MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 32

awesome stry

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(at first 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏4 u k u dint make this sooo cheap(hope u understand wat i mean)...really i dont understand k is love means there must be physical relation soo soon??(though i dint know much about love or being a feminist i m saying that)...maine life mein ek hi bf dekha tha...wahan kuch aisa story tha...so i was scared ki yahan MAANEET k bich mein bhi waisa kuch na ho jaye😕😕😕😕😕😕...

bt thank u diii😊😊😊😊)they are total my POV...

(" I am no artist's imagination Maan, I am a real human of blood and flesh, I have my own existence own emotion own feelings... when you are fantasize me without them I become only a body without a soul... I love you Maan I love you as you are but you dont..."

"Maan I can't answer you, I beg you don't desire me the way you desired me today, your desire has turned into an omnivorous lust and its swallowing your art, your work your meditation. Today I felt how I have became the sole reason of your degradation.. Maan I was ready to be burdened with your imagination through out my whole life.. but I can't bear the fact that I am the reason of your diminution.. I would bear your ignorance rather becoming your lusted object. I can't see you regret my presence"

"I have to leave you Maan... you don't know but I can't imagine my life with out you but will... I will sacrifice you for your sake. You wont be able to recollect you if I stay here. You are confused with your emotions, don't try to reason them try to feel... the day you will understand them I will be back to you. And I will be waiting for that day.")

These are the best lines 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Wowww wat a ans geet gave….its fab dii….aapne kaha tha k geet thora nadan hai lekin yahan to usne bohot samajhdari dikha dia dii….now maan have to understand k geet nadan nei hai….maan to samajhdar the na??to usne aisa kyun kia??😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

nd mujhe achcha laga k at last maan ko dev k ware mein pata chall hi gaya😊😊😊

plzzz diii continue soon

lots of love 4 u diii...

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awesome ff

waiying for update like your FF loved it, mujhe bahut sari cheeje nahi pata thi esa real main tha kya pahle devdashi ke saath ese hota tha

Sorry to comment late dear... as usual, another great update... the difference between the desire and love - u have explained very well... i wish, once this fiction will turn to a novel...and believe me... it will be the bestseller of the time...

historical ff...hmmm...sounds nice...gonna read it...

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

awesome update Saynee...
loved it... very thoughtful update...
conflict or rather difference between love and desire...
very well explained...
loved it dear...
n also, Devdutt's truth slowly unveiling...
loved Rajajlakshmi's part too...
her explanation to Maan was very nice...
true, Maan is not noticing simple things behind his logistics...
Geet's words even left me speechless...
She very well said out her heart, her ache...
very nice part dear...
continue soon... wud be waiting...
thnkx a lot for PM...
love u loads... tk care and keep writing...

Originally posted by: ursrithika

Sorry to comment late dear... as usual, another great update... the difference between the desire and love - u have explained very well... i wish, once this fiction will turn to a novel...and believe me... it will be the bestseller of the time...