Janet's FF: IPKKND Imp Note on Page 157 (9/26)!

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Note:This fan fiction starts off after the episode in which Lavanya moves into the Raizada house. I hated that episode, and so I started writing what I hoped to see!

Also, I'm going to call this Fan Fiction IPKKND coz that's what it is - a continuation of IPKKND in a way I would like to see it :-)

~Part 1~

The calendar that AR Group is launching was being sponsored by a company owned by a guy called Arjun Malhotra. Arnav got a call from his office saying that Arjun has announced a press conference along with a bash for the launch of the calendar and he would like everyone to be present and especially the models and the photographer. He would like all of them to be on the stage with Arnav and Arjun during the release. Arnav called up Arjun tyring to negotiate, but he refused politely saying his company gives a lot of importance to press launches and he wants this to be perfect. Because they are the sponsors, Arnav has to give in. He asked Lavanya to talk to the other model and get her to agree (money, another contract, whatever she wants).

Khushi, he knew, is a different ball game altogether. He knew he has to tackle her himself. He dialed her number to ask her to meet him urgently. Then he remembered how he ruined her phone. Mentally kicking himself, he got into his car to go and meet her.

In the meanwhile, Khushi and Payal were almost ready to go. They were standing outside the door of the house and Buaji was locking. Just as they stepped out of the house, Arnav's car stopped in front of their door and he got out. Everyone was shocked.

Arnav said "Khushi, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai."

Khushi replied "hume aapse koi baat nahi karni"

"Maine kaha bhi nahi ki tum mujhse baat karo. Maine kaha mujhe baat karni hai. Tum sirf meri baat suno."

"Dekhiye sir, hume na aapse baat karni hai aur na hi aapki koi baat sunni hai. Humne aapse kal hi kaha tha na ki hum yahaa se waapas jaa rahe hai?"

"Mujhe pata hai tumne kya kaha tha. Unfortunately, aisa hone nahi waala. I mean, tum filhaal kahi nahi jaa sakti."

Khushi put her hands on her hips and said "Phir shuru! Phir shuru hume bataana ki hume kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi!"

Arnav replied calmly "Mai tumhe ye nahi keh raha hu ki tumhe jaana chahiye ya nahi - ye bata raha hu ki tum jaa nahi sakti. Pehle puri baat sun liya karo miss khushi express. Tumne jis calendar ke liye photo shoot kiya tha uska launch kal shaam ko hai. Humaare sponsors chahte hai ki models waha present ho. Isliye woh shoot attend karke tum jaa sakti ho."

"Hume koi launch nahi attend karna. Humaari aaj shaam ke train ki ticket confirmed hai aur hum jaa rahe hai bas."

Arnav said "Khushi, train kya flight ke tickets bhi mai book karvadunga parso ke liye - ek baar event attend karlo, phir chali jaana."

Khushi shook her head "Hum nahi karenge."

Arnav too replied "Tum bilkul karogi. Kyunki tum nahi karogi toh baaki ka conversation adaalat mei ya police station mei hoga. Tum galti se bhi ye mat sochna ki mai uss toote hue contract ko bhool chuka hoon. Jo tumne mujhe farz aur haq aur zimmedari ki lecture mere ghar pe di thi, adalat mei uss lecture ki koi value nahi hai. Adalat saboot mangti hai aur saboot yahi hai ki tumne contract toda. Aur vaise bhi, mai tumhe koi safai toh nahi dena chahta, par sachai yahi hai ki mujhe uss guest house ke baare mei pata nahi tha. Agar tumhaari jaan khatre mei hi dalna hota, toh uss din tumhe waha se nikaalne mai khud uss tuti phuti guesthouse ke andar nahi aata. Aur aa bhi jaata toh waha se tumhe nikaalne ke baad tumhe uthaake tumhaare ghar tak nahi pahunchata. Anyway, ye sab chodo. Important baat ye hai ki filhaal mujhe tumpe case karne mei koi interest nahi hai. In fact, ye launch ki baat nahi hoti toh mai tumhe jaane se rokta bhi nahi. Ek baar ye attend karlo, phir chali jaana."

Khushi is about to say something, but Payal stopped her. "Dekh Khushi, ye itna bol rahe hai toh ek baar jaa ke attend karlena? Hum jaante hai ki tum gussa ho, lekin abhi aur jhagda karne ka samay nahi hai hamare paas. Vaise bhi ghar pe itna kuch chal raha hai. Dukaan girwi hone ki vaje se Bauji vaise bhi itne pareshan hai. Dukaan jhudwane tak ke paise nahi hai hamaare paas. Agar ek lakh rupaye ka karza aur uthaana pada toh hum kya karenge? Ek hi din ki toh baat hai. Tu jaake aa jaa jaldi."

