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Posted: 14 years ago
Very emotional update! I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update as it sounds super interesting with Abhiya facing each other as rivals in a meeting! I'm sure it will be something to watch out for! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10:
Next Morning,prem woke up..he looked around n saw vedh sleeping but still tears falling from his eyes..prem ran down to the hall and saw abhay who had a luggage in his hand and was talking to doofenshmirtz..abhay turned around n saw prem.he smiled..-abhay-uth gae..champ..-prem- kahan jaa rahe ho aap.?..-abhay-business meeting..-prem-oh..(sadly)...hey..!!.is ko b sath le jao..(pointing at doofenshmirtz.)..he cheats with me..!! -abhay-no he will not..-prem-per wo karta hai..or mujhe fun b nai karne deta..-abhay-but he cares about u..hmm..-prem-hmmm..wo toh hai..aap jao ab papa..-abhay-..really..??..u want me to go..??.-prem-yes..now go.." some khichdi was cooking in his mind..prem pushed abhay out of house..and waved at him..and abhay left..
Pia was also packing her things up and she left the hotel..she got a call from prem..-prem-hello..-pia-hello..-prem-r u free ma..??..-pia-no m not..vedh kesa hai..??..-prem-he's fine..aap yahan nai aa sakti kya..??..-pia-no prem..m out for some work..n take care of vedh..n give him loads of love from me..-prem-wht..??..mere liye kuch nai..not cool..ab vedh superstar n me no superstar..-pia-hmmm...someone jealous..-prem-yes.. he disconnected the phone and went to his room..
pia entered the airport..only an hour was left for her flight..she checked-in and sat at the waiting corner next to a familiar person...abhay was reading a newspaper..his face hidden in the pages..pia sneeked into it n saw abhay..she was like..SHIT!!!!..-pia-tum yahan b aa gaye..??..-abhay-wht u mean by yahan b agya..??..i m here for some work..got it..not for u..!..-pia-oh..!!..mujhe se dor hi rehna.. abhay smiled a bit..he knew tht she still loved him n prem more than anything in her life..he saw it yesterday in her eyes..n her behaviour..the flight arrived..pia leaved by saying:Good byee forever..!!.. pia entered the flight n sat next to window..she was looking out and abhay came there..-abhay-excuse me thts my seat..! (looking at the ticket widout knowing itz pia) pia turned..-pia-tummm..???!!!..-abhay-tumm??..!!! -pia-i knew it k tum mera peecha kar rahe ho..just leave me alone..-abhay-excusee me..!! ye meri seat hai..n u r sitting on it..look it A12.. pia looked at her's n it was A13..she got up and sat next to abhay..-pia-kya musibat hai..!! she said to herself.. abhay smiled..the flight took off...pia was reading newspaper and abhay was trying to flirt with a girl sitting next to him to make pia jealous..-abhay-hi..!! tum buhut khoobsurat ho..ur vry pretty..!!..pia got up from magazine all confused n staring at abhay with anger...her expressions were clear tht she is for sure gonna murder him..abhay seeing pia like this shut his mouth up..the girl was admiring him now.she pulled his cheeks..abhay now was trying to ignore cuz he knew tht he was going to b murdered soon n the murderer was sitting next to him staring angrily..-pia-hey!! you..!! keep ur hands off him..!!!! -girl-wht is he to u?..-pia-he is my husband..!!! got it..foolish girl..n u..(pointing at abhay) tumhari toh mein khabar leti hon..!! the girl became silent n she stopped flirting with abhay..n now abhay was vry happy..atleast she called him her husband..! he thought..the flight landed safely and they both came out..now heading to the resident..abhay was in his car ..he offered pia a lift but she ignored n took a taxi instead..
