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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the whole chapter 👏

At first couldn't decide which part is the best

But later found it...

"Managhumsi -Samvrathaas smu Chiththaani -Aakaram 'Sathvamasi"
If you are the lyrics, I am the music. If you are the music, I am the lyrics.

"Amooham -Amoohamasmi saa -Thvam 'dhyowraham"
If I am the heavenly body, you are the earthly world.

"Pruthivee thvam -Retho' aham -retho' Bhruthvam 'Manohamasmi"
While I am the life source, you are the carrier of the same.

"vak thvam -Saamaa ham asmi -Rukthvam 'Saamaam"
I am the thoughts and you are the speech.

"Anuvradhaa -bhava Pumse' Pumse' -Puthraaya- Veththavai"
While you are the words, I am the meaning.

Sriyai -Puthraaya -Veththavai ehi -Soonrurute"
With your sweet words, come with me to lead a prosperous life

Nothing can be better than this...and you wrote poetry !!!!!!

"Her hair dense as darkness,

Her face rich as the full moon:

Unbelievable contrasts

Couched in a seat of love.

Her eyes rival lotuses.

Seeing that girl today,

My eager heart

Is driven by Desire.

Innocence and beauty

Adore her fair skin

Her gold necklace

Is lightning.

On the twin hills,

Her breasts'"

"All doubts are gone

The birds may sing a million songs,

A million moons may shine now.

When he is close to me,

My heart sings and my body shines.

Lift my dress, beautiful lover,

And fill me with pure gold.

You are my shelter in the rain,

My ferry-boat across the river,

My warm fire in the cold weather,

My southern breeze in the summer heat.

Nobody else I need

Only you."

All my inhibition left me in a flash,

When he robbed me of my clothes,
But his body became my new dress.
Like a bee hovering on a lotus leaf
He was there in my night, on me!

True, the god of love never hesitates!
He is free and determined like a bird
Winging toward the clouds it loves.
Yet I remember the mad tricks he played,
My heart restlessly burning with desire
Was yet filled with fear!

Wonderful...you always used to say you can't write it...now see how brilliantly you have written 👏

Congo my friend 👍🏼



Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Love the whole chapter 👏


At first couldn't decide which part is the best

But later found it...

"Managhumsi -Samvrathaas smu Chiththaani -Aakaram 'Sathvamasi"
If you are the lyrics, I am the music. If you are the music, I am the lyrics.

"Amooham -Amoohamasmi saa -Thvam 'dhyowraham"
If I am the heavenly body, you are the earthly world.

"Pruthivee thvam -Retho' aham -retho' Bhruthvam 'Manohamasmi"
While I am the life source, you are the carrier of the same.

"vak thvam -Saamaa ham asmi -Rukthvam 'Saamaam"
I am the thoughts and you are the speech.

"Anuvradhaa -bhava Pumse' Pumse' -Puthraaya- Veththavai"
While you are the words, I am the meaning.

Sriyai -Puthraaya -Veththavai ehi -Soonrurute"
With your sweet words, come with me to lead a prosperous life

Nothing can be better than this...and you wrote poetry !!!!!!

"Her hair dense as darkness,

Her face rich as the full moon:

Unbelievable contrasts

Couched in a seat of love.

Her eyes rival lotuses.

Seeing that girl today,

My eager heart

Is driven by Desire.

Innocence and beauty

Adore her fair skin

Her gold necklace

Is lightning.

On the twin hills,

Her breasts'"

"All doubts are gone

The birds may sing a million songs,

A million moons may shine now.

When he is close to me,

My heart sings and my body shines.

Lift my dress, beautiful lover,

And fill me with pure gold.

You are my shelter in the rain,

My ferry-boat across the river,

My warm fire in the cold weather,

My southern breeze in the summer heat.

Nobody else I need

Only you."

All my inhibition left me in a flash,

When he robbed me of my clothes,
But his body became my new dress.
Like a bee hovering on a lotus leaf
He was there in my night, on me!

True, the god of love never hesitates!
He is free and determined like a bird
Winging toward the clouds it loves.
Yet I remember the mad tricks he played,
My heart restlessly burning with desire
Was yet filled with fear!

Wonderful...you always used to say you can't write it...now see how brilliantly you have written 👏

Congo my friend 👍🏼




P these poetry r translation of Vidyapati's poetry .. I didn't write it
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Posted: 13 years ago

U knw wht , I m feelng lke tkng u in a bone crushng hug...

so sensual so beautiful... u left me imagining GC n DD in that scene...

n d icing on the cake ws the poetry...

its cz of u tht I cme acrs sm vry beautiful poems n I m rely vry grateful fr tht...

writng a historical luv fiction s nt tht esy... bt u hv bcm my Indian Mills n Boon in ths cse,infct btr, to begin wth...

earlier I use to b annoyd at u.. y u mke us wait so mch bt now I wnt u to mke wait us fr we gt sch beautiful piece...

though it vl b too mch to ask,, as u hv to do so hrd wrk on ur ech writng...bt stl whn r u gng to begin othr stories...
LOVE,
SANJH

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