Arnav was listening to all this. So, he spoke up "Dekhiye mujhe pata toh nahi aap log kis baare mei baat kar rahi hain. Lekin mere paas ek solution hai. Khushi ka contract khatam hone mei abhi ek hafta aur baaki hai. Agar woh ek hafta aur puura karle toh mai uska pura salary de dunga. Aur vaise bhi mujhe kisipe na ehsaan karna hai aur na hi kisi ka ehsaan chahiye. Toh jo photoshoot Khushi ne kiya hai, uska fees bhi de dunga. Basically mai ye keh raha hu ki abhi agar ye ek hafte ke liye ruk jaati hai aur kal ka launch aur uske baad waale ek do functions attend kar leti hai toh aap logo ka jo bhi karza ya dukaan ke paise.. whatever.. woh mai de dunga. Jitna bhi ho, not a problem."

Khushi looked shocked. Payal and Buaji looked at each other. Payal finally spoke to Khushi "Khushi, gussa chod de. Agar tujhe ye naukri waapas mil rahi hai, toh ek hafte ruk ke apne kaam khatam kar lena."

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other for a few seconds. Then, she said "theek hai sir. Hum ek hafte ke liye ruk jayenge. Kal ka function bhi attend karenge aur uske baad ek hafte ke liye kaam bhi karenge. Hume kisi pe ehsaan karne mei koi takleef nahi, lekin kuch logo se ehsaan lene mei takleef hai. Isliye ek hafte ke baad aap hume humaari puri salary aur photoshoot ka fees de dijiyega. Usse zyaada aapko kuch bhi dene ki zaroorat nahi hai. Didi aapko ek hafta nahi rukna chahiye. Bauji aur Ammaji ko humaari zaroorat hai. Kam se kam aapko toh unke paas jaana chaahiye. Lekin aapko akele bhej bhi toh nahi sakte."

Buaji said "hai re nandkissor! Akeli ladki ko kya Lucknow bhej du? Lekin tujhe akele chodke mai bhi toh iske saath nahi jaa sakti."

Khushi said "aap jaayiye Buaji. Hum bilkul theek honge yahaa pe. Bilkul chinta mat keejiye."

Payal too disagreed "Nahi Khushi, Buaji theek keh rahe hai. Tumhe.."

Arnav interrupted "OK OK OK, mai iska rehne kaa intezaam kar dunga ek hafte ke liye. Humaare kisi guest house mei reh sakti hai ye."

Buaji said exaggeratedly "Hai re nandkissor! Akeli ladki kya guesthouse mei rahegi! Kuch ho gaya toh kaun madad karega iski!"

Arnav sighed "Oh man! OK fine! Mere ghar mei reh sakti hai ye ek hafte ke liye! Fir theek hai? Anjali di se toh aap log mil hi chuki ho. Aur Khushi, tum toh Nani aur Mami se bhi mil chuki ho. Unke saath mere ghar mei rahegi toh theek hai?"

Buaji and Payal looked at each other and nodded. Khushi looked speechless. Buaji quickly re-opened the door and went in for a few mins. Arnav and Khushi were looking at each other. Buaji came out with a bag and locked the door. "Chal Payal, Khushi ka ticket toh hai na. Hum dono seedha railway station chalte hai."

Payal replied "Haan Buaji kaafi der ho gayi, train choot na jaaye."

Arnav walked towards his car saying "Chaliye mai chod deta hu aaplogo ko station tak. Raaste mei hi padta hai."

Khushi was even more shocked. Payal and Buaji went to sit at the back and Khushi was about to get in too when Arnav banged that door shut. She jumped as always and he said "mai driver hoon kya tumhaara? Chupchaap jaake saamne baithe. Waise bhi pehli baar nahi baith rahi ho meri gaadi ki front seat pe. Kaho toh pichli baar ki tarah mai hi bithau kya?"

She remembered the guesthouse night when payal had told her "woh laaya tha tumhe ghar." She looked at him now and blushed crimson. He smirked when he saw her embarrassed. She rushed and went and sat in the front seat.

They reached the railway station and Buaji and Payal rushed out. They hugged Khushi and asked her to take care of herself and keep in touch. Then they rushed into the station. Khushi got back into the car and shut the door.

