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Posted: 13 years ago
I read this story in 1 go. Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

This was just awesome..

I really pity Vrinda... She wanted to be a baiji just to get a life... A baiji.. whose life is hated by the society.. but strange the laws of society made her think that even a baiji's life is better..


And the story of Parineeta.. it is said that LOVING MEN ARE WORSHIPING GOD.. HUMAN BODY IS TEMPLE OF GOD.. But they killed a man in name of god.. They think killing a innocent people is not a sin cause they are doing it in name of god.. Geet should have told them another thing to.. "Taking a life is in hands of god.. they are none to do this.. Not Parineeta they will be punished by god for doing the sin of taking a life"


From the very fast Rajlaxmi was a strong character..Geet turned into a strong one.. love how they said u r none to decide.. n d rule is written in the book where the punishment is written...

the common thing between them is they both used to be innocent girls.. but the dark rather say cruel society made them like that.. They lost their beautiful world..


Now about thammi and guruji.. society made their love story unfinished.. and time made it immortal.. none knows their name but they will be known for their love..


Now Devdutt.. I hate this man from the very first. This man is Satan in disguise of a man.. may be he is doing to save a girl but sacrificing twenty girls to be slaughtered by the cruel priests.. no.. it can't be justified even if the reason is love...


Finally coming to Maan and Geet..

I have really nothing to say about them.. hope they overcome all the obstacles of the society.. n their story will be immortal like Radha-Krishna


PS: This is my longest comment till date.. sorry for writing the essay here.. but just couldn't hold back myself..😳






Edited by -mimi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful update

vrinda story is heart-touching

juz becoz she is widow doesnt mean her life is ended

her words shows dat how much she wants to live a life whether for dat she has to become baiji/tawaif

nd abt pariniti story...in todays world also people cant see two love boirds become for d sake of deir so called honour

nd dese lines touch my heart

"'Thammi, Swayam Swarna, Rajlaxmi, Brinda so many story but none has an end, all the incomplete sagas.. may be wont end in a circle ever. They are written by destiny only to be left like this. Sare adhure kahaniya, Bhagwan kare wo pure ho aur agar na ho to kabhi khatam na ho"

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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the whole story in one go..
Thanx Namratha for recommending this..
U r one of the most wonderful writers i hv ever come across..!!
U have taken very much effort in each and every part..
The part i can't forget is those about Yudhishtir... I too always thot in the same line.. But none of them agreed to me.. But when i saw those line about him i was very much excited to c sum1's thot s similar to mine..
The transition from innocent and dependent geet to a very strong character s very awesum..
Each small character has their own story to tell.. Devdutt reminds of selfish person in today's life.. he s against low acts in the society but he when it cums to geet he s making sacrifice others..
Maan's character is the one i adore the most.. first he thot he noes everything about each phase in life.. But geet's innocent questions and remarks made realize its not... they complimented each other very well...
Raj laxmi s also a strong character.. eventhough she s younger than geet her bitter experience made her realize wat real life is..
Very Very beautiful ff sayanee... Pls add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
there are Q which dont have any answers...

there are stories which do not have an ending...they r eternal...

Devdutt has gone mad in his love towards geetasri...he is not realizing what he is doing...he is writing his own destruction...

continue soon..

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update...loved it


thank u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it's so painful.. now it has become a trend called honour killing...
saddest part is that the devdasis could not even revolt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
frnd..how r u???😃
4 Pming me..😛.
4 ur good job..👏👏..
ur updates..⭐️.
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


pic from Mahabalipuram...Chennai ki yaadien taza ho gayi...

I always wonder who carved those stones...it must be so much hard work...

amazing update...

but now I am also scared of Maaneet's love...what will happen when all will come to know about their love and relation...

what will be Devdutt's reaction and action...he is so obsessed with Geet...

thanx for pm...

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