pia entered the hotel..and abhay also behind her..they came to reception..pia trying to ignore him but he was looking much hotter today tht she couldnt ignore him..-reception-welcome.!.-pia-excuse me..i need room for today..can u plz book one..??..-reception-sorry ma'm there is no room..-pia-wht..??..but..??.-reception-m sorry..-abhay-my room key..!..-reception-yes sir here it is...aap ko kon nai janta sir...-abhay-hmm..he took the keys..n said..madam ko bhi ek room do..now..!!..-reception-sorry but itz difficult sir..-abhay-difficult but not impossible..!! -reception-ok sir i will try.. the reception checked the register but didnt found any room availabe..-recpetion-no sir..m really sorry...excuse me but ma'm aap mr abhay ke sath plzz kuch der room share kar len..jaise hi koi room khali ho ga i will tell u...but plz ma'm can u ?..-pia-errr...-abhay-ok..she doesnt mind ... pia looked at him.. then they both walked to the room...abhay opened the door..n let pia go first..pia sat down on bed placing her luggage in a corner..she took a glance at room..then she went for a shower..abhay was untieing his shoe lace while watching tv...pia came out wearing a light comfortable sleevless shirt n shorts..water tipping from her hair..she opened the window to let some fresh air come in..abhay was looking at her..smiling..pia turned and abhay started to watch tv again..-abhay-make up ho gaya kya..??..-pia-make up..??..wht u mean..??.tumhe pata hai mein make up nai karti..-abhay-whatever.. he went to washroom and took a shower..pia was working with her laptop checking all presentations..abhay came out..wearing jeans only n no shirt...water tipping from his bare body n wet hair covering his forehead..pia's sight fell upon him..omg..!! ye toh din ba din hott hota jaa raha hai..she thought..pia's cell rang which was on the table where abhay was standing n trying to find a shirt..pia came there but she fell from her high heels and abhay caught her..they both were lost in each other's eyes...pia hugged him..n abhay taking full advantage..kissed gently on her neck...just then the door knocked..pia got away from abhay blushing..abhay opened the door..-abhay-yes..??..(picking his left eyebrow up)...the maid started to blush seeing abhay without shirt..-maid-wo..actually..room service...?..pia came rushing from behind...-pia-no thnk u..!! u can leave.. the maid still looking at abhay...-pia-hello..u can leave...go..!!..pia shut the door..and stared at abhay angrily...abhay was all quiet..pia threw a shirt on his face n abhay wore it..he knew pia's anger was now crossing limits n she can blow like a volcano...the clock struck 3..pia looked at clock..n started to hurry as well as abhay..they both got ready n left the room entering the conference room together...They sat on the conference long n wide table filled with laptops n files..-mr gupta-miss pia..ur turn now..."with a weak smile he said..pia got up n started her presentation...everyone in the room looking at her..pia ended the presentation n abhay got up to deliver his..he explained n presented everything..the heads were vry much impressed...pia wanted the contract in any way..-pia-excuse me,mr raichand..but doesnt that cement costs high..??.-abhay-err..nope..-pia-yes..itz vry much high..or ye model..i hv seen it before...itz old..mr raichand..-abhay-oh ya..!! so,tumhara..model thaka hua hai...all rubbish...n the tu tu mein mein began...mr gupta got up n said:silence...>!!!!!!...mr raichand n miss pia..r u out of ur mind..??..ye childish behaviour ...!! enough..!! tum me se kisi ko b ye contract nai mile ga..got it..!! n this contract goes to sharma's...with this everyone left..only abhiya were there...-pia-ye sab tum hari waja se hua hai..-abhay-mein..??..ye tum ne shoro kiya tha..-pia-but u streched it...-abhay-no,i didnt...-pia-yes..-abhay-no -pia-yes -abhay-noo... pia got a plan...she ran to the room n locked it up..-pia-ab dekhti ho kese aye ga abhay ?. abhay who was sitting behind..-kuch kaha tum ne..?..pia turned...her mouth was half opened..-pia-u..!!!..uh..!!..kuch nai ho sakta tumhara.. -abhay-i m impossible... piya sighed n pointed abhay to get off the bed..-abhay-u cant order me like this..i m 200 yrs older than u...-pia-ok baba ji..jao..meri jaan chod do...-abhay-ye room mera hai..not urz..-pia-oh..!! so..?..-abhay-never mind...-pia-tum neeche so ge..-abhay-wht..??..-pia-yes..sunai nai deta kya..?..-abhay-u cant do this..! -pia-yes i can.. she handed him a pillow n a blanket ..abhay lay down on the bed..thinking something while pia fell asleep...it was midnight by now n pia accidently while heavy sleep fell from bed directly on abhay..he opened his eyes..and saw pia's head on his chest n her arms all over his body..her hairs covering his face..abhay smiled..he put his hand on her hair n kissed on them..he slowly got up n picked pia in his arms gently n quietly so tht she wouldnt wake up..he slowly n carefully placed her on the bed and pia's necklace stuck with abhay's black vest..pia was resting like an angel free of all worries while abhay was looking at her...he slowly kissed on her forehead n removed the locket from his vest..then he went down again ..
