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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Netz

wowww wonderful part re say... really showing the faces and true nature of society...


thanks .. true face of society well wo to SMJ team n my AK dikha raha hai😳.. I am just portraying the society of the time mentioned in d story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -mimi-

This was just awesome..

I really pity Vrinda... She wanted to be a baiji just to get a life... A baiji.. whose life is hated by the society.. but strange the laws of society made her think that even a baiji's life is better..


And the story of Parineeta.. it is said that LOVING MEN ARE WORSHIPING GOD.. HUMAN BODY IS TEMPLE OF GOD.. But they killed a man in name of god.. They think killing a innocent people is not a sin cause they are doing it in name of god.. Geet should have told them another thing to.. "Taking a life is in hands of god.. they are none to do this.. Not Parineeta they will be punished by god for doing the sin of taking a life"


From the very fast Rajlaxmi was a strong character..Geet turned into a strong one.. love how they said u r none to decide.. n d rule is written in the book where the punishment is written...

the common thing between them is they both used to be innocent girls.. but the dark rather say cruel society made them like that.. They lost their beautiful world..


Now about thammi and guruji.. society made their love story unfinished.. and time made it immortal.. none knows their name but they will be known for their love..


Now Devdutt.. I hate this man from the very first. This man is Satan in disguise of a man.. may be he is doing to save a girl but sacrificing twenty girls to be slaughtered by the cruel priests.. no.. it can't be justified even if the reason is love...


Finally coming to Maan and Geet..

I have really nothing to say about them.. hope they overcome all the obstacles of the society.. n their story will be immortal like Radha-Krishna


PS: This is my longest comment till date.. sorry for writing the essay here.. but just couldn't hold back myself..😳







wow thank u for this lovely comment.. "LOVING MEN ARE WORSHIPING GOD.. HUMAN BODY IS TEMPLE OF GOD".. I loved ds line.. so true ... so many time our reformers, great men and our Holy books says d same line but people seems to forget it.. even in today's society one kill another in d name of GOD n Honor.. does they even know what crime they r doing

yes both the girls turned into a stronger character experiencing the society, Geet was safe till date but now she also witnessed the truth her innocence is on stake.. not only Geet n Raj Swarna and Vrinda all r forced with get matured before time

There r so many love stories in ds world .. all the incomplete love stories stay immortal.. remember the song.. hum miley na mile .. hum rahe na rahe.. rahegi sada yaha pyar ki ye dastan

I loved the line u have said about MAANEET here... umm lets see

n I loved ds essay trust me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
di..tat was a fantabulous update...

it showed how the desires of each one will vary...

the gal who wants to live a simple life now with her love is a devdasi

and the gal who leads a simple life wants to be a dev dasi...

it showed the different situations of human race and their struggles...

omg...they killed a guy jus cos he wan in love with a devdasi...

tats not done...but can help too...

but i really need maaneet story to be re written ...their destiny to win the cursed fate of lovers of govardhan temple...not like thammi or tat gal...

i really dont want their love to die...

please give a different ending...i know u will definitely give and dev dutt...gosh...he is gonna keep a lot of number of gals life under stake jus for one gal...though its geet...its unethical...

but Rajalaxmi...opened up..am really tensed right now...me really biting nails...

pls update the next part soon...waiting desperatelyy...

loved the update..!!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

faboulus part...

i must say dis ff is also a precious gem ...
like a milestone of ur writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome !!
An extremely beautiful update!!
Ok I dunno where to start from...Vrinda's part was really heart-wrenching!
That little girl who was tied and was kicked aside to spent her life in the darkness want to live he life...Wants to enjoy the colours of life by becoming a Tawaif!! That part pricked my heart where she tries to give a seductive smile to Maan and asks him if she is pretty!! Why are lives of some people so hard..!! Even in my life whenever I see people who strive hard just to exist and not even to Live life..I feel guilty..Many times we don't realize what we have with us until we see people whose lives are even difficult to imagine!!

The other side Geet gets to witness another Incomplete Love story..Both the girls Rajlaxmi and Geet were strong enough to question those people's decisions who blindly believe in rules or rather they wrongly interpret things and destroy people's lives!!

Thammi is no more...This update almost made me teary-eyed ,it was beautifully written!
But this whole update made me melancholic!
Firstly Maan and Geet get to witness these adhoori kahaniyaan while thinking about each other..Maan was imagining his Geetasri ,the music of her paayal and Here Geet was completely lost in Maan's thoughts...they suddenly come out of their thoughts just to face the reality of the lives of people around them!
Secondly this Devdutt is scaring me..What is this Man doing? He is crossing all his limits, he 'Wants' Geetasri at any cost!!The whole update had some hidden thing in it.

Whatever might happen to Maan Geet ...Live or Die ...They'll be together but things are going to get very difficult for them...Devdutt's end is near..He is leading towards his own destruction!!
This part will always be very close to my heart..!!
You have shaped up the story very beautifully!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
sayanee...what have you written and what are you expecting re...you have given us a beautiful update👏.👏..the never ending life of a women who died just imagining she is goona meet her soul which got lost long time back!!!.. how pathetic.😭..i never believed life after death!!!!...and all these women are living a life with death every second.🤢..i had tears when i read these line of yours sayanee..😭...

