MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd

Sushmacholke

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Hi Sayanee:) The 1st part i read in fb and was waiting for next but i didn't get it :( now read all parts at once :):) its really very different and i am not that into history at all but you indulged me into it :)got to know many things which otherwise would have never gave interest ,amropali was going above my head!!!! no maaneet then brain stop seeping anythng lolz... "Saptapadi" was my favorite part till now ;););) It was hawwwt... but the way you described it was very good especially Maan telling geet or say proposing in the most unique way dialogues were too touching wow just wow ... Dev is not evil till now its just love which made him think otherwise and gud thing even raj met her love shantanu , The love scenes of maaneet are ummm just too good... subtle romantic passionate ...One more part till now its giving me butterfly effect is "Maan kissing Geet passionately telling her you are mine only mine pinning her to wall " (thammi witnessing tis tat part) I imagined Maan in black dhoti recently in women achiever award tandav nritya look just as Maan of "Mrityunjay" LOVED IT PLZ CONTINUE SOON...

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286pearl

@286pearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

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Ana90

@Ana90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

😉haye main to laj mein laal-peele aur na jane keya keya ho gayi...comment kaise doon???☺️☺️
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i know u r angry wid me...hai na???pichle baar cmnt jo nei dia...🤪😕😕😕😕😕😕😕

and iss bar main keya kahoon samajh nei aa raha hai...😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

waise aapne kahan tha k aap aisa koi update nei doge jahan pyarr k siwa sirf s** hoga...
aapne wada nivaya hai dii...thank u sooo much diii...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

main padhte padhte bilkul uss samay mein chali gayi thi nd kho gayi thi MAANEET k pyar mein...u will not believe i had tears in my eyes...there were so much love...and aapne usse xpress kitne achche tarike se kia... hats off to u...

abb ek serious baat...aap hamesha jabb main hostel mein hoti hoon tabb update kyun deti ho???meri mbl ka blnc khatam ho jata hai😡😡😡😡😡😡

waiting for ur next update...keep it up👍🏼👍🏼

❤️ u sooo much...
muahhh
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itna jyada romance hajam nei ho raha hai...😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Netz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

jab main ek boond ishkiyan pad rahi thi tavi samajh gayi thi ki what gorgeous dish s coming up nexttt... 😃😃

did a wonderful job... congo congo...👏👏👏

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Netz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

all d poems generated a true feeling to everything.. dey were sooo perfct that i can proudy announc u lived upto thename of true litreature student...⭐️⭐️⭐️

we used to read vidypati.. remember.. bt d translations r also tooo good...

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Netz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

d amropali epi ws really touching...

u knw i forgot d details of holika myth.. thnx 4 reminding me...

devdutt's realizations and his drm of FALL shwd his char n new light...

go on babes...

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Netz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

u said u cants write luv making properly.. remembr our conversation ovr msg.. dnt wanna repeat dat here.. ahem ahem.. waiting eagerly 4 ur nxt updt... updt sooonnn

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Wow... A beautiful update

Fabulous... Amazing... Awesome
Absolutely have no words to describe this update of yours.

Maneet's mariage was excellent...
The way you described each phera was lovely.

Maan so sweetly asking her permission "Tan se man se ek hona chahta hu". This line was beautiful.

Romance is in the air. Loved their suhag raat. It came out very well.
Their was passion...love ... Care n eveything.
Geet was at first shy but with Maan love she forgot all
Her inhibitions..
Loved the way they both are craving for each other.

Maan gifted deity of Radha-krishna. So sweet.

Song from Jodha Akbar suited the scene.

Continue soon. Will be waiting.
Luved it.
Thanks for pm.

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