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Posted: 13 years ago
liked the strong geet...who made him think what he was doing...

as for the difference in love n desire...u explained it beautifully...like difference between wont n need...

hope maan understands now...

as for dev...he does not even know what geet is doing...n when he will come to know...it will spell doom...

continue soon,...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
OMG that was awesome...
so Devdutt has some dark feelings for Geet...
i liked the way Raj explained to Maan the difference between love and lust...
shes lucky to have a man like that i mean that man of the 7th night...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...
now maan does knows the diff between desire and love...hope he will get back his geet😃
awesome update dear...
waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear it was lovely😊
i loved the way geet handled the desire and love part
pls hope maan saves geet and gains her trust...and understand his feelings love towards her
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb.awesome fantastic.plz add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read your ff in one go. Really awesome. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi my comment on beyond reasoning part:

I like your update regarding Devdutt n thammi very logical n intresting loved you thought n you gripped story nicely on these 2,

but related to Maan reasoning towards God, bit difficult to accept as GOD per questioning nahi ker sakte, if they are doing something there is reason behind it we can can't be explained as if I know RAm as Normal manav ke limit main rah ker insaan ko kaise best tareeke se rahna chahiye ye sikhane liye awtarit hue the to unhone circumstances ke hisaab se eke manav kaise best ker sakta hai wahi kiya he himself suffer with Seeta he knows she innocent n wo to GOD hai to wo to inki leala ka khi part thi.(he did everything uder that limit of normal human being) n Krishna did everything to make Daram ke liye , they were not human being so take them as normal human being n put logic on their work is not good what I feel why they did what they did , isme logic dena GOD ke kaam main interfere karna hoga, they are God so they could do things to put them safe can shown ppl they are God but they were not bother about all this as they are GOD so criticism sadness happiness praising n hating all these thing are not for GOD, so we should not comment on this n put logic tell them why they did this n that they have created us n whole world.
Seeta ji thing so many thing were behind that I think u don't know full story about it , have read full literature about hindu GOD specially vishnu awtaar n why they came to earth ,so know n something more were behind Seetaji thing, can't discuss here ,sorry this is my POV, so I dinit feel good in MAan logic n all agar GOD ke uper bhi logic lagne lage to fir hum insaano main GOD main kya difference, n Ram ji n Krishna ji dono hi to vishnu ji hi hai eke yug main Ram doosre main krishna n har yug wahi to ate kisi na ki good per pus ke liye to fir ye logic mujhe thik nahilaga, different religious main different name hai that it GOD to eke hi hai ,sorry yaar but pls comment ke liye koi logical criticism mat karna will not feel good this is very sensitive topic everybody has their own views regarding GOD
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls update soon scare for Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alovi_21

hi my comment on beyond reasoning part:

I like your update regarding Devdutt n thammi very logical n intresting loved you thought n you gripped story nicely on these 2,

but related to Maan reasoning towards God, bit difficult to accept as GOD per questioning nahi ker sakte, if they are doing something there is reason behind it we can can't be explained as if I know RAm as Normal manav ke limit main rah ker insaan ko kaise best tareeke se rahna chahiye ye sikhane liye awtarit hue the to unhone circumstances ke hisaab se eke manav kaise best ker sakta hai wahi kiya he himself suffer with Seeta he knows she innocent n wo to GOD hai to wo to inki leala ka khi part thi.(he did everything uder that limit of normal human being) n Krishna did everything to make Daram ke liye , they were not human being so take them as normal human being n put logic on their work is not good what I feel why they did what they did , isme logic dena GOD ke kaam main interfere karna hoga, they are God so they could do things to put them safe can shown ppl they are God but they were not bother about all this as they are GOD so criticism sadness happiness praising n hating all these thing are not for GOD, so we should not comment on this n put logic tell them why they did this n that they have created us n whole world.
Seeta ji thing so many thing were behind that I think u don't know full story about it , have read full literature about hindu GOD specially vishnu awtaar n why they came to earth ,so know n something more were behind Seetaji thing, can't discuss here ,sorry this is my POV, so I dinit feel good in MAan logic n all agar GOD ke uper bhi logic lagne lage to fir hum insaano main GOD main kya difference, n Ram ji n Krishna ji dono hi to vishnu ji hi hai eke yug main Ram doosre main krishna n har yug wahi to ate kisi na ki good per pus ke liye to fir ye logic mujhe thik nahilaga, different religious main different name hai that it GOD to eke hi hai ,sorry yaar but pls comment ke liye koi logical criticism mat karna will not feel good this is very sensitive topic everybody has their own views regarding GOD


Thanks for ur comment dear .. loved that u gave so much though to ds story .. n I respect ur pov... I have given my pov... n dear I have read all of them... n not only Ramayan Mahabharat I am reading lots more than that... don't forget in Hindu dharma Veda is d highest thing to believe ... n VED give us the authority to criticize each n everything except Ved so we have that power ... I don't wanna hurt you or criticize u, but if u really wanna know ds religion please don't read only purans and read VEDAs as they came before ... this religion has many thing to offer us, teach us .. just see it with open eyes dear... n God to ek hi hote hai... n jo galtiya kare wo GOD nahi hota hai

I am not criticizing ur pov dear... u r r8 that regarding GOD every body has their own choice... n at the end Geet voiced it r8?? ... par hum kisse God mane ya na mane wo humari hotho me none can feed us that... so MAAN n GEET both were r8 in there views
Edited by sayaneegupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
"She has awakened a monster from his sleep..he was sleeping inside some one great.. his downfall has been started. It will submerge him in the darkness of sin very soon but Geetasri also will sink into it. Save her Maan."...
these lines are brilliantly written.
No doubt you have made yourself a trained writer...
Well a writer must be the God of the characters... Must understand their heart and mind
My friend, without a doubt I can say you have reached that level.👍🏼..

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