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Nikvi29

@Nikvi29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Hey it's awesome I loved it superb

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Wow! What can I say except that I really loved this update a lot! I read it like 3 times! It was cute to see Piya jealous and possessive over Abhay! 😆 I really liked the little cute arguments Abhiya had! I really want to see more Abhiya moments like these! Precap promises to be interesting as we will finally find out why Piya wants to stay away from Abhay and Prem! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Please continue soon 😊

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sunita satardekar

@sunu123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

hey dear😃awesome update dear👏👏👏...very funny update dear😆😆😆😆😆😆...pia n abhay😆😆😆...they r tooo much😆😆😆😆...tu tu mei mei in conference hall😆😆😆😆...omg i cannot stop laughing...vedh n prem made house like zoo😆😆😆😆😆...poor doof😆😆😆...precap really sounds interresting...plz update soon...n this time pm me yaarhav a nice dayluv usunita

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

hay dat was a very sweet n cute update

i just loved it

u described it so well

abhay-pia-prem-vedh...it was so fun reading abt 4 of then

continue soon

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

hey that was an awesome and very cute update
i m really loving ur story
please add me to ur pm list i m asking u for the second time

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luv_vivian_luv

@luv_vivian_luv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

awsome start yaar...love it...where is pia ...am wondering ...n jeh n pia married omg...plz cont soon

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this is for intro n part 1 ...

Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 14 years ago

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luv_vivian_luv

@luv_vivian_luv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

wow!!! wat a update yaar ...will prem find out that pia is his mum...plz cont soon😊

this is for part 2 ...sorry ...for late replay amm reallyy really buzy when i have time then i come on india forums...i read u r intro n part one n part 2 ...i will catch up soonnn...u r FF is amazing😊

