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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant ...loved it!!!
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Nice FF.
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OH I LOVE THIS PLEASE
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyyy
luv this FF
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cant wait to see how maan and geet got together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi guys
thank you so much for this many replies. i didn't expect this many replies. I'll try to update asap. thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3
Next day Morning,
Rays of sunlight hit Geet and Maan. Maan stirs a little bit but goes back to sleep again where as Geet wakes up. Geet tries to get up but remembers in what position she is, her cheeks turn to deep cherry colour thinking about what happened last night. She took the night robe and started to go to the washroom but she fell a storng grip on her arm. Her lips broke in to an sweet smile as she knows who stopped from going washroom.
Geet: good morning, mere nautaki pati
Maan: good morning meri moti mumbai express.
Geet:HAWWW!!! apne mujhe moti kaha. abhi dekthi hoon with this she starts tickling maan
Maan: hahahah geet haha please ab bas bhi karo hehehe ok ok im sorry meri ma
Geet: ab yeh huyi na baat. waise agar yaad karo , you were the one that's oogling at me
Maan: Huh
Geet: hamari peheli mulakaat mein
Maan: tab mein chota tha
Geet: Maan wo wala nahi
Maan: tho
Geet: jab me waapas aayi thi London se
Maan: Oh! you were also checking me out , don't think i didn't see that
Geet: really
and they started fighting about who fell in love first and suddenly Geet 's phone rings
Geet: Hello
Pari: maam , Mr. Chopra just informed me that he going to arrive at office in 2 hours for the meeting
Geet: Hah! i forgot. Thanks Pari and i will be there in an while, make sure everything is set.
Pari: ok maam and maam you have the file with you right
Geet: yes i do now get back to work
Pari: ok maam, bye
Geet: Hmmm
Maan: kya hua? is everything ok
Geet: ha everything is ok shokay. have a meeting with Mr.chopra in 2 hrs. so, i will go to the washroom first ok
Maan: ok but where is my morning kiss
geet comes close to maan to kiss him and she bites his lip and runs away to the washroom
Maan: shetan!! and falls in to deep thoughts.
Maan (st): I still remeber our first meeting after you came back
********************Flash back**********************
after many years
Maan: Hey Armaan!!I going to xyz shop to get a new entertainment system. see ya later
Armaan: hey maan r u buying th e entertainment system for you or us.
Maan: obviously all of us as our houses are connected
Armaan: then no need, my personal entertainment system is coming from London
Maan: huh
Armaan: my sister is coming.
Maan ( a little bit tensed): your sister?
Armaan( giving a meaning full look back):yes, geet is coming
Maan: Geet?
Armaan : ya geet, my darling sister
Maan: oh umm i must be going
Armaan: wait up!
Maan: what?
Armaan: it's not your fault
Maan: what do you mean
Armaan: The incident that happened between you and geet, is not your fault. You had to take that step to keep her safe.
Maan gives a sigh: right?
Armaan: it's true Maan
Maan: it's not going to make a difference as she will be hating me at this moment.
Armaan: i am sure she will understand the situation once she gets to know the truth.
Maan gives a sad smile: I hope
with that instead of going shopping he went to his room. He was thinking about Armaan's words and he went in to the flashback on that fateful night.
************** many years ago**************
It was prom night. Maan was really excited and happy as he is going to propose to his love Sameera. He loved Sameera and he liked Geet as his friend but, he acted as geet's boyfriend just to make Sameera jealous and Geet was unaware of the fact. He was going towards the ball room but he stopped in his tracks hearing some noices. He went towards the area and it was Sameera talking to someone on phone.
Sameera: After this night i will be 18 years old. So, i will finally get my hands on Geet's property. Just kill Geet in the prom night today and make sure nobody get to know about. I will surely pay you in my way.
Person: sure Sam! i will kill her and will wait for the payment.
Maan(st): Oh no! Geet is in trouble. I have to tell her with he gets ready to move but the vase beside him breaks.
Sameera quickly turns and spots Maan
Sameera: stop Maan. Where do you think you are going
Maan: i never thought you would stoop this low. I am going inform Geet and police and he goes away from their.
Sameera quickly makes an phone call. She runs behind him and calls out
Sameera: MAAN! stop don't move or else with one phone call you will loose your dear parents.
Maan stopped dead in his tracks.
Sameer: what did you think i will sit mum while you do the action. NEVER.
Maan: what do you want? why r u doing this.
Sameera(lied): it's for our future Maan. Trust me and Geet doesn't deserve to live she made me her slave, not anymore. Maan stop doing this honey and join us.
Maan knows she is lying and he can't even inform police as, his parents lives are at stake. He suddenly spots geet coming towards and makes a plan in his mind.
Maan smiles: okay.
Sameera makes an phone call and cancels the threat. Maan quickly texts police without Sameera noticing but he has to send Geet away from himself and Sameera as there will be more danger to her life. He goes on with the plan. When Geet comes there, Maan quickly says out loud to make her stop in her tracks,
Maan: I love you Sameera
Sameera: I love you too
they were about to hug but Sameera pushes Maan away
Sameera: but i thought you love geet
Maan: WHAT!!!!!! how did you think i am going to love that bhenji nerd. it was just to make you jealous!!!!
Sameera: oh!!okay thank god i thought you really love her
Maan: no ways now can i get a hug
Sameera: okay and they hug
Maan: i thought i am a kamina, tu mujse badi kamini nikli. here i am giving your sister
names and you don't even care i thought you loved her
Sameera: i always hated her i only stayed nice to her because she is the one who provides money she works i spend.
Maan somewhere really felt bad for geet.
Meanwhile Geet who listened to the whole convo was in tears but she didn't let herself fell weak, she composed herself and went to face her so called family.
Geet goes to Maan and Sameera and slaps them hard
Maan: how dare you and was about to slap but she hold his wrist
Geet: DON'T EVEN DARE TO TOUCH ME MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA. wah Maan wah kya drama tha but don't think i am one of those who's going to cry. you messed up with the wrong person Maan!! HELL WITH YOU AND YOUR LOVE. MAY YOU ROT IN HELL KHURANA.and you my so called little sister, what did i do to you instead of treating you like my own daughter. i hate you sameera. from now onwards you are not my sister and don't even think of coming home. IT'S MINE UNDERSTOOD. NOW YOU BOTH DIE.and sameera Handa don't worry i am not going to take away the money that's in your bank already tumhe ek bikari samaj kar mein tumhare mooh par pekh rahi hoon.GOOD BYE.
Then Geet made her way to her home, booked a ticket for herself to London and went away.
***** at the prom hall*****
after Geet went away, Maan pushes Sameera away
********the flash back of incident ends***********
Maan takes out an picture of Geet from the album and strokes.
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Maan: I am sorry Geet, but i had to do this for your safety. I don't know how she is now and how she is going to react by seeing me here. Suddenly he feels an arm on his shoulder. It was Rahul.
Maan trying to smile: Hi Rahul
Rahul: i heard the convo between you and bhai.
Maan stayed silent.
Rahul: bhai was right. It's not your and dekhna, everything will be alright.
Maan: I hope.
********************************** flash back ends***************************************





Edited by smanchik - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi, guys
I am so sorry for this late and short update. My courses started thus, I got a little busy. But, i will try to update faster. Any questions about the ff or request please pm me or reply to the ff. If any concerns please pm me. Thank you for your patience. Hope you like the update.

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