It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you all for your lovely comments! I would love to reply to each and everyone of you seperatley but I just dont have the time yet! But I'm sure we'll get to know eachother as this story progresses !
anywho, I'm working on the next part and will update ASAP!
Cheers!
Edited by supriya91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yayyy! :) can't wait :P


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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb start!!!

please add me to your pm list and continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing start! luv hw u hv started da ff off... really cnt wait to read how ArSh should have/would have happened...

looking forward to ur nxt update... do pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing start yaar
loved it
do continue soon
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Hey guys!
Once again a big and heartfelt thank you to all of you for all your lovely comments! Here is the next part! (I didnt quite watch DMG too closely near the end so I dont quite remember where Shilpa was suppose to be going, lol, if I got it wrong please forgive me)
Happy Reading!

Ar: kyon jaa rahi ho?

Shilpa stopped talking and froze, Armaan too was still.

Driver: Bhai saab aap hi samjha di jiye madam ho.

The frustrated driver walked off as well. Now it was just Shilpa and Armaan. She hadn't turned around to look at him. She didn't think she could. As if her heart wasn't beating fast enough, he spoke again.

Ar: Kyon Jaa Rahi ho?

She closed her eyes, hoping that he would go away, hoping that she wouldn't have to face him, and hoping that she wouldn't feel this way. None of what she hoped happened. Armaan walked up closer, she could feel it this time, and he put one hand on her shoulder, she felt a current run through her body. This just wasn't normal.

S: Armaan?main

That was all that escaped her lips. She couldn't even think of what more to say let alone actually talk to him.

Ar: Shilpa?kyon jaa rahi ho

S: kyonki?kyonki?bas jaa rahi hoon

He could sense the frustration in her voice. She pushed his hand off her shoulder and stepped aside. She still hadn't looked at him. She knew that his eyes would melt her will and that was something she couldn't do. One goodbye was all she could handle and she had already done that at the hospital. So why was he here?

S: yahaan kyon aaye ho Armaan?mujhe joh kehna tha maine hospital mein tumse kehe diya

Ar: lekin mujhe jo pooch na tha maine nahin poocha

S: bolo?

Ar: mujhse koi galati hui hai kya?

She let out a sigh, not relief but more of fear. How could she answer that question? How could she tell him what she wanted to? How could she pretend not to care that he was here? How could she tell him that his only mistake was that he was so damn loveable? How could she tell him that the reason she didn't even want to see his face again was because he had let her fall in love with him?

A: Shilpa?I'm sorry, mat jao yaar?please

She couldn't bear it anymore, why was he still pulling at her heart strings. More importantly why was she letting him?

S: Armaan?I'm sorry, lekin mujhe jaana hai, please?aur waise bhi duty hours mein tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho. Ek baar bye bol toh diya tha.

A: Acha? Toh tum meri taraf dekho gi bhi nahin? ?.Bye bol diya toh dosti khatam?dheek hai Dr. Shilpa, ?.bye.

As soon as he said she turned. He had lied, he was still standing there, as gorgeous and as much in pain as ever.

A: pata tha?seedhe seedhe toh tum maan ne nahin waali?

S: Armaan?

She really didn't have much to say so she looked at him with those eyes that literally tore right through him. That inexplicable yet all encompassing feeling was back again and Armaan didn't fight it this time. She however, seemed to be fighting it with every last bone in her body. She picked up her bag and was just about to turn when he got a hold of her hand.

S: chodo?

A: exactly, ab yeh natak chodo

S: main natak kar rahi hoon?

A: aur nahin toh kya, what is this mein jaa rahin hoon nonsense

He took a hold of her suitcase and started walking in the opposite direction. He looked back at her and she was still standing there, firm. She looked straight at him and he at her, he smiled but she didn't return it. She simply shook her head. He knew what that look meant. She was leaving and there was no way he could stop her.

