Restless Dreams & Torn Seams: Ch 4 & Note pg 14

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26javey

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wow just read the whole thing and man was it awesome. I can't wait for the next part.

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ClaraOswald

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Firstly I just have to say what a great chapter . I just love the Arnav'S sarcastic tone, it's really funny. I really enjoyed Reading this. I can't wait for the next chapter. Finally I just have to say your a great writer.

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

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You're a fabulous writer!

I love the plot...

Khushi eating jalebis and then stuck in Arnavs' room...lol the kids are adorable

The 'sorry I thought you were a towel' bit really cracked me up

And he ripped her dress..eessh...

Anjali walked in on them LOL..and cliff hanger... :( I hope you update soon :)

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497410

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Posted: 14 years ago

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reserved... a lil busy today.. will edit asap! <33

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Haiya! It was very nice! Right from Khushi entering his room for jalebis making a mess answering him back to embarrassment at the last the flow is perfect! Waiting for next update! Plzz add me in the PM list!

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Ah, now what do I say about the update? I loved it <3. Arnav and his sarcastic comments towards her, he just won't let go of his ego. He did feel sorry but did NOT want to say it! I just loved the whole scene, it was funny but SO adorable and Khushi thinking that his t-shit was a towel! 😆

I loove the kids for doing this. 😆 and ahh Anjali caught them! 😳 what a lovely update it was.

Do update the next chapter soon. 😛

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Sanaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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omg love it can't wait to read the 2nd update... loved how thetwo little kids locked tARHiinside Arn av's room.

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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monkeydog18 - lol, thank you! I was hoping that my sense of humour also appealed to others 🤣

anita_21492 - Thanks a lot! Hehe I thought sarcastic Arnav would be funny.

Jojo - Aw thanks, but you're a much better writer than I am! Glad you liked it, and no problem. Your comment was already really sweet, you don't have to make it longer =)

Lily2011 & aminakhan - Thank you so much guys!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Raunika - Thanks so much! Sure, thanks again 🤗

26javey26 - That's really sweet, thank you so much. I'll try to update soon 🤗

priya_luna - Wow thanks a ton! That's really really nice of you to say🤗 will try to update soon (:

Suvi7884 - It means a looot that you would say that. Thank you so much! Haha I hoped people would laugh at that line. Thanks a ton 🤗

Sharmii - take your time :D actually no. go enjoy your birthday and then if you have time come back and comment (:

cindrella - Thank you so much! Sure!

MonayaKiDeewani - You know, I saw your previous comment too & was going to reply but I guess I just got busy but I really want to say that I love reading your comments. You're always so sweet <3 Thank you so much 🤗 Really appreciate it! 🤗

xxsanaaaxx - Thanks a ton! Chapter 2 is on page 5 if you'd like to read it :) Thank you!