Edited by luv_vivian_luv - 14 years ago

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annie

@abhay4piya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Part 11:
Abhay was writing his diary:
Apne Dil Ki Sun Afwaho Se Kaam Na Le
Mujhe Yaad Rakh Beshak Naam Na Le
Tera Waham Hai K Hum Bhule Hain Tujhe
Meri Koi Aisi Saans Nahi Jo Tera Naam Na Le ...
he closed his diary n put his head on the back of chair..he was thinking something tht vedh interrupted his thoughts..-vedh-papa..prem is troubling me..-abhay-ye prem b na..kabhi b nai sudhre ga.. he got up n went to room but he saw prem sitting in the corner crying..all terrified..n shaking in fear..abhay ran to him..-abhay-kya hua prem?..wht happened..??.. he hugged prem... prem started to cry but was unable to speak..-abhay-prem answer me..wht happened..??..vedh yaha kya hua..??..tell me..!! -vedh-papa..i swear mein ne kuch nai kiya..he was normal before.. -abhay-prem..look at me..premm..! " prem fainted...abhay was calling out his name to make him awake..then abhay picked him up n placed him on the bed..-abhay-vedh..kuch hua kya..?? any fight or something..??.-vedh-no papa..v were only playing ..-abhay-hmmm..ok.. prem opened his eyes..looking at abhay he smiled and felt reliefed..abhay kissed on his forehead..-abhay-kya hua tha tumhe..??..u scared me..! -prem-nothing..-abhay- go to sleep now.. vedh got into bed n abhay turned out the lights.. it was midnight now..abhay wasnt feeling sleepy thinking about pia..he heard prem's voice..papa."..he turned..-abhay-prem?..-prem- mujhe dar lag raha hai..-abhay-vedh hai na.. -prem-itz not tht fear..i saw something..-abhay all tensed -kya dekha tumne..?..-prem-it was all so real..a vision..mein ne ek do ladkyo ko ladte hue dekha..they were fighting..or wo dono mom thi.i mean unki shakal ek hi thi..they were fighting badly..or phir aap wahan aye..n then...?..-abhay-then?..-prem- i dont remember..it was black..or phir un mein se ek aapko apne sath le gayi..n one was left crying n screaming... the one who took u had straight hair...papa..kya ye dream tha ya sach..??..-abhay-errr...dream..of course prem..dream..-prem-aap ne toh kaha tha k vamps future b dekh sakte hain..-ABHAY-no..kuch dekh sakte hain..only whom are very old..-prem-hmm..ok..buhut hi bura tha.. -abhay-hmmm..ye video games ki waja se hua hai..u play all killing games...-prem-no..-abhay-now go prem..so jao..skool b jana hai... prem left leaving abhay confused with all those questions...kya wo maithali or pia thi??..kya prem ki visions sach hain..??..kya hoga..? agar aisa kuch hai toh y didnt i saw it..??..y prem..??..whts happening..??..ye sab kya ho raha hai..??..i cant figure it out...! ..pia..??.maithali? me?..i hv to talk 2 pia..." he called pia to meet him urgently in jungle near the lake..
after a while ago..pia came near the lake..abhay ne mujhe q bulaya..?? or mosam b itna kharab hai..i will never understand him..! " she thought.. abhay..!! she called out.. n out of nowhere abhay came...-abhay-pia..i hv to talk wid u..but not here..-pia-q? -abhay-lets go somewhere else..-pia-ok.?.. abhay took her to the deepest part of jungle..-abhay-pia...tum mujh se pyar karti ho..?..do u love me..??.. (placing his hands on her arms..) -pia-..yes..!..i mean no..!!. -abhay-ur tongue slipped pia..tum mujh se pyar karti ho..m i r8..-pia-no abhay..-abhay-tum mujh se pyar karti ho..??..!!!..(loudly) -pia-no i dont.. -abhay-tum mujh se pyar karti ho..!!!...-pia- haan mein tum se pyar karti ho..yes..i love u..!!!!!!!!!! " the rain started...-abhay- but tum mujh se q dor rahi..??..y pia..? y? -pia-abhay..plz...mujhe chodo... (trying to free herself from him. but abhay held her more tightly) -abhay-i want answer pia..q tum mujh se or prem se dor rahti ho..?? y u pretend tht u hate me n prem..??..!!!!.. -pia-abhay..plz..dont test my patience..plz..-abhay-pia..tell me..q tum hamare sath nai rehna chahti..?? whts bothering u..? y u ignore us..??..-pia-CUZ I M CURSED...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! M CURSED..!!!!!!!!!! SUNA TUM NE M CURSED..!!!! (thunders) -abhay-wht???... he was all shocked to listen tears rolling down from her (pia) eyes.-pia- mein ek shapit jeev hon..(lol..i dont knw hindi but used it from abhay's dialogues) maithali cursed me...mere accident k peeche b usi ka hath tha..n when she came to knw tht m alive she threatened me to stay away from u n prem...n she cursed..me...!!!.now m a monster abhay..!!!..worst than anything else...-abhay-...wht r u? (trying to b brave..) -pia- m a dreadful beast...a horrible beast...i kill everyone..!!!.. even i can kill any creature like u...or jay..m not predictible..i turn evil at the full moon..i knw u will not love me after this...i cant love u...n prem..mein tum dono k pass nai asakti...i cant...n only maithali can break the curse...!!!!..pia was sobbing...and crying..then she looked at abhay with her teary eyes...abhay came out of his senses...feeling angry..crying..bad..worst..good..willing to kill maithali..he realized pia looking at him..-abhay-tum ne ye socha k i will hate u...how will i..??..how can i..??..u loved me accepting the fact tht m a vampire...so..mein tumse pyar kyon nai kar sakta...??..i knw tum mujhe ya prem ko kabhi hurt nai karogi..u cant even think about it...i always loved u..n i cant hate u..i love u pia.."..pia hugged him..-pia-abhay..i want u to b with me always...-abhay.-forever n ever...plz pia..dont leave me ever..-pia-no abhay..i promise.. and they both went home holding hands n looking into each other's eyes.. a shadow came from behind the bushes...and looked at them with anger...
Precap: abhiya finally together..abhay worries about prem's visions...
hope u liked it n plz comment..

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Hally

@HallyH

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Excellent Yaar FINALLY ABHIYA r 2geva!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! Keep PM-in me darlin!!!!!

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annie

@abhay4piya

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Wow! What can I say except that I really loved this update a lot! I read it like 3 times! It was cute to see Piya jealous and possessive over Abhay! 😆 I really liked the little cute arguments Abhiya had! I really want to see more Abhiya moments like these! Precap promises to be interesting as we will finally find out why Piya wants to stay away from Abhay and Prem! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Please continue soon 😊

😊m vry glad tht u loved it n read three times..awww...!!!😃...shooo shweet..😳
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