A: please

S: Nahin Armaan?meri Sanjeevani orphanage ko meri zaroorat hai, bahut zaroorat hai

A: aur mujhe nahin hai?

Her heart sank. There was no way, absolutely no way that she could answer that question. So she decided the best course of action would be to stand firm. She walked up to him, took her suitcase back in her hands and looked him straight in the eyes.

S: nahin hai?bilkul bhi nahin hain

Armaan felt the emotion and anger in her answer. At that very moment he remembered what Sid had said to him and tried to find that love in her eyes, and he saw it. He knew what she was feeling he knew what it felt like to lose love, a little too well actually. But even then he tried his best to ignore those feelings and continued to talk.

A: dheek hai?mujhe tumhari zarrorat nahin hai, lekin Sanjeevani ko hai, toh Sanjeevani ke liye waapis chalo

S: Armaan! Main waapis nahin jaa rahi toh matlab nahin jaa rahi. Tumhe jo karna karlo.

Armaan looked at her, eye to eye. Now, more than ever before he could see the pain in her eyes, it was almost identical to his own and at that moment he knew that he could never let someone feel what he had been feeling the last few months. He could never let someone, especially not Shilpa, go through what he had gone through. So he did what his gut said to do.

A: dheek hai?mat chalo.

He literally snatched her suitcase and got s tight grip of her hand and made his way towards the bus.

S: Armaan?Armaan?

He didn't stop rather he pulled her onto the bus, dragged the suitcase with him and placed it underneath her seat after which he pretty much forced her to take her seat. He finally took a deep breath and looked at her.

A: kya kaha tha tumne, sanajeevani orpahanage ko tumhari zaroorat aur mujhe nahin?bye bol diya hai tumne mujhe, jaa rahi ho sab kuch chod ke?toh jao?

S: Armaan?

A: jao shilpa, just go


With that he started to walk towards the door, leaving her seated and confused. Not once did he turn back to look at her, not once did she call him. He stepped out, and kicked whatever he could find. He couldn't believe what had happened neither could he really understand it. Even still he turned around, she was looking at him through the window, and it was the same look that she had when she was leaving Sanjeevani in that taxi. She waved goodbye, and he didn't respond. At that very moment that he remembered an oddly familiar scene with him and Riddhima, when he was leaving Sanjeevani and she was trying to stop him. He remembered how back then he had been aching to walk off that bus and run to Riddhima, he remembered how hard it had been for him to sit there and look at her through the window. He remembered how much he had hoped that she would be on the bus with him. That was it he knew what he had to do.

Slowly and rather calmly he walked towards the bus once again, got inside and went straight to driver. She looked at him, what on earth was he doing, she thought. When he looked at her she instantly looked away. He was walking towards her, why? What would he say now? Would she be able to answer? Just a few steps away now, Armaan could see the nervousness on her face, and he could sense it. He tried to match her gaze but she wouldn't let him. He got to her seat, stood there, and no matter how she tried she couldn't help but look up at him.

A: Hi?.

What the heck was he doing? Didn't they jut go through two emotional goodbyes? Did he really want a third one?

S: Hi?.tum?

She was about to speak when he looked away. He looked around at the seat numbers and when he saw the seat behind her he smiled and settled himself in. Shilpa completely freaked out, and rightly so.

S: Armaan? Tum?yahaan?.WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

A: Dr. Shilpa Sanjeevani Orphanage aap hi ka nahin hai?agar aap wahaan jaa sakti hai toh main bhi jaa sakta hoon

S: par?main?aur tum yahaan?kaise?kyon?

A: kitna bolti hain aap?abhi mujhe aaraam karne di jiye baton ke liye pura rasta pada hai

Dont forget to comment!

-Cheers!
Edited by supriya91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
plzz continue soon

damn that was fast!!!
thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!

i loved it! woww armaaans going with her now..cant wait to see what happens!
Edited by zARqaa_X - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome..i wish DMG would have ended with ARSH together..continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome ff
luvd da start plzz add me 2 ur pm list x

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