MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 30

you fanfic is different..

beautiful work...
so diff from the most FFs...thank u for all the effort u put in😃

oh loved it 👏👏👏👏 keep it up sayanee!

awesome part
thanks for the pm

awesome update Saynee...
loved it... very thoughtful update...
conflict or rather difference between love and desire...
very well explained...
loved it dear...
n also, Devdutt's truth slowly unveiling...
loved Rajajlakshmi's part too...
her explanation to Maan was very nice...
true, Maan is not noticing simple things behind his logistics...
Geet's words even left me speechless...
She very well said out her heart, her ache...
very nice part dear...
continue soon... wud be waiting...
thnkx a lot for PM...
love u loads... tk care and keep writing...

awesome

sayee,

it was awsome...a superb answer given by a not so educated...e mediocre girl...a mere devadasi...she was shocked..when she heard his claim...

all that she felt till now, her heart was dying to be with him and in a click he ruined everything in a moment with the dreaded sentence.

oh god...she had the guts to stop him and stand against him...she was so soso true in her words.

his lust gave way to his work.

sayanee ...it was awsome...i loved it.
rajalakshmi's entry was not expected. i felt she came at the right time. i think she guessd that this is what that might happen. she gave him a peice of her head with such calm and compose.

really a classic call for the so educated people who claim themselves to be. he could not distinguish devdutt's character till now also.

omg maan needs to grow first.

jaans/janaki

Originally posted by: JanakiSatish

sayee,

it was awsome...a superb answer given by a not so educated...e mediocre girl...a mere devadasi...she was shocked..when she heard his claim...

all that she felt till now, her heart was dying to be with him and in a click he ruined everything in a moment with the dreaded sentence.

oh god...she had the guts to stop him and stand against him...she was so soso true in her words.

his lust gave way to his work.

sayanee ...it was awsome...i loved it.
rajalakshmi's entry was not expected. i felt she came at the right time. i think she guessd that this is what that might happen. she gave him a peice of her head with such calm and compose.

really a classic call for the so educated people who claim themselves to be. he could not distinguish devdutt's character till now also.

omg maan needs to grow first.

jaans/janaki