the morning started with the hustle bustle..pia was already awoke while abhay was still sleeping...pia was paniking..oh no..!! v r gonna b late..!! she kept on saying..then she went close to abhay and started to wake him up by shaking just like prem..abhay got disturbed -abhay- kya yaar..!! ma beta chen se sone b nai dete...!.. -pia-shut it..!! hum late ho rahe hai..-abhay-koi baat nai...-pia-wht..??..r u mad? -abhay-no,m sleepy.. -pia- abhay utho..!! she started to pull him up...abhay got up yawning n rubbing his eyes..he somehow got ready n they both ran to the airport..luckily the flight was late n so they easily caught the flight n went back..
at home...vedh n prem..had made the house like zoo with toys,video games,snacks all around nd locked doof in washroom...both playing cricket in the house..that chand entered the hall looking all the mess..-chand-prem!! whts going on here..??..preM got serious n went to him making puppy faces -prem-sorry grandpa..! -chand-where is doof..??..-vedh-wo..actually...-chand-i didnt asked u vedh..i m asking prem... chand disliked vedh cuz he was a werewolf n he even didnt wanted to see him..-prem-bathroom mein..-chand-wht.??.. chand ran to the bathroom n unlocked him..-chand-v need to hv a talk prem.. chand took prem to room n got angry on him for locking a loyal servant in bathroom n making the house like a zoo...abhay entered the house with all shock that there was a hurricane named vedh n prem..??..-abhay-vedh..!!! whts this..??...ghar ko kya bana dya hai...n doof..where were u ?.. prem came out of room with chand when he saw abhay he started to cry n hugged him...-prem-papa..!!! -abhay-wht happened prem..??..-prem-grandpa ne mujhe danta cuz i was doing fun...koi mujhe se pyaar nai karta.. -abhay- i love u..-prem-no u dont -abhay-yes i do..-prem-no u dont -abhay-oh plz...tum b mat shoro kar do.. n dad koi important kaam tha kya..?.-chand- i wanted to see how they both were doing.. -abhay-they r good frnds..dont worry.. - vedh - papa..mein aaj prem se jeet gaya game mein..-prem-no..papa..he cheated... abhay winked at vedh -abhay-vedh..q na hum disney land chalen kal..?..-vedh-hmmm..tht would b fun... -prem-mere bina..?..-chand-mein tumhe le jaon ga.. -prem-no..i dont want to go wid u..mera b koi status hai.. abhay lightly banged on his head..-vedh-aapki meeting kesi rahi? -abhay-the best..sab se achi n my fav one... chand got surprised tht abhay was looking vry happy today but without a word he left..abhay hugged prem n vedh...
PRECAP: PIA CRIES OUT THE SECRET...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey wow awesome update dear I loved it.Plz continue.Ohh Abhiya scenes were too gud & romantic.i m eager abt nxt update.Plzz continue😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey...ur ff s amazng...ovd it...so abhiya cm close...d romantic scenes wr awsm...precap ws ntrstng...so pia blurts d secreyt out...waitng 4 dt...cont soon...cn u plz pm me???...lv ya loadzzz...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey..ausum update...loved it...i never come come to know when u update...plz pm me next time...update soon...eagerly waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow awesome update dear
I loved it.
Wat a meeting! Superb
prem n vedh r cho chweet. .
The precap looks intresting. . Eagerly waiting for the secret to be revealed
continue soon
do pm me. .tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks..😊..n m sorry tht i didnt pm any of u..actually i had to leave n i just post the ff n left..next will pm u all..
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Posted: 14 years ago
a good update. waiting to know what made pia separate from her family.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... waiting to know Piya's secret... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!AWESOME UPDATEs..LUVED IT..ABHIYA'S SCENES WERE cute n romantic!!!Drying 2 read d next chapter..UPDATE SOON PLZZZ.

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