They are written by destiny only to be left like this. Sare adhure kahaniya, Bhagwan kare wo pure ho aur agar na ho to kabhi khatam na ho [those incomplete stories, wish they become completed, if not then wish they are never finished.]...😲



this is not the fate.. this is called the human's earth!!!!...this is how many has transformed this beautiful earth!!!!!!!!!!wonderful update sayanee...i loved when maan gave that stone to her and made her die peacefully...alas!!! geets position is very very bad..😭...and i cried when that girl asked innocently to man if she loks beautiful..😭...you have written it so nicely sayanee...you could have eloborated the incidences more...please dont make it short., give away all emotions through your writing...i/we can feel it buddy...sincerely i didnt ,miss maaneet in this part at all...thanks sayaneee...👍🏼...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Solllyyy……part 14th mein cmnt nei kia…….kaan pakad lia😔😔

"Geet the way you are blushing now, the sun above my head getting scarlet… Geet I am going to meet Maharaja Madhav Chandra Dev for some days… last night I went to your room to bid good bye… but I was the first time guest of your room and couldn't make the beautiful host sad .. but committed another crime … I'm stealing and taking your choli with me… it still has your fragrance, warmth of your bosom… I will be back there before it lose the scent of your body, before my spot of my carnal love wipe away from there… don't cry for me but wait for me… wait for that night … that night you will be as red as your sindoor with my love before your blush add color in it."

I thought k maan shayed wapas hi na aye…..i was scared 4 this…..n swayam to fir bhi thik hai diii bt swarana mujhe achchi nei lagi…bcz wo bohot hi stylish n smart n urban urban type dikhti hai… (sorry Jodi tomar kharap lege thake)… aap kisi aur ko yeh role de sakte the….

Nd yup I also think that yudhisthir was the worst…n arjun bhi mujhe kuch khas pasand nei hai…..

15th part

🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭 ...nehiii... mujhe pm nei kia aapne...yeh baat sidha mere dill pe lagi 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 mujhe bhull gayi na???

but fir bhi main cmnt karungi...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

😭😭🥺

Aweee I soo hate this "kulin pratha" ….i felt so sad 4 vrinda ….she is so vulnerable in this man rulling socity…..

N mujhe swarna k story padh k bhi bohot dukh hua…

Standing on a putrid civilization they are making temple of love, so that history don't say only fossil of human beings could be find here.

This line is very beautiful dii…I loved it..nd mujhe ek baat kaheni hai……..

"amra jokhon sculpture dekhi tokhon bhabi j ki sundor I na amader itihas bt er pichone lukie thaka kosto-mrityu egulo dekhi na…amra tajmahal dekhe boli aha li bhalobasa bt amra mumtaj er kanna dekhi na…"

Nd devdutt ko shck dia geet ne yeh bada hi achcha laga mereko..

"Love is illicit for the devotees of Shri Krishna? Whose love is famous in whole universe' we remember his love before Omnipotence himself that's why Radha always comes before Krishna.. then how it is sin Devdutt ji?"

N jab bhi radha-krishna k baat ate hai mere mann mein sirf ek hi naam gunjte hai --------------------------

U know kaunsa name…don't u diii???

N iss part se mujhe bhi darr lagna shuru ho gaya hai….. bt aapne promise kia tha k aap maaneet ko nei marenge hai na???nd geet ko aap bancha loge na uss bhukhe Priests se??? nd dev se bancha ne k liye maan to hai hi….

N ha mujhe na pahele se hi pata tha k thammi ka love maan ka guru hi tha…

Nd last mein keya dialogue de karr end kia diii….plzzz update soon…..really waiting 4 next update…plzzz ……😍

n mujhe wo song yaad aa raha hai...

"hum rahe na rahe...hum mile ya na mile...rahegi sada yahan...pyarr ki yeh dastan...sunengi yahan jisse...yeh zamin asman..."

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ana90


15th part

😭 ...nehiii... mujhe pm nei kia aapne...yeh baat sidha mere dill pe lagi 😭 mujhe bhull gayi na???

but fir bhi main cmnt karungi...😡

😭😭🥺



I pmed u anu.. check it.. dekh tor pm box full kina.. ami sobai k pm korechi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu_gurti

sayanee...what have you written and what are you expecting re...you have given us a beautiful update👏.👏..the never ending life of a women who died just imagining she is goona meet her soul which got lost long time back!!!.. how pathetic.😭..i never believed life after death!!!!...and all these women are living a life with death every second.🤢..i had tears when i read these line of yours sayanee..😭...


They are written by destiny only to be left like this. Sare adhure kahaniya, Bhagwan kare wo pure ho aur agar na ho to kabhi khatam na ho [those incomplete stories, wish they become completed, if not then wish they are never finished.]...😲



this is not the fate.. this is called the human's earth!!!!...this is how many has transformed this beautiful earth!!!!!!!!!!wonderful update sayanee...i loved when maan gave that stone to her and made her die peacefully...alas!!! geets position is very very bad..😭...and i cried when that girl asked innocently to man if she loks beautiful..😭...you have written it so nicely sayanee...you could have eloborated the incidences more...please dont make it short., give away all emotions through your writing...i/we can feel it buddy...sincerely i didnt ,miss maaneet in this part at all...thanks sayaneee...👍🏼...


Thanks re... I don't wanna leave these stories short but I didn't want to elaborate it more.. these stories r like those scenery we see from train.. we witness them, but they are not our goal, we never stop to observe them .. these men n women who came in Maan's life only enriches his experience but they can't stay long n so these stories can't be longer

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