~End of part 1~


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Posted: 13 years ago
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I lovd ur post..hope sumthing like that happens..WOW..v wil get watch so many Arhi scenes..office,launch party,n dan in RM..:-).
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks much :-)

Hahahaha, yea we wish! If only I were part of the creative team :P

Originally posted by: dodoya

I lovd ur post..hope sumthing like that happens..WOW..v wil get watch so many Arhi scenes..office,launch party,n dan in RM..:-).
-Gautami

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely. thanks!!! let's hope this happens.
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Originally posted by: mastmovie

The calendar that they are launching is sponsored by a company owned by a guy called Arjun Malhotra. Arnav gets a call from his office saying that Arjun has announced a press conference along with a bash for the launch of the calendar and he would like everyone to be present and especially the models and the photographer. He would like all of them to be on the stage with Arnav and Arjun during the release. Arnav calls up Arjun tyring to negotiate, but he refuses politely saying his company gives a lot of importance to press launches and he wants this to be perfect. Because they are the sponsors, Arnav has to give in. He asks Lavanya to talk to the other model and get her to agree (money, another contract, whatever she wants).

Khushi, he knew, is a different ball game altogether. He knew he has to tackle her himself. He dials her number to ask her to meet him urgently. Then he remembers how he ruined her phone. Mentally kicking himself, he gets into his car to go and meet her.

In the meanwhile, Khushi and Payal and almost ready to go. They are standing outside the door of the house and Buaji is locking. Just as they step out of the house, Arnav's car stops in front of their door and he gets out. Everyone is shocked.

Arnav says, "Khushi, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai."
Khushi replies "hume aapse koi baat nahi karni"
Arnav: "Maine kaha bhi nahi ki tum mujhse baat karo. Maine kaha mujhe baat karni hai. Tum sirf meri baat suno."
Khushi: Dekhiye sir, hume na aapse baat karni hai aur na hi aapki koi baat sunni hai. Humne aapse kal hi kaha tha na ki hum yahaa se waapas jaa rahi hu?
Arnav: Mujhe pata hai tumne kya kaha tha. Unfortunately, aisa hone nahi waala. I mean, tum filhaal kahi nahi jaa sakti."
Khushi: Phir shuru! Phir shuru hume bataana ki hume kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi!"
Arnav: Mai tumhe ye nahi keh raha hu ki tumhe jaana chahiye ya nahi - ye bata raha hu ki tum jaa nahi sakti. Pehle puri baat sun liya karo miss khushi express. Tumne jis calendar ke liye photo shoot kiya tha uska launch kal shaam ko hai. Humaare sponsors chahte hai ki models waha present ho. Isliye woh shoot attend karke tum jaa sakti ho.
Khushi: Hume koi launch nahi attend karna. Humaari aaj shaam ke train ki ticket confirmed hai aur hum jaa rahe hai bas.
Arnav: Khushi, train kya flight ke tickets bhi mai book karvadunga parso ke liye - ek baar event attend karlo, phir chali jaana.
Khushi: Hum nahi karenge.
Arnav: Tum bilkul karogi. Kyunki tum nahi karogi toh baaki ka conversation adaalat mei ya police station mei hoga. Tum galti se bhi ye mat sochna ki mai uss toote hue contract ko bhool chuka hoon. Jo tumne mujhe farz aur haq aur zimmedari ki lecture mere ghar pe di thi, adalat mei uss lecture ki koi value nahi hai. Adalat saboot mangti hai aur saboot yahi hai ki tumne contract toda. Aur vaise bhi, mai tumhe koi safai toh nahi dena chahta, par sachai yahi hai ki mujhe uss guest house ke baare mei pata nahi tha. Agar tumhaari jaan khatre mei hi dalna hota, toh uss din tumhe waha se nikaalne mai khud uss tuti phuti guesthouse ke andar nahi aata. Aur aa bhi jaata toh waha se tumhe nikaalne ke baad tumhe uthaake tumhaare ghar tak nahi pahunchata. Anyway, ye sab chodo. Important baat ye hai ki filhaal mujhe tumpe case karne mei koi interest nahi hai. In fact, ye launch ki baat nahi hoti toh mai tumhe jaane se rokta bhi nahi. Ek baar ye attend karlo, phir chali jaana.

Khushi is about to say something, but Payal stops her. "Dekh Khushi, ye itna bol rahe hai toh ek baar jaa ke attend karlena? Hum jaante hai ki tum gussa ho, lekin abhi aur jhagda karne ka samay nahi hai hamare paas. Vaise bhi ghar pe itna kuch chal raha hai. Dukaan girwi hone ki vaje se Bauji vaise bhi itne pareshan hai. Dukaan jhudwane tak ke paise nahi hai hamaare paas. Agar ek lakh rupaye ka karza aur uthaana pada toh hum kya karenge? Ek hi din ki toh baat hai. Tu jaake aa jaa jaldi.

