, n Anjali seeing her brother fall, she knows him so well that she doesn't want 2 him to take unnecessary trouble of denial. And... I dont even know how to express myself, succinctly they were all fabulous updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hai Janet read ur whole FF and it's one of the BEST pls update the next part soon
also pls don't bring that stupid shayam in the story like our orginal Ipkknd let he not return frm the trip in ur FF atleast
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heya Janet!

Just finished 18 & 19 parts...Its getting interesting more n more with each part!

I hav sent a buddy request to U! If it is possible then plz add me in PM list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hope u r having a rocking time at Wayanad dear ... come back soon for us n take care ...😃

Originally posted by: Janet.Das

Thanks so much, Meetu! I always look forward to reading your comments :-) Yes, I was going to finally let them kiss. Glad you liked it. I'm also glad you decided to check in for an update before logging off :-) I'm vacationing in Kerala and am off for the weekend to a place without a lot of connectivity (it's called Wayanad - supposed to be beautiful). So, I'll probably see you after a couple of days!

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