ss-bewafa MG part 4!!!!!! discontinued

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prolouge

Maan: I love you
Sameera: I love you too
they were about to hug but Sameera pushes Maan away
Sameera: but i thought you love geet
Maan: WHAT!!!!!! how did you think i am going to love that bhenji nerd. it was just to make
you jealous!!!!
Sameera: oh!!okay thank god i thought you really love her
Maan: no ways now can i get a hug
Sameera: okay and they hug
Maan: i thought i am a kamina, tu mujse badi kamini nikli. here i am giving you sister
names and you don't even care i thought you loved her
Sameera: i always hated her i only stayed nice to her because she is the one who provides
money she works i spend.
Maan somewhere really felt bad for geet but he shrugged it away.
Meanwhile Geet who listened to the whole convo was in tears but she didn't let herself fell
weak, she composed herself and went to face her so called family.
Geet goes to Maan and Sameera and slaps them hard
Maan: how dare you and was about to slap but she hold his wrist
Geet: DON'T EVEN DARE TO TOUCH ME MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA. wah Maan wah kya drama tha but don't
think i am one of those who's going to cry. you messed up with the wrong person Maan!! HELL
WITH YOU AND YOUR LOVE. MAY YOU ROT IN HELL KHURANA.and you my so called little sister, what
did i do to you instead of treating you like my own daughter. i hate you sameera. from now
onwards you are not my sisters and don't even think of coming home. IT'S MINE UNDERSTOOD.
NOW YOU BOTH DIE.and sameera Handa don't worry i am not going to take away the money that's in your
bank already tumhe ek bekari samaj kar mein tumhare mooh par pekh rahi hoon.GOOD BYE.
*********Then Geet made her way to her home, booked a ticket for herself to London and went away*****

Character Sketch

Geet Malhotra: sweet, bubbly girl and a chatter box. but when it comes to work, everybody
is damn scared. she knows where, when and how to behave.
Maan Singh Khurana: Arrogant, rude and a mean person. everybody is scared of him except
his dadi.Same as GHSP.
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Sameera Handa: evil little sister of Geet. very self centered.
Savitri Singh Khurana: sweet and caring lady. loves his grandson alot and wants him to
settle in life.
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rest of the chracters intorduced later in the story.

This is my second ff. so, please tell me how it is. my first ff is Ek Dhuje Ke Saath.
I am one of the members in Arsh_Maaneet team ( Mishti). So, pleaseee reply
and i will try to update the parts quickly.

Luv you all.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting
keep it up !!!!
jst one q if sameera nd geet r sisters
y their surname is diff...????
Edited by kptl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting & different
concept
did she change her name
or are they half sis
do cont soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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intersting concept...do continue soon..n plzz add me to ur pm list...
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love it :)
continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept and nice intro continue soon! :)

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wow interesting & amazing
concept
do cont soonnn
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wow nice start yaar ..continue soon pls
do add me to ur pm list !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really interesting yar...
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys,
Thankyou so much for those who replied and pressed the like button. Thankyou so much. I didn't expect this much of an response. Thankyou sooo muchhh.I will update the parts sooon.

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