Arnav is listening to all this. So, he speaks up "Dekhiye mujhe pata toh nahi aap log kis baare mei baat kar rahi hain. Lekin mere paas ek solution hai. Khushi ka contract khatam hone mei abhi ek hafta aur baaki hai. Agar woh ek hafta aur puura karle toh mai uska pura salary de dunga. Aur vaise bhi mujhe kisipe na ehsaan karna hai aur na hi kisi ka ehsaan chahiye. Toh jo photoshoot Khushi ne kiya hai, uska fees bhi de dunga. Basically mai ye keh raha hu ki abhi agar ye ek hafte ke liye ruk jaati hai aur kal ka launch aur uske baad waale ek do functions attend kar leti hai toh aap logo ka jo bhi karza ya dukaan ke paise.. whatever.. woh mai de dunga. Jitna bhi ho, not a problem."

Khushi looks shocked. Payal and Buaji look at each other. Payal finally speaks to Khushi "Khushi, gussa chod de. Agar tujhe ye naukri waapas mil rahi hai, toh ek hafte ruk ke apne kaam khatam kar lena."

Khushi and Arnav look at each other for a few seconds. Then, she says "theek hai sir. Hum ek hafte ke liye ruk jayenge. Kal ka function bhi attend karenge aur uske baad ek hafte ke liye kaam bhi karenge. Hume kisi pe ehsaan karne mei koi takleef nahi, lekin kuch logo se ehsaan lene mei takleef hai. Isliye ek hafte ke baad aap hume humaari puri salary aur photoshoot ka fees de dijiyega. Usse zyaada aapko kuch bhi dene ki zaroorat nahi hai. Didi aapko ek hafta nahi rukna chahiye. Bauji aur Ammaji ko humaari zaroorat hai. Kam se kam aapko toh unke paas jaana chaahiye. Lekin aapko akele bhej bhi toh nahi sakte."

Buaji says "hai re nandkissor! Akeli ladki ko kya Lucknow bhej du? Lekin tujhe akele chodke mai bhi toh iske saath nahi jaa sakti."

Khushi: aap jaayiye Buaji. Hum bilkul theek honge yahaa pe. Bilkul chinta mat keejiye.

Payal: Nahi Khushi, Buaji theek keh rahe hai. Tumhe..

Arnav interrupts: OK OK OK, mai iska rehne kaa intezaam kar dunga ek hafte ke liye. Humaare kisi guest house mei reh sakti hai ye.

Buaji: Hai re nandkissor! Akeli ladki kya guesthouse mei rahegi! Kuch ho gaya toh kaun madad karega iski!

Arnav: Oh man! OK fine! Mere ghar mei reh sakti hai ye ek hafte ke liye! Fir theek hai? Anjali di se toh aap log mil hi chuki ho. Aur Khushi, tum toh Nani aur Mami se bhi mil chuki ho. Unke saath mere ghar mei rahegi toh theek hai?

Buaji and Payal look at each other and nod. Khushi looks speechless. Buaji quickly re-opens the door and goes in for a few mins. Arnav and Khushi are looking at each other. Buaji comes out with a bag and locks the door. "Chal Payal, Khushi ka ticket toh hai na. Hum dono seedha railway station chalte hai."

Payal: Haan Buaji kaafi der ho gayi, train choot na jaaye.

Arnav: Chaliye mai chod deta hu aaplogo ko station tak. Raaste mei hi padta hai.

Khushi is even more shocked. Payal and Buaji go to sit at the back and Khushi is about to get in too when Arnav bangs that door shut. She jumps as always and he says "mai driver hoon kya tumhaara? Chupchaap jaake saamne baithe. Waise bhi pehli baar nahi baith rahi ho meri gaadi ki front seat pe. Kaho toh pichli baar ki tarah mai hi bithau kya?"

She remembers the guesthouse night when payal tells her "woh laaya tha tumhe ghar." She looks at him now and blushes crimson. He smirks when he sees her embarrassed. She rushes and goes and sits in the front seat.

They reach the railway station and Buaji and Payal rush out. They hug Khushi and ask her to take care of herself and keep in touch. Then they rush into the station. Khushi gets back into the car and shuts the door.

I hope its true but you know what we wont get it. thats the problem. nice prediction though.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you! :-) I know, I hope so too! I was just so frustrated with the current track and was thinking of ways for the CVs to clean up this mess!

Originally posted by: hkhb17

its lovely. thanks!!! let's hope this happens.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Trina! Yea, I know not a chance in hell that it will happen. That's why I said OS/FF alongside :D

Originally posted by: trina2010

I hope its true but you know what we wont get it. thats the problem. nice prediction though.👏

Edited by mastmovie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just to clarify, this is not a prediction of the plot - it's just a one shot/FF (depending on how jobless I am to continue) based on the current mess in the plot. Edited the subject to remove 'prediction' so that there is no confusion.

Would love to hear what you guys think of what I've written :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thats great , enjoy every bit of it !

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww so nice da...keep it up dear...👏

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