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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm story
unique in its concept n presentation

do continue soon
n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated my comment finally on page 85
pls have a look
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant , mind blowing , out standing, beautiful part
loved it
loved each and everything of this update
so true the name of this chapter
adhure
kahaniya
now many aspects of this update make me speechless
don't know what to say about this such bitter cruel so called rule of this society made by some so called self fish person ( or say Male)
I don't know what will be the perfect adjective for DEVDUT cause any adjective will be less to describe his selfishness , cowered nature , clever, cunning, evil, wicked,narrow mind, self obsessed,lust fill, man, who is becoming a danger and who can destroy anything very cleverly and peacefully for their own gain, they will not hesitate for it
this kind of man is black spot for the name of humanity
I was stunned and shocked and speechless to see the work of devdut,
is he crazy or gone completely
hate him may be small word for his deed or sin, he is committing or will commit
here in maan came to know about swarna and her past.
and societies another cruel and bitter truth
I really don't understand y always woman have to face all this, y we will give exam and justifies ourselves
this so called society killing innocent woman also by this
here geet is longing for maan .
and then she faced the another bitter truth but loved to see her standing for another innocent , helpless woman and give ans to so called moral police of this society .
Devdut stunned to see the change in geet
well this is new transformed geet changed completely and maan done it.
but those lusty so called priest came to know about geet's beauty and again .
don't know when this cruel ritual will stop
here geet also come to know about devdut and his selfish & cowered nature

another revelation for geet again in the form of THAMMI
and this is more than shock for her
her fear, to see and understand thammis' story
finally her break down in front of her maan and maan's realization that till now he met those person and came to know about their love story but they didn't meet their destiny here, all r half,
really hope they find it now, not here at least in another world where no cruelty , no differences in the name of anything for love
LOVE is pure thing, it's divine , purity of two souls and y this society so much blind for their norm and rituals and forget all.
love what
Rajlaxmi said to devdut the monster .
Continue soon dear


can't say how much I loved ur comment Rakhi

u gave so much attention in every line of d update... thank u

yaah I feel so sad .. d society was cruel then d society is still cruel with women most of d time

but Y?? ds is not our religion or culture but false myths which has become a tradition

don't know how many incomplete stories has been written in those days.. unknown to all.. thought to write some of them from my imagination

glad that u loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


can't say how much I loved ur comment Rakhi

u gave so much attention in every line of d update... thank u

yaah I feel so sad .. d society was cruel then d society is still cruel with women most of d time

but Y?? ds is not our religion or culture but false myths which has become a tradition

don't know how many incomplete stories has been written in those days.. unknown to all.. thought to write some of them from my imagination

glad that u loved it


I'm glad that u loved my comment
thanks Sayanee
I really loved this update and it's touch my heart ,
this is my one of fav FF
yes cruelty of this society is still there for woman , may be way or process changed but things , something remain same
exactly false myths destroying everything in the name of society and it's tradition
yup and this incomplete stories left me speechless and sply when there is love y,
in love we can touch GOD then y this is
I really loved those stories , touch my heart, beautifully described their emotions, pain
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
update pls
waiting for an update
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls update plspls pls pls pls pls pls pls ps pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chandlerbing1 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
you are online !!! yay !!!
are u gonna update ??
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nish025

awesm ff👏

i just read it at one go..
i must confess i m nt into history n thus wasnt really interested at first bt den whn i started i cudnt stop..
loved d story, d references to ram n krishna, to yudhishtir n d devdasi ritual
fm devdutt's obsessiveness, to maneet.. to rajlakshmi n shantanu
loved it all
continue soon!!


Thanks a lot for ur commet.. keep reading
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaveed

hey

i just read ur story in a go and i really lyk it.

plz add me to ur pm list and pm me whn u updated

and its a humble request plz dnt kill maan and geet plzzz


update soon

love
meena



thanks for ur comment.. will pm u .. keep reading n commenting 😊

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